I want emotion
My writing has been missing something latley....emotion.
So make me feel. Make me sad. Make me say aww.
Love
Heartbreak
Loss
Death
Abuse
Saddness.
NOT CUTTING.
I dont want to see any of that.
Points may rise, depending on how proud you all make me.
My writing has been missing something latley....emotion.
So make me feel. Make me sad. Make me say aww.
Love
Heartbreak
Loss
Death
Abuse
Saddness.
NOT CUTTING.
I dont want to see any of that.
Points may rise, depending on how proud you all make me.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 8
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 50, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow! you guys.
this was an amazing contest.
I felt so much emotion in these poems.
Congrats. on the winnres.
Contest Winners
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i just want something real.
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He grabbed my hand to wake me up,
Just before his death.by Deutschschreiber 112 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 28 8:26 PM. In Pain, Sad, Life
Silver trophy winner
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Truth: When I was seven, I wanted to be an astronaut like some girls want to be a faerie, because I believed then I could give the sky an ultimatum. Sink it's carousel gravity to my phantom limbs, or I'd slow dance my way to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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My eyes grow porcelain shards and cerulean crevices as your lightening shock reactions on all I am is starting to sink in.
by Writing0Freedom 79 lines, 17 comments, on May 9 8:54 PM. In Pain, Loss of Innocence, Trust issues, loving someone, reckless, Life, Escape
Honorable mention
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You spread your wings, to see what life brings,
Soaring with the best.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [57]
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you left a lot of things behind you.
by deadpixie020 55 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 5 12:30 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Breathing so softly you whisper in my ear,
those three dreadful words I couldn't wait to hear.• Commented on by judge. -
Oh, her eyes did they shine once before the twilight dawn,
oh, her eyes do they bleed when they say “look at me now”• Commented on by judge. -
I'm tired of gritting my teeth.• Commented on by judge.
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Like broken glass,
my life is shattered.by Brand 58 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 26 12:29 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by lowercase prelude 9 lines, 38 comments, on Jun 27 1:29 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart has your name tattoo-ed on it
my eyes cry the tears you invoke• Commented on by judge. -
holding you tight
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That great insidious manipulator
Again has crept into my mind• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She twists and turns, only to wake up caked in sweat.
And he holds her soul in troubled precisionby Mango Memories 21 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 2:47 AM• Commented on by judge. -
by risefromtheashes 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 2:51 AM. In Adult, Love, Personal, separation, jail• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don't worry about anything
we'll find our way together• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Trust and friendship was all she had ever wanted
"Hold me close to your heart," she asked fearfully• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Winters breathe grasps for a grip,
My body stood alone on silent boardwalks,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~by everyone1 70 lines, 62 comments, on Jul 18 4:08 AM
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I'm feeling very empty today
Like life will never be the same• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I Love You Honey, Every Minute Of Every Day,
From The Snow Filled Decembers, To The Spring-Times Of May,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by SuicidalBlackshadow 96 lines, 13 comments, on May 26 6:47 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You wrap your arms around me
and lean in for a kiss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I hold,
In my hand,by forbidden peace 12 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 26 9:06 PM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The too familiar story that grows in strength with ageby stephilou 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 3:32 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I claim that my heart is unbroken,
When I'm being criticizedby CovertEnmity 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 25 10:49 PM. In personal, pain other, personna, sad, thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I'm with you,
eternity is a step awayby RicanPoet 25 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 11 8:14 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Mister Mattia 37 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 24 2:40 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Angel,
Wingless,by Mister Mattia 25 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 3 6:48 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by edit my world. 39 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 12 7:58 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You Know If I Had A Million Dollars
I would give all it completely away• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Never got to cry
Never got to laughby Blue-Rose Beauty 33 lines, 31 comments, on Jun 12 9:17 AM. In Abortion• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by BeachBum1 1 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 7:44 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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They imbed a deep harpoon and take you from your womb!! No one sheds a tear--It,s as if you were never here. They never gave you a chance-by roland halloway 46 lines, 25 comments, on Apr 15 11:21 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As day comes to a close
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I don't believe you can buy
yourself a better day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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