i like any type of poetry, so whatever style you feel suites you best!
what i want in this contest is artfully detailed distress. paint me a picture made of words about awful/wonderful things that have happened to you or are happening to you.
i am sorry the points are so low. as soon as i get more, i will raise the points!
remember, i want raw emotions. i will try to comment on each entry, but i can't promise.
pre-writes are allowed-i hate when you can't put in per-writes-.
and there are no rules, the props are what i have already said so there is no need for anything extra in the an.
everything EXCEPT ADULT is allowed. sorry, but sense i am too young, i wouldn't be-able read your entries
good luck poets, write well!
p.s. new stuff is good too! get those creative juices flowin'
what i want in this contest is artfully detailed distress. paint me a picture made of words about awful/wonderful things that have happened to you or are happening to you.
i am sorry the points are so low. as soon as i get more, i will raise the points!
remember, i want raw emotions. i will try to comment on each entry, but i can't promise.
pre-writes are allowed-i hate when you can't put in per-writes-.
and there are no rules, the props are what i have already said so there is no need for anything extra in the an.
everything EXCEPT ADULT is allowed. sorry, but sense i am too young, i wouldn't be-able read your entries
good luck poets, write well!
p.s. new stuff is good too! get those creative juices flowin'
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 17
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 295
- Final notes: some of the entries were easy to delete, but the rest of them were very hard to judge because they were great. i personally thank everyone who put their heart on the page for my contest.
Contest Winners
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The wind whispers through the willow trees
I sit in the shadeby SoManyQuestions 45 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 14 9:22 PM. In storm, nature, thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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Late one night
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The thirteenth year of life
I guess it was okayby Leanna-bean 38 lines, 21 comments, on May 17 8:06 PM 2008. In Angst, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Teen issues, Teenage thinking
Bronze trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
Entries [71]
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-I am writing all of this pain today in an overzealous effort to somehow erase
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by Blue-Rose Beauty 24 lines, 31 comments, on Jun 16 7:26 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel sick and I just want to scream.
I want to just start crying and never stop• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look at him,
Waiting for words.by xXMe17xX 64 lines, 35 comments, on Jun 10 7:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
For a while there I stood knee deep in shit
unclogging sewer drains forby fanniesson 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 4 1:52 PM• Commented on by judge. -
So fragile,
their tiny wings,by Dryad Enya 68 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 24 1:11 PM. In Nature, Escape, Lost in thought, Fantasy, Spiritual, Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have seen so many places,
Both the deserts of Africa,by Dryad Enya 36 lines, 7 comments, on May 31 4:01 AM. In Love, Personal, Death, Family, Goodbyes, Background• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dear Lowercase prelude,
by Dryad Enya 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 26 2:19 PM. In Sad, Teen issues, Goodbyes, War, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I Stare Into Her Eyes, She Stares Back Into Mine,
It's Like We're Hypnotised, By Our Love,by SuicidalBlackshadow 24 lines, 17 comments, on May 27 4:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by SamanthaSam 19 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 4 7:52 AM. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Spiritual, Inspirational, Teen issues, Death
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distinct
the corruptive clarityby intoothandclaw 69 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 24 11:57 PM. In Abstract, Freewrite, Free verse, Metaphor, Life, Thoughts, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
painted wraith-forms
filtering dimly through a trickster haze, as if to tauntby intoothandclaw 10 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 26 4:21 AM. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Philosophy, Visions, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Inspired by quote five:
Caterpillar: Who... are... you?by intoothandclaw 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 9 1:56 AM. In Confusion, Mixed Emotions, Personal, Thoughts, Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She stares out at the ocean of apathy;
watching the numb churning of the waves rolling in,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Standing at the periphery of who I am and who I was before;
Numbs my sense into a dull thud of human stupidity.by EnviousKaleidoscope 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 4 2:50 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Today I felt {wild} and far away
From the husell of the fightby roland halloway 28 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 1 6:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Apart of society ?
Which is not apart of me---by roland halloway 22 lines, 15 comments, on May 3 11:57 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by roland halloway 30 lines, 15 comments, on May 19 8:10 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How can anyone describe what I wanes felt,--so seemingly long ago. I don,t know how to describe or interpret such things. For I have no phyby roland halloway 33 lines, 55 comments, on Apr 22 10:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Another useless endeavor for the small minded, another trick on a wheel of ideology so old, that it still believes that I am of the inferioby Livingemptyspaces 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 2 7:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I Sat Alone, In A Dark Corner,
Wondering Why I Was So Alone,by SuicidalBlackshadow 93 lines, 8 comments, on May 24 11:57 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
cause he's a hero
with a name i cannot remember• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I catch glance of blind eyes,
No one sees the pain I hide,by spartan2996 44 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 5 11:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
No more will I take the strain.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I see you sitting there,
shoulders hunched, eyes closed-by Livingemptyspaces 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 3 8:58 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Its an addiction, but you may not see
how my life is affecting me.by xyzyo 21 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 1 8:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by DinkyDiver 36 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 21 5:02 PM. In Personal, Pain, Angst, Dedication, Loss, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 15 comments, on May 20 4:39 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Paint the stars with my reflection
Mingle the night with my songby Tranquillis-P.T.R. 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 3 10:11 AM. In Hope, Life, Love, Friendship, Romance, Happiness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm feeling very empty today
Like life will never be the same• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How I remember her well-- She clears the darkness with a path of light. And brightens the most hideous night. There is no compromise- for tby roland halloway 34 lines, 42 comments, on Apr 23 9:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your presence lingers in my blood
Every breath I take,by rinzurajan 73 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 8 5:56 AM. In PAIN, SAD, ANGST, LOVE, CONTEST, FREE VERSE• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Woman staring out the darkened window
a shadowy figure against the room,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am an ignored piece of furniture
like that of a ghost with no home,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Mask of no emotions
cover my tear dyed complexion• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know the truth,
I know it all.by lost-angel21 44 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 20 10:06 PM 2008. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Lost in thought, My life, Sadness, Depression, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Well maybe there's another way,
then crying about you everyday.by lost-angel21 68 lines, 4 comments, on May 16 7:35 PM. In Love, Sad, Angst, Death, Sadness, Depression, Lost love, Suicide, Angry, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hey little girl, Why are you so sad?
Its because lifes made me mad.by hellzkitkat420 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 5 8:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm just a youth, I feel more like Euthanasia...by CrashBoomFizzlePop 63 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 8 8:09 PM. In Life, drugs, dark, pain, heartache, sedation, suicide, depression, hopelessness.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The boy didn’t grow since he had become a boy.
His life was not common one like those full of joy.by Palas Kumar Ray 58 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 2:10 PM. In Love, Life, Pain, Sadness, Depression, Longing, Friendship, Self, Background• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Palas Kumar Ray 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 1:59 PM. In Love, Life, Longing, Depression, Sadness, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Friday night, you come to stay,
And in bed we talk as we lay.by darkangel-darksoul 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 6 9:13 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
once again my heart is pouring,
out in tears and blood.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I walk down the street and people always stare
Why look down at me like that?by darkangel-darksoul 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 21 1:19 AM. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We sit and play, mucking around
Then some thing upsetting you have foundby darkangel-darksoul 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 12 9:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your eyes fell upon me for a split second, a seductive smile crept up your lips.
To me you came, heat rose in my cheeks. You grasped my haby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 29 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 13 1:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You poison my mind
Planting little seeds of doubtby quietheather 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 11:27 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
she sits and she stares,
she stares at the space in between them.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
forgiven and forgotten you've torn me apart,
for you have no heart.by Dead-dreams 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 11:56 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
so full of questions
my mind may just burst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my mind races
my heart beats• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i was scared
to enter the room• Commented on by judge.
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