rules
no bashing god or others
and have fun
who ever gets gold must do a prewrite contest and send me a link
enter all of your prewrite's and i mean it i want to make this the biggest contest ever and i swear to comment on all of your poems
no bashing god or others
and have fun
who ever gets gold must do a prewrite contest and send me a link
enter all of your prewrite's and i mean it i want to make this the biggest contest ever and i swear to comment on all of your poems
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 10
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: sorry i could not comment on all needless to say you all are able to go onto the next round
it will be up soon
Contest Winners
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The thunder tolls born and bred
In natural ways above my headby A-muse-in-writer 10 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 27 2:40 AM. In Contest, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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hunny, shut up,
It felt so good to say after hearing it so many times• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
My one true love, my Winter,
A blizzard races, like a sprinter,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
If she knew what she wants,
Why would clear blue crystals fall from her eyes?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [566]
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Your name is Tantalise
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Like a flower’s opening splendour
Or a butterfly landing on one’s palm• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you talk
My heart sings• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My eyes carve an obscene obsidian pathway
Wrapped in burning desires and intention• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He steps forth, his armour shining
Light glimmers and sparklesby A-muse-in-writer 24 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 1 2:13 AM. In Contest, Fantasy, Thoughts, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your eyes don't leave mine as they dig deep in my soul
They're wearing me down, they're begging for controlby Blue-Rose Beauty 13 lines, 36 comments, on Jun 13 6:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Blue-Rose Beauty 30 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 13 3:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Never got to cry
Never got to laughby Blue-Rose Beauty 33 lines, 31 comments, on Jun 12 9:17 AM. In Abortion• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Another promise, another disappointment, James thought as he scanned the football bleachers for his dad. This was his first day as a cheerlby Blue-Rose Beauty 18 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 11 7:39 PM. In Story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You used me, dumped me, never looked back.by Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, 18 comments, on May 16 7:30 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Within a hardened shell of strength
in a hell where she is branded.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Saint George fought all the living dragons
Collected the treasure in wagons• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A wasting disease of the mind claims me;
Bogging me down with its sickening blights.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Words skitter in my vision
as I read line upon line.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It is a funny thing, if you think about it
That as I sit without a word to say• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Caressing me as a lost love,
Holding tight my hand; fearless.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the depths of my heart
I feel your dreadful pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wishing well
You cast a spell• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I gazed upon the blackened sky
To see a shining heaven bright• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She gazed out at winter's waters
Her white wings darkened by sadness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Snow slowly drops to mountain tops
A mist veil, dew crystallizes in frozen jails.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There’s a winter in this chest
Where treasured heart did lie• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sorrow in its silver sheen glamour me;
Blinding my eyes from laughter golden hue.by Night Terrors 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 28 8:36 PM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Silver wings gleam from holy aura
Light of hope, love and faith• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Winged Guardian
Ward my sleep• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When the wind blows
Its icy cold breath• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She listens to the whispers
Of the butterfly's wings• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Star light, star bright
Gleaming like your eyes tonight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Pigtails swinging
Black paint on cheeksby Night Terrors 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 17 12:18 AM. In Girls Vs. Boys• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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God gave us free will,by A-muse-in-writer 43 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 10 9:37 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t know why you went silent
but I hate not knowing.by A-muse-in-writer 24 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 15 9:06 AM. In Pain, Sad, Depression, Lost love, Anger, Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Can they not see me?
I am not hidingby A-muse-in-writer 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 6 10:27 PM. In Contest, Contemporary, Angst, Society, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I hear those whispered words
Every second in my heart• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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He whispered earnestly of his loyalty
"She was nothing, insignificance is her name".• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wind whistles through throat
As gently as a summer breeze.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wait for me I say with a laugh
As you run with smile so sweet• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I smile when I hear you laugh
or when we talk to all hours.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I played the stars and the moon• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Monster lies inside the jail of my empty heart
The acid of my blood tortures the organs• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The grasshopper lurked in the deep grass
And hungered for the young pretty lass• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I gave you my all
Down to the clothes upon this skin• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The forest chopped down, to the ground
Can you hear the dreadful sounds?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I saw a rainbow stretching
across a grey-blue patchy skyby A-muse-in-writer 28 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 18 5:15 AM. In Contest, Hope, Thoughts, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I see the sadness in your eyes
Those diamonds shining brightby A-muse-in-writer 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 13 3:39 AM. In Contest, Life, Love, Friendship, Inspirational, Family• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A moment in time spins out of control
like a spinning top, a crazy blur.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Stuffing from pillows drifted in the air
chocolate smears were everywhere.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Flutterby flies fairly ewll up high
Ouchting wardto the blue blue sky• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
While I walk in my socks
On this blustery rainy day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Soon there will come that special time,
When our wedding bells will be heard to chime,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am turning towards you in helpless delight,
For that look in your eyes is my guiding light• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Forbidden love; it's not that cute; you're deceiving the ones that believe in you to tell the truth. You're living in a lie thinking you'llby Blue-Rose Beauty 39 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 27 3:24 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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White room. Quiet. Tranquil. Peaceful. Chaos. Eyes dancing on all four sides, taking in the silence. Looking around and wondering how I got here. The outside world is shut out, the only thing you see before you is the purityby Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 27 5:34 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Ah, Fake happiness. I'm familiar with it. I fake it every day. You put those real smiles on every day and I put on the mask. The mask of the past. The mask of the past that I want to hide. You can't know, I'm sure you'd wantby Blue-Rose Beauty 2 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 27 5:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When it hurts so bad, why does it feel so good? I keep thinking that looking down at my wrists. Why do I continually put myself in pain? Whby Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 27 6:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I was just swimming onto the ocean when like lightning I was pulled under. I screamed underwater and the water got into my nose and mouth. It tasted salty like my mom's home made french fries. Why am I thinking this? I thoughby Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, on Mar 27 6:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I will never say I love you.
But I'll never put one above you.by Blue-Rose Beauty 15 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 27 6:57 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How Josh makes me smile.
by Blue-Rose Beauty 13 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 27 7:09 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I never knew you'd be gone so soon.
We grew up.by Blue-Rose Beauty 22 lines, 27 comments, on Mar 27 8:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When the wind whispers
It is your name that I hear.by A-muse-in-writer 8 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 28 6:32 AM. In Romance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Stormy eyes breathe passion.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am drowning slowly
in your water coloured eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Listening to a falling rain
Of water in my shower• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Blue-Rose Beauty 29 lines, 27 comments, on Apr 7 10:46 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Lord, you are the mighty and gracious one who lit up all the stars
You are omnipresent and I never wonder where you are• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I grow up a normal life
My father was a carpenter, my mother was a wifeby Blue-Rose Beauty 37 lines, 49 comments, on Apr 15 6:43 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Oh child, you look so distraught
That man just claimed to be your father but I foughtby Blue-Rose Beauty 39 lines, 9 comments, on May 10 3:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Can you hear the water's wisdom?
Melodies whispered to the ear.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
With fragile movements flowers gather
to bathe your face in blushing colours• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I watched you
Dressed all in white• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I stare into the burning flame
of this candle flickering brightby A-muse-in-writer 18 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 16 4:42 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How are you EVER going to comment on all of these?
Lol ah well I'll enter a few anyway. :} -
I didn't enter all of mine. . . I have 136 poems. lol but entered the best of the best because all of mine are the best naturally cause I wrote them lol
just playing but really I did enter my best. 
Thanks for the oppurtunity to shine again with my previous written work. Most contests don't take PW's but who cares when they were written as long as they fit the prompt.
~~Intricate Wordsmith~~
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Oh one more thing- You are VERY brave for doing this
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WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW,
have fun reading.
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