Definition of a broken heart: falling for someone who moved out of the way at the last second.
Ever had someone tell you they missed you, and then, just as you were about to tell them you missed them too, walked away?
All of a sudden, they're gone and you're left feeling so confused. What just happened, you wonder? Why did they leave, was it you, was it them? You want to get over them, but surprisingly (this has never happened before) you can't. You're left dreaming about him, and that's all you have.
Free verse, prose, please. if you decide to disregard what i just said and make it rhyme, it should be impeccable.
tell me you're broken stories, show me the hearts that have pieces missing. let me know i'm not the only one who fell too far, and broke her legs.
rules:
no erotica
no dirty pretty
put your name in your authors notes
please make me feel it.
and make it your absolute best.
thanks.
Ever had someone tell you they missed you, and then, just as you were about to tell them you missed them too, walked away?
All of a sudden, they're gone and you're left feeling so confused. What just happened, you wonder? Why did they leave, was it you, was it them? You want to get over them, but surprisingly (this has never happened before) you can't. You're left dreaming about him, and that's all you have.
Free verse, prose, please. if you decide to disregard what i just said and make it rhyme, it should be impeccable.
tell me you're broken stories, show me the hearts that have pieces missing. let me know i'm not the only one who fell too far, and broke her legs.
rules:
no erotica
no dirty pretty
put your name in your authors notes
please make me feel it.
and make it your absolute best.
thanks.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 30
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thanks a lot for all the wonderful entries! About halfway through this contest I realized i was going to be away for a long time and that i wouldn't have access to a computer, so i apologize for the lack of comments and the wait! Congratulations to the winners!
Contest Winners
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Satin sounds of Unchained Melody
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I need to find a cure for insomnia.
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I know that I’ve always loved you more then you loved me.
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In the quicksand
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Don't tell him how i still love him so
Because i love him enough to just let him go...by Vampireghostrider 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 12 3:37 PM. In Love, once had, but now forgotten by the male party.
Honorable mention
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Bronze trophy winner
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by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 15 comments, on May 20 4:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 27 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 17 2:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I told you that I think we should
just split. I can't help but to miss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm tetering on the egde of the living
and the dead,by Brokentruth93 22 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 30 2:37 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I keep you in my closet
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When you look at yourself
What do you see?by Leanna-bean 24 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 15 2:59 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Lost love, Depression, Longing, Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by claiming to have found some-one
you are buried beneath a structure of expectation• Viewed by judge. -
It has to be a love.
Why do you intrude into my thoughts yet?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He holds my trust
on the paper that burnsby LeadINGYOUBlind 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 2:31 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You left for along time
An i just thought it was meby Suffer-in-silence 21 lines, on Jul 8 8:56 PM• Viewed by judge. -
by Antebellum 17 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 12 12:56 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Ahh... what have I done?
My hopes have gone down and so has the sun• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
standing at that fork in the road
not knowing which way to goby fantome errant 24 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 7 8:20 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
each inch we're separated
stabs my heart once againby fantome errant 50 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 6 9:36 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I loved him, once.
He insisted he loved me more than all• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Every night the clock still misses 11:11, because wishing doesn't change the world.
by Menna 141 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 12 9:43 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Love is a nice feeling you just can not ignore,
when your spine starts to tingle like never before.by judmc 17 lines, 12 comments, on May 29 10:09 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
digging fingernails into dirt
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Is it not sick that I love you so,
and you love me not?by hisxlastxregret 70 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 9 7:36 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Personal, Pain, Heartbreak, Masochisim, Sadistic, Love, Thoughts, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Looking in the mirror
I see her• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Softly traces of you enter my mind
Limitless glimpses of your love• Viewed by judge. -
The chair is green in color, it has a hint of dust, I see a cobweb or maybe even two, it screeches with just a touch, the shadow in the disby HappyDevotion 0 lines, on Jul 12 6:47 PM. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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I'm in love,
i tell my mother.by love-taylor-love 31 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 8 12:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I breathe in deep,
knowing that moment is near.by love-taylor-love 25 lines, 5 comments, on May 25 11:14 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
singing softly to the moon of lilac rose petals carried by the winter breeze,
hidden in leaves of fire and sun.• Viewed by judge. -
My destiny may appear the way i thought it would be but dont let anyone or anything fool youby Sin with a grin 23 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 21 9:11 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Lost love, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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um when are u going to judge theses just wondering
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