Enter all your prewrites! Every single one of them! I mean it! 
Ill comment on ALL of my entries; so don't worry about that. If you want to add freshwrites, then do so. But I want LOTS of poems. 
I have to have a few rules though.
-No EROTICA. NOOO. Im 15, but I do not want to read that.
-No bashing other peoples poems. Constructive critisizm is okay.
-Do NOT use the GD word. Period.
-If I have commented on it before. Do not enter it.
Note: Iamonlyhuman. So I have set this down to 1 per person so I can catch up; I have a lot of poems to go through.
So.
What are you waiting for?
Ready.
Set.
Go.
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Livingemptyspaces heeeeeeere:
Anyway- I'm not giving everyone critiques- mostly because my mind can't handle critiquing that many poems.
If I don't give you one- and you'd like it, just tell me.
If I gave you one- and you didn't.. Well. Too bad. ^^'
If I was meantoyouIapolgize.
Ill comment on ALL of my entries; so don't worry about that. If you want to add freshwrites, then do so. But I want LOTS of poems. I have to have a few rules though.
-No EROTICA. NOOO.
Im 15, but I do not want to read that.-No bashing other peoples poems. Constructive critisizm is okay.
-Do NOT use the GD word. Period.
-If I have commented on it before. Do not enter it.
Note: Iamonlyhuman. So I have set this down to 1 per person so I can catch up; I have a lot of poems to go through.
So.
What are you waiting for?
Ready.
Set.
Go.
♥
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Livingemptyspaces heeeeeeere:
Anyway- I'm not giving everyone critiques- mostly because my mind can't handle critiquing that many poems.
If I don't give you one- and you'd like it, just tell me.
If I gave you one- and you didn't.. Well. Too bad. ^^'
If I was meantoyouIapolgize.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 8
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow. This was hard to judge; there were a lot of great poems and I had fun going through them all. Thank-you all for such lovely creations; and to my gold, silver, and bronze winners: thank-you for creating such amazing writes. And, everyone, please check out the finalists. Their poems are absolutely amazing! I wish I had more trophies.
Contest Winners
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Against my legs, I felt his head move and I smiled. There was something about the way he slept that almost reminded me of rainstorms iby xxRainbowDawnxx 111 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 12 12:22 PM. In prose, deep, personal, long
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Your brilliant blue eyes full of intelligence I love.
That megawatt smile always brightens my day.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 30 7:40 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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you gazed listlessly at the point where the sea dissected the afternoon sun.by Candy Morphine 81 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 6 5:44 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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If I were the sun, I'd brighten up the world. I'd crackle with the fire and the lava. When I die, I will be a black hole.by Knight70 9 lines, 25 comments, on Sep 27 2:06 PM 2007. In my son's thoughts, Freewrite, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We are all related
through the waterby xxelephantechoesxx 16 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 27 1:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Somebody told me
That it was alrightby xxelephantechoesxx 29 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 1:21 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
At first glance, when you walked through that door
The door was rich, but you were poorby xxelephantechoesxx 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 2:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you want this so bad
i mean, in a way, it's kind of sadby xxelephantechoesxx 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 2:30 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The fire is crackling in the extended moonlight
it is the bull in a china shop: the destroyerby xxelephantechoesxx 7 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 30 10:59 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She wants to get away,
Far far away.by IDrinkCookies 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 5 4:08 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by bookworm987 18 lines, 10 comments, on May 29 8:47 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The pain you brought upon me,
It's greater than what you see.by What The Zark 13 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 17 9:00 PM. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I miss the taste of your nicotine lips.
Pink and moist.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by bookworm987 14 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 2 6:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How can anyone describe what I wanes felt,--so seemingly long ago. I don,t know how to describe or interpret such things. For I have no phyby roland halloway 33 lines, 55 comments, on Apr 22 10:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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While walking one winters day
Through darkened thunders, curs-en grayby roland halloway 33 lines, 32 comments, on Jun 14 10:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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when one is gone when one is lost• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is what happens when..by SoxxDisastrous 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 5 11:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The snow that is falling
and the slush, so slickby MoonlitRoses 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 11 11:15 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Not understanding all I am.
Perhaps not wanting?by roland halloway 20 lines, 13 comments, on May 12 9:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It shouldn't be like this-
What is there to sayby roland halloway 30 lines, 27 comments, on May 3 7:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A loss so artificially bound
by waterworks and puppy dog eyes;by HopelessDreams 10 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 14 12:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We are but a common H2O molecule.
As hydrogen I surround, dominate.by HopelessDreams 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 5 10:55 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She’s such a beautiful dreamer,
with a deep need for regret.by SoxxDisastrous 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 6 12:01 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
tick tock goes the biological clock
the seed of time in the soil of my mindby IxI 21 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 15 12:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It seemed with you always by my side
Only happiness filled my eyes.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Look at me, Look at me
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We’ve sprung a leak now,
Our boat is going down.by Eddie Ecstasy 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 4 2:57 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shoot(me up's) and Ladders.
by cybilseyes 16 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 6 7:28 PM. In Memories of my hometown, Personal, Life, Noguest
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Don't make a sound
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Sustenance a solidification -
flakes frost, their microscopic endangered speciesby HopelessDreams 6 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 11:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What is she to do Sit her and stick it through?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The bright sun
Saying hello as it risesby SoxxDisastrous 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 5 11:40 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How can one hurt so much and not shed a tear? How can one not forget the past knowing he is here?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by HopelessDreams 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 7:51 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You cast away my darkness
It is replaced with lightby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 26 lines, 9 comments, on May 4 6:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She hates it when her best friends were right...
When people tell you something you shouldn't ignore them...by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 31 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 23 1:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Intelligent brown eyes light his face.
Nasty villians and criminals he will chase.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 14 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 29 2:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If I were Aladdin with his magic lamp
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by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 27 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 17 2:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I love you, but your hatred reflects strongly back on me.
I do everything for you, and yet you don't appreciate it.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 20 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 14 6:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
That girl smiled happily, thinking of her prince.
His beautiful blue eyes full of intelligence.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 20 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 8 9:32 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The morning sun rises as I wake; you're not there.
On the nightstand lay a note, saying you've left me.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 21 lines, 23 comments, on Jun 8 4:47 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So mischievious, and so cunning.
This little bunny is oh so funny.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 18 lines, 55 comments, on Jun 4 7:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A regretful mistake that was almost made
You throw the phone down forcefully onto the floorby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 47 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 8 7:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Those beautiful stars, splayed
throughout our very universe,by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 16 comments, on May 2 9:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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"I'm sorry" has become a non salvageable catch phrase lacking any form of meaning, depth or real sympathy. After all, to be sorry implies dby HopelessDreams 10 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 3 11:50 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the world we now know is already gone
a phantom's cigarette lays down brokenby IxI 25 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 12 12:05 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by HopelessDreams 12 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 1 12:24 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I see my life as it passes me by,
the memories of the past all tooby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 22 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 26 9:45 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Age advanced on me, and took me down.
I've been long due at the finish line, but I didn't win.by HopelessDreams 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 1 7:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Booming thunder, illuminating streaks of lightning
The rain begins to patter on the roof and fall to the groundby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 22 6:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by LunaSilverStars 42 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 4 7:13 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Scary movies were never as scary,
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I don't even bother saying anything
because I know it will never be enoughby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 33 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 26 4:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
His smile and his eyes are all she thinks about
The day she gets to see him excites her greatlyby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 34 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 18 1:38 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Those eyes, that smile, they had me hooked from day one
A handsome boy with tricks up his sleeve that benefit himby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 21 8:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A broken heart, a sad last goodbye, you know what comes next
You watch as his silhouette begins to disappear down the Road ahead of you as his shadow fades slowly away.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 28 7:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
il etait avec son chien
my bones acheby ahenne3 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 1 8:32 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They tried hard to
Teach him to flyby ahenne3 7 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 6 1:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A love so strong, it can hurt anyone who feels it
Having to see everyday go by without anyone specialby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 7 3:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You stare directly ahead, not once averting your attention
There he stands, watching you with a quiet stareby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 30 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 2 4:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How do you
say how youby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 68 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 15 1:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can't believe all those things you made me say
when I'm with you, I act in such a horrible wayby MoonlitRoses 48 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 20 4:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The radiant sun sinks below the horizonby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 16 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 2 7:19 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you are one crazy child...you will get hundreds of poems...have fun judging
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I am crazy. But Im also bored and ihavenolife.
Judging will be hard though.
Thanks.
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i just entered like fifty. haaaaave fun.
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Thanks. lol.
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I think I just sold my soul to you.
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You did.
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Ah!!!! Now I have to find some writes you haven't commented on! And when I do, boy you better get ready to be judging for a looooong time sis! but here ish a
to pass the time =]
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Haha. I kinda made this specially for you; so you could enter your awesome rhymes. YAY COOKIE. But Imma need more then that. xD
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Aw your the best ap sis ever!!! here's a loooot of cookies!!!!
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Haha. Thanks, hun. Now go enter all your poems so I can kill myself. xD Go. Shoo.
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you are defintily a brave soul. Hope you have an extra set of eyes to stare at the screen with
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Im sorry. Your message got lost within all the "system" ones! And I do have another set of eyes. My friend has been so nice as to give me hers. ♥
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sorry i entered a poem that i have in another one of your contests ivory hope :/ I knew I had one in one of yours but didnt know which :/
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Its okay. Thanks for telling me. ^_^
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Oh lordy, you have it out for you too. I'm in the process of judging my own prewrite contest and it's killing me. LoL, good luck. I entered my favourite prewrites
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Haha. This is actually pretty fun once you get past the "you need more imagery, metaphor, punctuation...blahblahblah" .> Most likely not. D:
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No doubt, and I'm thinking, at least half of these are in my prewrites contest too
mines already closed and 8 days overdue though 
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Aww. Im sorry.
Well, Im sure you'll get it done. I believe in you. >o Even though I don't know you. xD But its okay. Causeihearyourpoemsarereallyawesome. =o But thats just what I've heard.
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hehe, I'm trying, but the lack of computer time is hurting this
Who told you those lies?! lol, they're not all that
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Yeah. Well. Idonthavealife. So I have lots of time.
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Oh, I know! We're way crazy for starting these prewrites.
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He probably is saying something.... Something "censored" lol.
Exactly, good on ya
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Thats probably it. xD But he just looks so funny.
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congrat on reading/commenting on so many poems...here's a pair of new glasses for you "catch"
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*catches* xD Thank-you very much. It was actually pretty fun. ^_^
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