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A long, long time ago... I can still remember How that music used to make me smile. And I knew if I had my chance That I could make those people dance And, maybe, theyd be happy for a while.

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But february made me shiver
With every paper Id deliver.
Bad news on the doorstep;
I couldnt take one more step.

I cant remember if I cried
When I read about his widowed bride,
But something touched me deep inside
The day the music died.

So bye-bye, miss american pie.
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
And them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
Singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

Did you write the book of love,
And do you have faith in God above,
If the Bible tells you so?
Do you believe in rock n roll,
Can music save your mortal soul,
And can you teach me how to dance real slow?

Well, I know that youre in love with him
`cause I saw you dancin in the gym.
You both kicked off your shoes.
Man, I dig those rhythm and blues.

I was a lonely teenage broncin buck
With a pink carnation and a pickup truck,
But I knew I was out of luck
The day the music died.

I started singin,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
Them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
And singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

Now for ten years weve been on our own
And moss grows fat on a rollin stone,
But thats not how it used to be.
When the jester sang for the king and queen,
In a coat he borrowed from james dean
And a voice that came from you and me,

Oh, and while the king was looking down,
The jester stole his thorny crown.
The courtroom was adjourned;
No verdict was returned.
And while lennon read a book of marx,
The quartet practiced in the park,
And we sang dirges in the dark
The day the music died.

We were singing,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
Them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
And singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

Helter skelter in a summer swelter.
The birds flew off with a fallout shelter,
Eight miles high and falling fast.
It landed foul on the grass.
The players tried for a forward pass,
With the jester on the sidelines in a cast.

Now the half-time air was sweet perfume
While the sergeants played a marching tune.
We all got up to dance,
Oh, but we never got the chance!
`cause the players tried to take the field;
The marching band refused to yield.
Do you recall what was revealed
The day the music died?

We started singing,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
Them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
And singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

Oh, and there we were all in one place,
A generation lost in space
With no time left to start again.
So come on: jack be nimble, jack be quick!
Jack flash sat on a candlestick
Cause fire is the devils only friend.

Oh, and as I watched him on the stage
My hands were clenched in fists of rage.
No angel born in hell
Could break that satan's spell.
And as the flames climbed high into the night
To light the sacrificial rite,
I saw satan laughing with delight
The day the music died

He was singing,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
Them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
And singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

I met a girl who sang the blues
And I asked her for some happy news,
But she just smiled and turned away.
I went down to the sacred store
Where Id heard the music years before,
But the man there said the music wouldnt play.

And in the streets: the children screamed,
The lovers cried, and the poets dreamed.
But not a word was spoken;
The church bells all were broken.
And the three men I admire most:
The father, son, and the holy ghost,
They caught the last train for the coast
The day the music died.

And they were singing,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
And them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
Singin, "thisll be the day that I die.
"thisll be the day that I die."

They were singing,
"bye-bye, miss american pie."
Drove my chevy to the levee,
But the levee was dry.
Them good old boys were drinkin whiskey and rye
Singin, "thisll be the day that I die."

 

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Don McLean-american pie.

take a line of this (really long) song-

copy and paste it it your author's note,

and let fly your pen.

thank you kindly,

and have a splendid day.

Love jin

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 16
  • Rewards: Gold: 580
  • Final notes:
    One of the things I love about posting music prompts is that we all interpret them in a different way. We grow up listening, and times get seized by the melody, the words.
    I thank you all for entering this contest. I appreciate the thoughtful pieces that struck a chord with me.
    Congratulations winners, and thank you all once again.
    Love,
    jin

Contest Winners

  1. Alone in the lost chambers of your mind
    Hopeless among such violence and hate
    by melphleg 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 3 7:19 PM. In Spiritual, Hope, Love, Personal, Pain, Abuse
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Out in Tucson Arizona, a long time ago
    In County Prison I put on a music show
    by BluesMan 46 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 27 11:23 AM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The Days the music died
    by Antipodi 75 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 27 10:44 AM. In Contemporary, Life, Sad, Society, Dedication, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Soft-Rain
    June 27
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    I love this song where is my muse


    • JinSays gold member
      June 27
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      give her time. it's a loooong song
      how are you love?


  • Daxteriana
    June 27
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    i this song. idk what to write though. i'm probably not going to enter but if i do then it'll be good for me. i'm still probably not entering. sorry.


    • JinSays gold member
      June 27
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      okay, I think we'll make it without you. thanks for thinking about us just the same.
      Love,
      jin


  • TheFlawedOne
    June 27
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    This sounds like a pretty interesting contest. I wish I could come up with something!


  • adsaige
    June 28
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    First time I heard this, brought tears to me eyes.

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