enter up to 40 prewrites, chya.
if you're on my favourites,
i prefer ones i haven't yet commented on.

i'll comment on as many as i can,
and try to judge a week after closure.
rules:
-you canNOT enter just one prewrite; at least two.
-no rhyme
-no adult
-prose/freeverse
by the way,
i'm aware that i'm insane.
if you're emo and cutting,
do not enter a piece about being emo and cutting.
if you're a dr. seuss #2,
just don't enter.
the points WILL go up and feel free to donate; i want this contest to be huge.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 6
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 101, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: i know it's surprising that i'm judging on the same day i made the competition, but i've been reading for 2 hours straight. and it didn't really take as long as i thought, since i've already read at least 100 of them, and a lot were rhyme and didn't get a thorough read, and a lot were haikus and even a few one-liners, so i didn't have that much TO read.
anyways, read the finalists list, they're all fantastic.
(finalists in no order after gold, silver, and bronze)
Contest Winners
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Rylee.
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by ladybug. 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 25 5:43 PM. In Teenage thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by lowercase prelude 7 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 21 4:28 PM. In Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The sun doesn't kiss her face-
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by Mister Mattia 32 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 27 11:58 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Mister Mattia 37 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 24 2:40 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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We sat against the leather seats of your dinky old blue Triumph. The sweat from my skin stuck my thighs to the warm leather as I held you in my arms. You offered me the popcorn. The same type you get at the movie's. Even withby Mister Mattia 13 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 21 11:34 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You tip-toe around the golden room,
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i. And when he stripped down, she saw her dreams fall into a million pieces. This was not what she wanted to see. She did not claim this anby Mister Mattia 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 16 7:27 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I opened up the music-box.
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as I walk the road I've walked for so long, I find spaces between what I think I knew and what I acto1.
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Spin me right round, baby, right round.
Like a bottle baby, right round, right round!by xxRainbowDawnxx 46 lines, 7 comments, on May 13 8:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Sanctuary blazoned with scars
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as you exhale i take in your essence
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I would always see you in front of your brother in laws bar.by fairy princess k 50 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 18 7:01 AM. In Personal, Life, Love, Thoughts, Contemporary, Longing, Inspirational, Sensual• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Another night, another day lost• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"revision timing
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they will never know how much her heart rips for them, how much her mind ticks when hes on, how much her body quakes when he says bye justby Fallen-Thumper 12 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 21 2:55 PM. In Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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So mischievious, and so cunning.
This little bunny is oh so funny.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 18 lines, 55 comments, on Jun 4 7:25 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your brilliant blue eyes full of intelligence I love.
That megawatt smile always brightens my day.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 30 7:40 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 15 comments, on May 20 4:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Those beautiful stars, splayed
throughout our very universe,by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 16 comments, on May 2 9:36 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I Have Always Watched Over You,
Because I Always Cared,by SuicidalBlackshadow 30 lines, 22 comments, on May 26 3:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You were my Prince Charming, my white knight
Everything was falling apart, and you put me together againby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 2 5:05 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
High upon this throne we lay
The ruins of old buildings beside usby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 16 lines, 43 comments, on Mar 3 3:55 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I love you, but your hatred reflects strongly back on me.
I do everything for you, and yet you don't appreciate it.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 20 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 14 6:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by SuicidalBlackshadow 96 lines, 13 comments, on May 26 6:47 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The time passing by so quickly you didn't even notice it at all
A terrifying scream echoing through your mind that won't leave you aloneby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 60 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 22 11:37 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The morning sun rises as I wake; you're not there.
On the nightstand lay a note, saying you've left me.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 21 lines, 23 comments, on Jun 8 4:47 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by sharptooth 21 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 11 6:18 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A broken heart, a sad last goodbye, you know what comes next
You watch as his silhouette begins to disappear down the Road ahead of you as his shadow fades slowly away.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 28 7:43 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Seasons Come, And Seasons Go,
Some Full Of Love, Some Full Of Woe,by SuicidalBlackshadow 42 lines, 4 comments, on May 25 3:50 PM. In Nature, Emotions, Everyday Life, Symbolism• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I Walk On Clapping My Hands,
The Crowd Cheers,by SuicidalBlackshadow 49 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 8 2:24 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She hung up the phone and felt a rush inside of her
Could he actually feel the same way that she does?by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 18 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 18 7:04 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your So Close To Me, Yet So Far,
How I Long To Hold Your Waist,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
His smile and his eyes are all she thinks about
The day she gets to see him excites her greatlyby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 34 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 18 1:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by sharptooth 18 lines, 21 comments, on May 15 10:47 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I don't even bother saying anything
because I know it will never be enoughby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 33 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 26 4:25 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You are a villian in the making; one with no soul
Look at the darkness that swirls around you like smokeby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 15 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 30 6:52 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I miss you....my life is in shambles
by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 7 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 16 6:58 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 27 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 17 2:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Those blue eyes they shine.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 14 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 1 10:30 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I love you so
This I knowby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 18 lines, 7 comments, on May 27 4:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 16 lines, 10 comments, on May 19 7:21 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Booming thunder, illuminating streaks of lightning
The rain begins to patter on the roof and fall to the groundby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 22 6:02 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My heart is a broken mess splayed on the floor
I still bleed love for him even though he hurt meby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 21 2:55 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Outside in the moonlight I will wait for you
Till the end of time will you hold my heartby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 32 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 4 5:32 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A broken mess splayed on the floor for you to see.
Agony burst through her; the pain is endless.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The person you
love the mostby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:54 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I Stare Into Her Eyes, She Stares Back Into Mine,
It's Like We're Hypnotised, By Our Love,by SuicidalBlackshadow 24 lines, 17 comments, on May 27 4:50 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She falls to
the ground andby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 59 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 4 2:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He looks at you, and you look at him with a fake smile pasted on your face
Each day that goes by, you think 'that girl' of his is very luby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 10 9:37 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Burning desire goes
through me whenby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 20 4:49 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A Promise Kept, A Promise Made,
With All My Heart I Will Proclaim,by SuicidalBlackshadow 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 23 5:43 PM. In Love, Promise, Personal, Friendship, Relationship• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Each cross represents a fallen soldier,
Every one of them with a life story.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Just an ordinary guy
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Sometimes I feel as if there is no good
in meby lalainya rising 42 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 17 11:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How will rate at the pearly gate
at the end of your past life reviewby judmc 28 lines, on Jul 6 8:06 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Who struck the match, that caused the big bang, that gave us planet earth,
who created Photosynthesis, the prerequisite for life, and allby judmc 9 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 30 8:48 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by Alive4aLiving 47 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 8 7:17 PM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, My own style, Romance, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Alive4aLiving 15 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 1 10:59 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Alive4aLiving 50 lines, 4 comments, on May 14 7:56 AM. In Humanity, Personal., Loss, Lost love, My own style, Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Alive4aLiving 40 lines, 3 comments, on May 7 1:08 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Hope, My own style, Lost in thought, Happiness, Self, mom• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you're craaaaazy, girl.
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i am aware.

haha, you better. just kidding, loveyatoo.
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oh man, i commend you on this great undertaking - 40+ prewrites, whoa.
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I would enter, but it seems you've banished rhyme.
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yes, i really am.
i'm printing them ALLLL off tonight, i'll get around to it eventually.
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Darrnnnn yous. I was about to enter a third when you closed it. XD
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haha, it closed itself really. i may re-open it though,
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wait are you going to reopen?
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have you entered?
if you haven't, i'll re-open.
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You have a lot of reading to do...lol
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how in the world did I win??
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with a beautiful poem. <33
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