Each entry has to be about something sad or depressing, something I wanna be able to relate to. You can read some of mine to understand what I'm looking for, unless you have something on your mind...
~RULEZ~
1.) DoN't WrItE lIkE tHiS
2.) No erotica ( kissing or hugging is allowed )
3.) Nothing funny
4.) Between 15 - 50 lines
5.) Don't bribe me to have you win you'll be DQ'ed
6.) Don't enter poems categorized under Adult or Abuse, I cannot view them.
I want something that will make people feel unhappy, nothing scary
or dark, just emotionly painful...
I will comment on everyones poems as soon as possible.
I made this contest before and I had to end it early, if you were in this contest go ahead and re-enter with the same poem.
~RULEZ~
1.) DoN't WrItE lIkE tHiS
2.) No erotica ( kissing or hugging is allowed )
3.) Nothing funny
4.) Between 15 - 50 lines
5.) Don't bribe me to have you win you'll be DQ'ed
6.) Don't enter poems categorized under Adult or Abuse, I cannot view them.
I want something that will make people feel unhappy, nothing scary
or dark, just emotionly painful...
I will comment on everyones poems as soon as possible.
I made this contest before and I had to end it early, if you were in this contest go ahead and re-enter with the same poem.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 24
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Sorry about the delay in judgement, the winning piece is The Perfect Revenge.
Contest Winners
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If you cut, I'll cut deeper
If you're in pain, I'm the reaper• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The door creaked and you slipped in
Tip-toeing your way through the darkness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5507537, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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it's a brand new end
a wrist to bleed, a neck to bend.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
What is wrong with me?
I'm breaking apart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
My Wrists, They Are But Flesh And Bone,
The Blood Which From My Wrists, It Flows,by SuicidalBlackshadow 46 lines, 8 comments, on May 24 2:51 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [27]
1 - 27 of 27
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Your brilliant blue eyes full of intelligence I love.
That megawatt smile always brightens my day.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 30 7:40 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Words flinging. Hands singing. Bodies shaking.
It was all in the making.by CuteLacie 11 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 4 9:39 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How I remember her well-- She clears the darkness with a path of light. And brightens the most hideous night. There is no compromise- for tby roland halloway 34 lines, 42 comments, on Apr 23 9:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tossed through the tempest of well turned ocean
Peace, inner-sanctum shrouded woven cloth, shell of sanguine bleakness...by Tranquillis-P.T.R. 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 4:07 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Weird, Lost in thought, Longing, Goodbyes, Humanity• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Pretending that I'm happy,
Pretending nothing's wrong.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hush little baby it's alright,
Mommy's and Daddy's sometimes fight.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In your life, in your home, you don’t solicit
You don’t wish, but I come, I pay my visit.by Palas Kumar Ray 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 29 12:40 PM. In Time, Weird, Life, Dark, Depression, Hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ghoulish red eyes staring into my soul,
Looking in and through on this thunderous night,by scarlett07 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 11 2:01 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Nature, Other, Pain, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Summer usually sits so easy
on my fingers. sunshine. breeze. grass -• Commented on by judge. -
For I would not have love, lest love would have me,
Ti's was a day of reckon, an-others love I seek,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Where did my muse go?
Oh yeah, he leftby insidemjsnotebook 22 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 11:08 AM• Commented on by judge. -
This haunting ache that is buried deep inside of me
seems to be always on the surface of my heartby Devilish Temptation 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 9:41 AM. In Pain, Other, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Heartbreak• Commented on by judge. -
Not personal experience but I had to imagine my best friend dying to write this so I hope that all those tears were worth it.• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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I don't like the title of this contest.
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That sucks for you...


