give me something brilliant.
prompt:
"Mondays child is fair of face,
Tuesdays child is full of grace,
Wednesdays child is full of woe,
Thursdays child has far to go,
Fridays child is loving and giving,
Saturdays child works hard for his living,
And the child that is born on the Sabbath day
Is bonny and blithe, and good and gay."
give me something from that.
i prefer prose or freeverse.
but if you enter rhyme, it had better be amazing.
oh, your username like this, please.
a l e x a n d r a .
on your marks,
set,
go.
alexandra, ♥
prompt:
"Mondays child is fair of face,
Tuesdays child is full of grace,
Wednesdays child is full of woe,
Thursdays child has far to go,
Fridays child is loving and giving,
Saturdays child works hard for his living,
And the child that is born on the Sabbath day
Is bonny and blithe, and good and gay."
give me something from that.
i prefer prose or freeverse.
but if you enter rhyme, it had better be amazing.
oh, your username like this, please.
a l e x a n d r a .
on your marks,
set,
go.
alexandra, ♥
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 24
- Rewards: Gold: 1300, Silver: 456, Bronze: 62, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: some brilliant entries :]
thank you.
as for gold and silver, i wish i could have given two golds instead. =]
Contest Winners
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haha, huge rant from that one little line. first attempt at prose, I think. god-awful, but at least it can't get any worse, right?
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I tried to wrench you from the daydream flowers you had inhaled.
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Monday comes,
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Monday and the week begins to swell
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Each day besets the heart with its own pulse,
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so monday's child is a model
mondayby Daniela Violin 116 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 24 1:52 PM. In Life, Society, Sad, Thoughts, Cynical Humor, Epic, NotLeftAlign
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Damn. labels!
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Every one in this world at one time or another has lived through a heart break .Every one has been told what they need to do at times weby storiesuntold 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 24 6:44 PM. In Hope• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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by myriad-dark 7 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 24 5:32 PM. In Dark, Nursery Rhyme, Life, Society, Thoughts, Black Humour• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Whose ‘shoulds’ these are, I think I know
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rhyme, no rhyme? or do you care?
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i prefer prose or freeverse,
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I thought so. I have you on my favorites but since the prompt rhymed I thought I'd ask. I write free verse mostly so I might try.
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awesome :]
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Okay so mine was a total freewrite. I wrote whatever came to me. It's LONG and it started out free-verse and then it turned into rhyme so it's mostly rhyme but it's not cliche.
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cool idea. bookmarked. <3
kinda depressing. I'm monday-born, but hardly fair of face - or of anything else.
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yeah, i love that song/rhyme thingy.
and i'll bet that you're not. seriously <3
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you don't have to look at me every day, so that's easy to say, haha.
but it doesn't matter, 'cause it's never gonna change, right?
I'll try to enter soon.
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pfff, i've never met an ugly poet. :]
and whatever you think, you're what, 11/12? at that age, i looked like a long hair beachball. with bad teeth :]
and i was no way poetic.
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long-haired beachball? interesting imagery.
I'm a whale with a wig and some plastic surgery.
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it's true :]
i found this thing i had done when i had braces, before and after, it was horrendous.
it's alright, reserve if you want =]
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bookmarked. I haven't been writing much lately, but I'll try
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shoot, you closed it. i have a greatt idea for this. i'll just post it as a regular poemmm i guess. :\
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oh, it's open again =]
i'm terrible for closing contests, i just keep on reopening them =]
if you've already written it, i'll allow prewrites. but only for you
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Thank you for the HM.
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Thank you for the HM
I agree with your well chosen top three
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