I must be insane. PREWRITES!

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on July 30
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 280, Bronze: 140, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  holy jeez... i really should have set an entry limit! sorry it took forever for me to judge but i just had a lot of entries!!! sorry i didnt comment on ALL of them, but i was so bored by the end, i couldn't stand myself.
  congrats winners... and we'll be done with it.
  
  Gold - the soul of my lullaby
  Silver - a clumsy little twitch
  Bronze - The Diary of a Manic Depressant: An Autobiography [Coming soon to a theater near you!]
  HM -
  in between realities.
  Teeth pulling at skin
  
  thanks guys!

Contest Winners

1. The Soul Of My Lullaby

   ethonal thoughts
   and alcohol dreams, hold me in

   by Rose Darkest Night 198 lines, 24 comments, on Dec 3 7:56 PM 2006. In Dark, sad, abortion, lullaby twisting
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. A Clumsy Little Twitch

   It's like counting the stars,
   and feeling the sun,

   by Gay-Militant 65 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 2:58 PM
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. The Diary of a Manic Depressant: An Autobiography [Coming soon to a theater near you!]

   Preface [Lily]:
   "I see myself not as a lost girl suffering from an uncontrollable disabling illness, but as a director of the most vivid

   by Samantha Marie 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 15 9:31 PM
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. in between realities.

   by etoile 38 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 8 10:26 PM. In noguest, prose~, vignettes~, kind of dark~, deities~
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Teeth Pulling At Skin

   These feelings
   Define me.

   by rainbows. 53 lines, 10 comments, on May 19 10:19 AM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Other, Grief, Despair
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [83]

• Everything and Nothing and Nonsense

  by Writing0Freedom 201 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 8 11:37 PM

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• turned your back, my turn.

  Panic sounds best when it's real,
  as if I'm some creature who can't

  by Trebor neas 68 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 13 7:31 PM 2006. In Dark

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• Silent Prison

  The bars that hold the light
  and darkness sleep wean

  by kendhal22 6 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 7 2:44 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• graffitist

  by myriad-dark 25 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 6 9:45 PM 2006. In Dark, Adult, Society, Pain, Graffiti

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Devastated desolution

  Devasted by the desolution
  of your human frame.

  by LadyJane13 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 22 9:09 AM. In Angst, Pain, Personal

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• Haunted

  My heart, my mind and my soul
  all belong to you.

  by Maili Knephthan 47 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 1:14 AM. In Contest, Dark, Love, Life, Thoughts, Personal, Pain, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Serial Killer

  Don't show your pain, your guilt
  Cold blooded and lead hearted

  by Tangle 17 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 3 4:18 AM 2003. In Personal, Other, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Somebody Nobody

  by lyricist 96 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 19 3:24 AM. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, Pain, Sad, Life

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• truth Behind the walls

  You seem so comfortable behind your walls but you know your pain is blleding through.
  So you hide behind that forced smile, it's all you'v

  by Fatal-Addiction 26 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 24 1:38 AM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal

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• black hole window

  by teddybare 10 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 4 9:47 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Weird, Loss

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Feast

  by faderman1959 13 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 28 11:37 AM 2008. In Adult, Dark, Horror, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• disaster in time

  chaos basking in its quake
  the chemicals spilling from our factories

  by ichigosama 17 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 4 9:38 AM. In Pain, Personal, Freewrite, Message, Depressed, My own style, Society, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Simple Wishes.

  I want to
  claw my heart out of my chest,

  by Horrific Hollis 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 10 12:59 PM

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• From the Shadows

  The blood flow was numbed, the knife still imbedded
  My inner devil sniggered waiting for the gush

  by shadowraith 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 13 3:31 PM

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• To My Fairy...

  My tender little fairy
  with rose petal wings

  by Heroesrox 46 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 21 12:13 PM

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• Tomorrow Need Not Come

  Leave me to my sorrow my heart it beats alone
  Today is but a pathway if tomorrow dare to come

  by Closetpoet1971 25 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 18 9:25 AM. In Sad, Dark, Fantasy, Weird

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Beast from Beauty Fallen

  An angel grossly twisted,
  a once pure light perversed.

  by Stormi Dae 35 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 15 11:42 AM. In Dark, random, Pain, Sad, Weird

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Eyes of Midnight suffering

  Isolation slumbers behind these eyes
  eyes of midnight suffering ; beautiful are they not ?

  by Rhythm Child 28 lines, 53 comments, on Oct 27 8:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Sadness, Suicide, Depressed, Longing, Family, noguest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• "Come To Me My Love"

  by Maxboy 87 lines, 185 comments, on Oct 6 7:27 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Lost inside

  by Ami 23 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 14 2:24 AM. In Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Depressed, Suicide, Dark, Thoughts, Self

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Stranger Dismayed

  In the distance A stranger sees the smoke.

  by Sean Wins 58 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 7 10:29 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Other, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• that night

  sneek out of my room, noones around
  holding the sharp blade in my hand

  by Erica Carnea 28 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 25 10:37 AM 2008. In abuse, self harm, life, pain, personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Fear The Shadows

  As Daylight melts into night...
  Memories return

  by fangs to blame 22 lines, 11 comments, on May 22 11:17 AM. In dark, pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Crushed

  My dreams have been crushed
  My hopes sent to hell

  by HyperSoccergal8 48 lines, 16 comments, on May 28 2:25 PM. In Life, Pain, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Loss, Depression, Escape, Self, Depressed, Hate

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Cut Me Open

  Take the knife and slit my wrists
  Watch me as I cut myself open

  by Only-Speak-YourMind 50 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 11 1:51 AM. In Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Hope, Life, Teenage thinking, Angry, Depressed

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Final Letter

  This is my final letter,
  my letter of good-bye.

  by Shadow Keeper 116 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 11 11:08 PM. In Pain, Dark, Death, Emo, Depression, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Suicide, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Andie's Story

  Andie is a bright and simple girl
  Sadly though she was hurled

  by the-mirrors-edge 127 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 3:29 PM

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• Warning

  by xXBlondeZillaXx 39 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 18 3:28 AM. In Abuse, Adult

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• Stumbling in the Dark

  teardrops in the tub
  making my skin so raw

  by Drowned Ophelia 15 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 16 8:28 PM. In Dark, Weird

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• [ Nightly Rituals ]

  by GiftedPsychosis 38 lines, 41 comments, on Jun 19 11:34 AM 2008. In GP, Dark, Sad, Pain, Life

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• I hope to God the end is near, so that I no longer have to hide my tears.

  I hope to God
  the end is near
  so that I no longer

  by MyCutsDontBleed 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 14 4:35 PM. In Pain, Personal, My life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Tragedy on the Side-walk

  a christmas kill...

  by Fourthaxis 81 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 1 7:05 AM. In Sad, Life, Pain, Contest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Opening the Gates of Sadness to My heart

  Standing before you,
  my heart on the wall

  by enlightenedatheist 39 lines, 3 comments, on May 9 9:01 PM. In Sad, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• hands that kills

  my hand shakes and
  cramps everynight

  by blackfang4318 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 14 10:18 PM. In Weird, Other, Thoughts

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• To Make You Happy

  Praying for help
  Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
  

  by The-Human-Stain 17 lines, 37 comments, on Oct 22 5:26 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Spiritual

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Reaper of souls

  Alone in this world I travel from dawn till setting sun.
  Never knowing where my work will take me, or when my journey's done.

  by Charles Johnson 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 3:04 PM 2008. In dark, life, fantasy, sad, pain, love, death, grim reaper, destiny

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Darkness

  Darkness--Thrill me forever!!! It is darkness I endeavor to caress--Allowing its beauty to possess--As I feel it,s loveliness upon my doom-

  by roland halloway 45 lines, 45 comments, on Apr 19 1:14 AM. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Without A Soul

  It's just the darkest day for who dwells in the light
  As the horrid glance devoured his scorched hope,

  by Death Reaper ver. 6 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 10:06 PM. In Dark, Thoughts, Lost in thought

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Pain

  Consume my heart and take your toll.
  Let your bitter sweet sensation fill my soul,

  by shaynabell726 19 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 9 2:06 AM. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Lost love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Darkness exist in me

  angels stay away from me,
  and devils come so i will be with you in hells gate,

  by emoempess 31 lines, 13 comments, on May 15 2:21 AM. In dark, life, depressed, all

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• Numb

  Looking into the dead shadowy night
  I sit in the depths of the darkness

  by rinzurajan 44 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 24 4:39 AM. In SAD, ANGST, PAIN, DARK, FREE VERSE

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• too bad

  by demondancer 357 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 18 11:35 PM. In Adult, Pain, Dark

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• A soul searching son

  For I was send by him, who has no name
  I came through you but not from you
  

  by isaacokumu 19 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 20 4:05 AM. In Dark, Hope, Life, Pain, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Sadness, Lost love, Anger, Message

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The War Inside My Head

  Life of a stranger means nothing to me
  they are just hollow fodder for my desire

  by spideracer 48 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 16 2:49 AM. In Dark, Pain, Abuse, Death

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• just me

  Depression’s anticipation, crawling,
  Seeps over raw flesh, torn with emotion

  by Viyanna Rosemarie 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 22 3:55 PM. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Life, Sad, Pain, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Girl

  'Seeing her there was quite a sight,
  With jet-black hair as dark as night...'

  by DeathuponTyne 16 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 22 7:46 PM. In Vision, Thoughts, Spiritual, Lonliness

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Roses on your grave

  by Isolatedsouls17 68 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 27 6:09 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Life, Love, Society, Sad, Angst, Adult, Dark, Loss, Death, Goodbyes

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Broken Glass

  Shattered shards of broken glass litter the ground like a jigsaw puzzle

  by IrishGypsyRose 8 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 20 1:03 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Life, Contest

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• Razor Blade Relief

  by Allyson.Lashae. 20 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 16 2:49 AM. In Pain, Sadness, Abuse, Adult

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• Hide and Seek

  Footsteps tread.
  Heartbeats speed.

  by BlankCanvas500 78 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 1 7:45 AM. In Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Abuse, Rape, Depression, Emo, Pain, Suicide, Death

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Darkness Waiting

  by A Shade Of Gray 14 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 23 10:11 AM. In Dark

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• Behind The Wall

  Behind my wall of decorated masks
  and fancy lies and masquerades,

  by DeathBedLullaby 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 21 1:13 AM. In Pain

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• My Monster, My Fallen Angel

  Monster under my bed
  The one who could hears my poems of sadness and dread

  by xXmiserysecretXx 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 8 7:39 PM. In Pain, Personal, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Thoughts Part I

  by Insane-Joe 0 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 28 3:39 PM. In Adult, Life, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark, Weird, Me

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Stupid as I am.

  by x-evil cupid-x 29 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 7:24 PM. In Rape, Depression, Family, Erotic

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• Lonesome Suicide

  Sitting in the silence of the darkened room
  All alone, thinking of such a doom

  by Shadow Stalker 38 lines, 21 comments, on Jan 6 4:57 AM. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Weird, Other

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• The Sea of Gray

  One minute I'm fine,
  Solid,

  by TheBrokenStillBeat 32 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 29 9:53 PM. In Personal, Life, Pain, Dark, My life, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Depressed, Self

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Whats the point of life?

  Whats the point of life
  

  by Vane-dahh 27 lines, on Jun 30 6:49 PM

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• Break the Artery

  In my veins
  My blood does stay

  by hisfallenangel821 42 lines, on May 15 4:08 PM

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• heart's break , & in the winter it snows

  everytime I hear that name , or wait even seeing it
  my heart starts to pound & shatter all over again

  by PoisonRain.x 37 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 30 5:42 PM. In Sad, Pain, Other, Love, Life, Dark, Weird, Escape, Suicide, Anger, Depressed, Hate

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• DreamKiller

  by XxFacemyfearsxX 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 16 2:16 PM. In Life, Sad, Personal, Pain, Dark

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• Broken Angel

  by LovingAngelForever 63 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 4 1:38 AM. In Adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Expelled

  You expelled me from your heart,
  Leaving me with nothing.

  by Kunoichi 8 lines, 11 comments, on May 27 6:46 PM. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Sad, Personal, Thoughts

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• You can't kill me

  I'm lonely,
  I'm nothing,

  by DontObjectifyMe 37 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 1 4:23 PM

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• Scarlet Chess

  To hide the vulnerability lurking in the shadows
  was your wisest move and yet your greatest sin

  by munchbitty 13 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 10 4:24 PM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Weird, Thoughts, Chess, Pain, Love, Angry, War, Humanity

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• Flooding at the Gates

  Although the weeping clouds above have sworn an oath to me,
  weeds instead of flowers are sprouting up to grow.

  by No Quarter 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 15 11:54 AM. In Angst, Hope, Love, Nature, Pain, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Midnight of the Soul

  The moon's bays move mountains into hiding
  As the scent of blood floods the landscape.

  by St. Anarchy 20 lines, 25 comments, on Jun 23 11:08 AM. In War, armageddon, ragnarok, horror, gothic, abstract, imagery, dark, weird

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• I Remember Way Back When

  I remember way back when, when
  Way back when was way back then

  by Andiness 461 lines, 65 comments, on Dec 11 9:41 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Life, Sad, Pain, Lost love, pettirosso, Depressed, God, Emo

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• Feelings Lately

  Crippled
  With a healthy body

  by RainbowSky 9 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 12 8:05 PM

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• Remnants of Life

  A concert of ghastly fingers
  Reaching upwards to the sky.

  by Virulent Malice 37 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 16 6:05 AM 2005. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  Wow. Thanks for HM. (:

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