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You're Not Alone...EMOTION!

OK I want you to listen and watch this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhD8WnBQQIw&feature=fvst

It is the song Saosin-You're Not Alone

I want you to listen carefully to the lyrics and pay close attention to the video. Make me cry! The song is very powerful and is a tearjerker and I want to feal that emotion in your poetry! Make me feel like I'm not alone...or write about someone being alone and then finding out there not. Again I would like lots of emotion and visual!!!!
Pay close atention to the lines

"You're not alone
there is more to this I know
You can make it out
You will live to tell"

If possible I would like those lines in your poem.

*******************RULES************************

1)I gladly accept any emo/cutting/rape/abuse poetry a
2)EMOTION IS KEY!!!I NEED TO FEAL THE EMOTION IN YOUR POEM!
3)Try to make me cry
4)STICK TO THE TOPIC!I WANT IT TO BE ABOUT THE SONG!
5)Have Fun

MESSAGE ME IF YOU HAVE QUESTIONS!!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 10
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 70, Bronze: 65
  • Final notes:
    Ok there were some really good entrys and I'm glad you all had the time to enter Congradulations to the winners and I will have a new contest soon The song will be "The Last Night" by Skillet so listen to the song and get ideas Tell others!!! Again thanks for entering!
    -Crystal Vixen Abarai

Contest Winners

  1. Is There More To This Story??
    She sits alone in a room.
    Looking out her window.
    by SuicidexEmoxKitten 52 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 3 11:40 PM. In Contest, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Cutting, suicide
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Survived Through Years Of Tears
    He could have survived
    if he would have opened his eyes
    by stavykm 56 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 4 2:07 PM. In Contest, Pain, Personal, Sad, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. By the Big Tree
    And so she opens her window
    And climbs out
    by earthlover0915 47 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 7 1:26 AM. In Abuse, Hope, Thoughts, Society, Sad, Pain, Contest
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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