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this link will give you a bit of inspiration!
It's the classic story of forbidden fruit! Some will never dare to taste it, Others look and long and then of course there are those who have been snared by temptation and take a bite!
Are you TEMPTED to enter?
If you dare......
I don't care where you go with this idea of temptation. just make me sigh or make me laugh.
POETRY ONLY.
PREWRITES MUST BE RELEVANT TO TOPIC
please add in your author notes a small description of your poem and how it relates to my topic, unless you think your poem is extremly self explanatory. I've only asked for this because it helps me to see the poem through your eyes.
All entrys will be commented upon, and I will judge carefully and fairly! good luck!
this link will give you a bit of inspiration!
It's the classic story of forbidden fruit! Some will never dare to taste it, Others look and long and then of course there are those who have been snared by temptation and take a bite!
Are you TEMPTED to enter?
If you dare......
I don't care where you go with this idea of temptation. just make me sigh or make me laugh.
POETRY ONLY.
PREWRITES MUST BE RELEVANT TO TOPIC
please add in your author notes a small description of your poem and how it relates to my topic, unless you think your poem is extremly self explanatory. I've only asked for this because it helps me to see the poem through your eyes.
All entrys will be commented upon, and I will judge carefully and fairly! good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 8
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank-you everyone for entering. In the end I decided to close early. I was amazed at the stunning poems I recieved and it was hard to see how you would all rank with the exception of gold. I just loved this take on temptation. please read it if you havn't already and thank-you again to everyone who entered
Contest Winners
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by reckless abandon 29 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 3 2:08 PM. In Thoughts, Personal, Life
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
There are days she spends reflecting
upon her many moments still.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Vibration's fingers traverse my lay lines
perceiving your hills, valleys and peaksby aslanlight 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 3 12:02 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [14]
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Sometimes I go upstairs
to my bedroom lock the doorby fanniesson 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 3 11:39 AM• Commented on by judge. -
the luscious incompetence of your fate,
has nothing more than grim disdain,by Gay-Militant 31 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 1:09 PM• Commented on by judge. -
How I'd love to think
that after your fingersby laurel 12 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 7 8:25 PM 2008. In Longing, Friendship, Teenage thinking, Self• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Window of opportunity brought you to me
and I opened my heart to your running sea• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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sorry i will not add a notes
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thanks!! congrats everyone


