I want to see the world through the eyes of a river.
It can be a brook, creek, or stream.
Let us get creative, it can be something beautiful,
or something sad along the journey.
Put some depth within your words.
Lots of imagery huh

Comment on at-least one other poem in contest.
good luck to all
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 21
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 600, Bronze: 400
- Final notes: I'm sorry it took so long to judge this contest. Am on barrowed time, sorry for the comment's I left. Everything is at a frantic pace for me at the moment, I really enjoyed everyone's work. Peace be with you all.
Contest Winners
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i am not a pugilist
the last punch thrown• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
by amaranthine lover 29 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 8 1:43 PM. In Contest, Abstract, noguest
Silver trophy winner
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Cool rush beneath the blazing sun
rippling of sensations as it warmsby PassionsPromise 24 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 2 5:17 PM. In contest, life, river
Bronze trophy winner
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Entries [17]
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A Rivers journey
I want to see the world through the eyes of a river.by maralisa 12 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 2 5:01 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I don't move around much
I'm a still simple, creekby xxelephantechoesxx 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 2 5:15 PM• Commented on by judge. -
A saddened girl sat alongside me
the sun was just peeking outby nickkiwick 24 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 2 5:20 PM• Commented on by judge. -
In times like this
When the whispering memory of loveby Kingfogger 36 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 2 7:49 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I am weary as I wind endlessly,
through serpentine banks standing free.• Commented on by judge. -
No time to prepare,
I just passed remorse.• Commented on by judge. -
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Sultry aspen,unpretentious,
long, smooth limbsby ten thousand cicadas 30 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 11 10:56 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Retreating she flows, as survive she must
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russet leaves
dissolve the calmby liquidmindforever 163 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 9:51 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Rivers are strange things.
Journeys in the making.by Shibboleth 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 11 10:33 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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a lovely prompt sweet one.
wish you the best with it
love
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Thank you Tori
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