So, Lilsie is having problems right now.
Ever head of the song 'Sick Inside.'?
No?
Well- it describes what I'm going through, except for in the song, it only happened once.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eOQRwj4SFRQ
Lyrics:
I'm just a girl who
Kissed a boy who
Is in love with someone else
I didn't mean to
Feel the way I do
It just happened by itself
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
He stopped by my house
We were hanging out
He was wondering were you are
We went walking
We were just talking
Then he kissed me by his car
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
Now I'm stuck with this feeling in the pit of my soul
Guess I should of had a little self control
I knew that it was wrong, I admit it
I wish there was a way that I could make it alright
I really wanna tell you that I put up a fight
But that would be a lie
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
Now I'm sick inside
Yeah, It makes me wanna cry
In the moment it felt so right
I'm just a girl who
Kissed a boy who
Is in love with you
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So- what I want, is to know about those of you who have been the 'other girl.'
Never have been? Write about being cheated on. (Or cheating.)
Never had either of those?
Well- aren't you lucky.
What I'd like:
Poetic Prose,
Free Verse.
What I don't like, but will accept:
Rhyme.
What I simply won't accept:
Erotica.
Entered in more than 2/3 contests? I'll delete without commentary.
Sorry- too young to really be looking at that. You can hint at things without getting too explicit.
Ever head of the song 'Sick Inside.'?
No?
Well- it describes what I'm going through, except for in the song, it only happened once.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eOQRwj4SFRQ
Lyrics:
I'm just a girl who
Kissed a boy who
Is in love with someone else
I didn't mean to
Feel the way I do
It just happened by itself
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
He stopped by my house
We were hanging out
He was wondering were you are
We went walking
We were just talking
Then he kissed me by his car
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
Now I'm stuck with this feeling in the pit of my soul
Guess I should of had a little self control
I knew that it was wrong, I admit it
I wish there was a way that I could make it alright
I really wanna tell you that I put up a fight
But that would be a lie
And now I'm sick inside
Yeah, it makes me wanna cry
I'm so sorry about last night
Yeah, It happened so fast
I wanted it to last
In the moment it felt so right
But now I'm sick inside
Now I'm sick inside
Yeah, It makes me wanna cry
In the moment it felt so right
I'm just a girl who
Kissed a boy who
Is in love with you
----
So- what I want, is to know about those of you who have been the 'other girl.'
Never have been? Write about being cheated on. (Or cheating.)
Never had either of those?
Well- aren't you lucky.
What I'd like:
Poetic Prose,
Free Verse.
What I don't like, but will accept:
Rhyme.
What I simply won't accept:
Erotica.
Entered in more than 2/3 contests? I'll delete without commentary.
Sorry- too young to really be looking at that. You can hint at things without getting too explicit.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 24
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Sometimes, It Is Best To Go Separate Ways!by taylorndncar 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 5:57 PM. In Contest, Life, Love
Silver trophy winner
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by dirtylittleminx 127 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 22 6:28 AM. In adult relationships, contemporary, contest, life, love, pain, personal, thoughts.
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
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so many words left unsaid
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you make my growl
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you are my warmth
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I remembered when we first met, You were after this woman you could not get,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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like a kid in a candy shop
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don't remember me
by the crooked tree,by kedoconnor 34 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 27 5:54 AM. In love and truth• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I tried to forget
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The girl turns from longing and sad to angry. I would like for someone to write a sequel to this, from the boy's point of view. Maybe, if iby Tinselpool 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 23 9:47 PM. In Anger, Lost love, Rain, Tears, Angry, Lost in thought, Sad, Pain, Life, Longing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Why are you so sweet to me honey?
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You say say you love me, but its all a lie.by Falling.Again...Xx 49 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 31 3:12 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How can anyone describe what I wanes felt,--so seemingly long ago. I don,t know how to describe or interpret such things. For I have no phyby roland halloway 33 lines, 55 comments, on Apr 22 10:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you say it's not a big deal but it is to me, just goes to show you're not really sorryby carospellman 62 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 12:22 PM. In friends, cheating, losing a friend, boyfriend, love, pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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im dying, trying to get you off my mindby carospellman 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 28 11:02 PM. In love, lost love, breaking up, heartache, lovesick• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How I remember her well-- She clears the darkness with a path of light. And brightens the most hideous night. There is no compromise- for tby roland halloway 34 lines, 42 comments, on Apr 23 9:44 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you know exactly what to say to keep me hooked one more dayby carospellman 22 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 10:40 PM. In love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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watch the white in my eyes turn to redby carospellman 36 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 11 1:31 AM. In Pain, Love, Thoughts, Drugs, Breaking Up, Heartache, Lovesick• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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hold me close again, please dont let me walk away again
open up my eyes, let me see the truth in your eyesby dreamweaver08 26 lines, on Jul 28 5:49 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Now I really do understand
When I removed the bandageby James Aguilar 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 30 8:05 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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You came home
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Tell me that you love me, Tell me that you care.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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our love cripples me, trips me up and i can't breatheby carospellman 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 10:32 PM. In Love, lost love, breaking up, heartache, lovesick• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It shouldn't be like this-
What is there to sayby roland halloway 30 lines, 27 comments, on May 3 7:06 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
One day---
I saw myselfby roland halloway 55 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 25 10:37 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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