Ok, this is my first competition and I want it to go well, so I am looking for my type of poetry-Dark.
It can be anything to do with:
-Dark
-Pain
-Gory
-Death
-Abuse
-Sad
Anything along those lines.
There are no prompts, and it can be rhyming or freeverse or whatever you want. They need to be good and I will comment on all of them.
Rules:
-No sTiCkY cApS please.
-Label correctly. eg: adult, erotica.
-Make me feel the pain.
Try to include great imagery, and it would be nice if you could comment on other peoples work. (not compulsary)
Other than that have loads of fun...closes on the 20th.
It can be anything to do with:
-Dark
-Pain
-Gory
-Death
-Abuse
-Sad
Anything along those lines.
There are no prompts, and it can be rhyming or freeverse or whatever you want. They need to be good and I will comment on all of them.
Rules:
-No sTiCkY cApS please.
-Label correctly. eg: adult, erotica.
-Make me feel the pain.
Try to include great imagery, and it would be nice if you could comment on other peoples work. (not compulsary)
Other than that have loads of fun...closes on the 20th.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 14
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Ok, my first contest went rather well. It was so popular it became a quicki contest only lasting a few hours before reachiing 45 entrants.
Well done to everyone, read the winners and honarable mentions poems because they did stand out but as usual I wanted to give gold to everyone!
Enjoyed commenting on all your work, well done! Enjoy it!
xyolkox
Contest Winners
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If you cut, I'll cut deeper
If you're in pain, I'm the reaper• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Let's play a game beautiful one
Death and despair shall be our fun• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Dear Diary,
How are doing? Feeling? I hope you are WELL!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [34]
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It starts at my fingers and runs down my toes
A darkness that fills my entire being with shadows• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A thousand silver eyes look
Out of the velevt abyssby xXDemonxKissXx 29 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 25 9:20 PM. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Sad, Lonelyness, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Water drips from a spout,
as blood drips from my veins.by Horrific Hollis 15 lines, 8 comments, on May 26 4:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This creature lurks in the night like no other
it has a howl and a look that makes others shutter.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Residual screams stain the cracks between chipped paint;
Seeping out into the hands of insanity,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Male Perspective;
A mind tattered by the simple thoughts of redemption,by Dysphoria 41 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 6:47 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my twisted soul reaches out for you, Diablo,
darknes rips over my blinded eyes,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A cloud passes over the sun, covering it's shine;
My heart falls into despair,by SuicidalBlackshadow 34 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 5 3:04 PM. In Dark, Emo, Apocolypse, The End, Death, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You have always taken mother for granted,
by Palas Kumar Ray 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 12:25 AM. In Depression, Sadness, Lost love, Thoughts, Life, Love, Family, Self, Escape• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Blood courses through her veins
As Evil spreads His vast wings,by RemovedName 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 12:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
From the crimson sunrise to melting sundown
Pristine moments of mindless thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Watch your steps,
the cracks seem deeper,• Commented on by judge. -
Heavily-inspired from James Whitcomb Riley's (1849-1916) THE RAGGEDY MAN.• Commented on by judge.
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I pried open that wooden gate and peered into the yard
And what I saw ripped through me and tore my heart to shreds• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I once knew this girl named Peaches
She sucked the life out of you like leachesby Leanna-bean 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 28 2:21 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Dark, Pain, Angst, Weird, My life, Depression, Angry, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Limbs hang at broken angles,
as dark sentinels, alien and unrepentant.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The moon's bays move mountains into hiding
As the scent of blood floods the landscape.by St. Anarchy 20 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 23 11:08 AM. In War, armageddon, ragnarok, horror, gothic, abstract, imagery, dark, weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks for the Silver! Congrats to the winners!
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