You fit into me
like a hook into an eye
a fish hook
an open eye
~Margaret Atwood
Sometimes it is the shorter poems that pack the biggest punch.
Give me something breathtaking in 12 lines or less.
I prefer left alignment with simple backgrounds.
Freeverse only, please.
zil
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 30
- Rewards: Gold: 539
- Final notes: wonderful entries. Thank you.
Contest Winners
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by amaranthine lover 30 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 22 11:07 PM. In Contest, Abstract, noguest
Gold trophy winner
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by americanbluegrass 27 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 23 12:05 AM. In Personal, Sad
Bronze trophy winner
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Entries [12]
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by LunaSilverStars 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 22 7:45 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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Your hands like hammersby Annexed Josephine 2 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 22 8:09 PM• Commented on by judge.
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by dirtylittleminx 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 22 7:29 PM. In abuse, adult relationships, angst, contemporary, contest, dark, pain, personal.• Commented on by judge.
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the stretch marks
are busting openby queenof--swords 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 22 8:45 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Tears found freedom
in angsty timesby Dragonbabyx3 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 22 9:09 PM• Commented on by judge. -
sometime last year, someone died in the lakeby acoustical 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 23 8:06 PM. In sometime last year, someone died in the lake• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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Ooh I used this for a prompt
before, it's very inspiring
Hope you get a lot of
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I adore that poem.
Thank you.
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I wish
we could use prewrites.
I've got a great one.
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I cannot pretend to be Margaret Atwood, but I will give this one a try.
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Why thank you for the gold, it is much appreciated!
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My thanks.
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