Well I would like you to write me a pretty little poem inspired by my favourite piece of poetry in all time. Please do it justice and credit the author in your a/n.
Its the same concept as the Paramore one. Dont write the SAME exact thing, but do like either an extension or go deeper into it, or I don't know, just do NOT copy the same lines like word for word.
Title: Absolutely Nothing
Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Chops'
because that was the name of his dog
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and a gold star
And his mother hung it on the kitchen door
and read it to his aunts
That was the year Father Tracy
took all the kids to the zoo
And he let them sing on the bus
And his little sister was born
with tiny toenails and no hair
And his mother and father kissed alot
And the girl around the corner sent him a
Valentine signed with a row of X's
and he had to ask his father what the X's meant
And his father always tucked him in bed at night
And was always there to do it.
Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Autumn'
because that was the name of the season
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and asked him to write more clearly
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because of its new paint
And the kids told him
that Father Tracy smoked cigars
And left butts on the pews
And sometimes they would burn holes
That was the year his sister got glasses
with thick lenses and black frames
And the girl around the corner laughed
when he asked her to go see Santa Claus
And the kids told him why
his mother and father kissed alot
And his father never tucked him in bed at night
And his father got mad
when he cried for him to do it.
Once on a paper torn from his notebook
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Innocence: A Question'
because that was the question about his girl
And that's what it was all about
And his professor gave him an A
and a strange steady look
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because he never showed her
That was the year Father Tracy died
And he forgot how the end
of the Apostle's Creed went
And he caught his sister
making out on the back porch
And his mother and father never kissed
or even talked
And the girl around the corner
wore too much makeup
That made him cough when he kissed her
but he kissed her anyway
because that was the thing to do
And at 3am he tucked himself into bed
his father snoring soundly.
That's why on the back of a brown paper bag
he tried another poem
And he called it 'Absolutely Nothing'
Because that's what it was really all about
And he gave himself an A
and a slash on each damned wrist
And he hung it on the bathroom door
because this time he didn't think
he could reach the kitchen.
credit to: Osoanon Nimuss
RULES:
1. no vulgar stuff, I mean really.
2. don't copy anything word for word
Feel freeee to use any form you want, it doesnt have to be like the poem in that sense
Its the same concept as the Paramore one. Dont write the SAME exact thing, but do like either an extension or go deeper into it, or I don't know, just do NOT copy the same lines like word for word.
Title: Absolutely Nothing
Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Chops'
because that was the name of his dog
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and a gold star
And his mother hung it on the kitchen door
and read it to his aunts
That was the year Father Tracy
took all the kids to the zoo
And he let them sing on the bus
And his little sister was born
with tiny toenails and no hair
And his mother and father kissed alot
And the girl around the corner sent him a
Valentine signed with a row of X's
and he had to ask his father what the X's meant
And his father always tucked him in bed at night
And was always there to do it.
Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Autumn'
because that was the name of the season
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and asked him to write more clearly
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because of its new paint
And the kids told him
that Father Tracy smoked cigars
And left butts on the pews
And sometimes they would burn holes
That was the year his sister got glasses
with thick lenses and black frames
And the girl around the corner laughed
when he asked her to go see Santa Claus
And the kids told him why
his mother and father kissed alot
And his father never tucked him in bed at night
And his father got mad
when he cried for him to do it.
Once on a paper torn from his notebook
he wrote a poem
And he called it 'Innocence: A Question'
because that was the question about his girl
And that's what it was all about
And his professor gave him an A
and a strange steady look
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because he never showed her
That was the year Father Tracy died
And he forgot how the end
of the Apostle's Creed went
And he caught his sister
making out on the back porch
And his mother and father never kissed
or even talked
And the girl around the corner
wore too much makeup
That made him cough when he kissed her
but he kissed her anyway
because that was the thing to do
And at 3am he tucked himself into bed
his father snoring soundly.
That's why on the back of a brown paper bag
he tried another poem
And he called it 'Absolutely Nothing'
Because that's what it was really all about
And he gave himself an A
and a slash on each damned wrist
And he hung it on the bathroom door
because this time he didn't think
he could reach the kitchen.
credit to: Osoanon Nimuss
RULES:
1. no vulgar stuff, I mean really.
2. don't copy anything word for word
Feel freeee to use any form you want, it doesnt have to be like the poem in that sense
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 22
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 280
- Final notes: Thank you four for entering! I mean, its not much fun judging four peices, but The two winners were insanely phenomenal! I reccomend you look at their other poems, theyre probably just as amazing. Good job to the other two entries, I apologize they didn't place.
Contest Winners
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Crayon shards
under the tips of her fingernails,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [4]
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My life started so fresh and anew
my eyes a sparkling, river blueby xxelephantechoesxx 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 4:33 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Coaxed by rough hands
I finally allowed myself to surrenderby stef-witt 59 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 29 8:24 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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wow i must say i really really enjoyed that poem, i tried to look up Osoanon Nimuss but says there is no user, would have liked to credit the poet
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I searched his name on Google. This person appears to be an enigma. There's rumors that he really did kill himself, rumors that he's dead, rumors rumors rumors.
If anyone actually has any concrete information on this person, I would be most interested.
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--not a user, he is like this dude that has a poem int he perks of being a wallflower
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Thank you for the silver. Congratulations to all the winners.




