MY FIRST CONTEST FOR THIS GO ROUND
To whom it may concern:
"Bring me your heart on a silver platter
So that I may recycle it
And throw your heart to the wolves"
-ForgivenBeauty
I crave to feel what you feel
Tell me how amazing your love is
How warm it makes you inside
I am so serious... I have a few rules though:
Rule 1- Absolutely no erotic poems. They may be great for someone but not for me.
Rule 2- Minimal dirty pretty nonsense, and don't gang rape your shift key please.
Rule 3- I have ADD so please keep it short... 35 lines or less is the limit, no more exceptions!
Rule 4- I am accepting prewrites. But if you write a special poem just for me I will be sure to take that into consideration.
I want real, raw and true emotion.
All that has culminated in you heart.
Pure subservient unaltered love.
I want your love running through my veins like a virus.
I will definately comment on every entry.
So let the games begin!
Your dearest friend,
Love 
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 9
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow!!! I got some really great entries. Thank you all so much! All ten of my finalists are amazing. But you all made my decisions quite easy. Thank you for sharing your work with me I really appreciate it. I'll be hosting a new contest soon so be on the lookout!
Contest Winners
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I will never understand how it happened• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You are the light in my dark world A light that will not dim or fade• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by perfectsunset 22 lines, 7 comments, on May 6 9:50 PM. In Prompt, Thoughts, noguest
Honorable mention
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There's a door to my heart I just can't close,
a place inside me know body knows.by dominated angel25 92 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 5:36 PM. In Personal, Sad, Love Honorable mention
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The air is sultry in the night
and dewed with sounds sublime• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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I heard your name in whispers as the South West wind went by
A gentle breeze that stirred the garden's sleepby cricketjeff 33 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 1 3:55 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [68]
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Walk along the
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How can anyone describe what I wanes felt,--so seemingly long ago. I don,t know how to describe or interpret such things. For I have no phyby roland halloway 33 lines, 55 comments, on Apr 22 10:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by ourgirlFriday 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 16 11:31 PM. In Nature, Personal, Love, Life, Animals, Friendship, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don't worry about anything
we'll find our way together• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I hurt you so many times. I
wonder why you're still here• Commented on by judge. -
With the first ray of light,
i wake up to see a better day,• Commented on by judge. -
then i will run to you and hug you behind,
wrap my arms around your body and hug you tight.
kiss your shoulder while i have my crying eyeby kyrkx 44 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 18 10:13 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A drop of sweetness often lies
hidden fast in beauties eyesby Aedara-Wren 20 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 21 2:35 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
if i could do it over inside my head,
i would take back the angry words i said.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We were on the battlefield,
As our swords struck first,by Legion.As.One 73 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 3 5:57 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A rose by any other name would smell as sweet• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The day when I proposed you,
you accepted my proposal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Those blue eyes they shine.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 14 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 1 10:30 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When our eyes meet, I feel electrifying sparks.
That mega watt smile chases away my frown.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 12 comments, on May 26 9:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I promise not to hurt you
to never cause you pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Am like a dry leaf,
which never touches the ground,• Commented on by judge. -
Legs wrapping like a sinister darkness
Lips that need no introduction...Kiss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hey Babe Im over here• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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To me
she was so much more thanby enlightenedatheist 71 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 14 1:37 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
when i am feeling lonely your smile brightens my day.i cant help but fall head over heels for you.you dont have to do much for my heart to skip a beat.<by lostsouls12 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 28 8:17 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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it is cold out, so i sit here inside and imagine that i am sitting on green grass up high somewhere i can look down. i pretend that the sun• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Stay strong for me and I'll hold you tight
we'll do this together whatever the fight.by Coloured Skies 19 lines, 34 comments, on Apr 4 8:52 AM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Longing, Friendship, Inspirational, Happiness, Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The paths diverge: a sullen stretch of perspective.
We stare down the cobbles like children, blushing,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i. The dragonflies of my youthby bonjourbunnie 31 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 8:36 PM 2008. In Metaphors, dragonflies, fireflies, love, thoughts, personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love is a nice feeling you just can not ignore,
when your spine starts to tingle like never before.by judmc 17 lines, 13 comments, on May 29 10:09 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is it.
This is where you say you love me,
and you'll always be there.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Our music is loud.
The rhythm has a strong beat
And this miracle in the chorus will make us weak.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There you are standing, your hands in your pockets
Sun's hot beams fall upon your curly brown hairby Allyson.Lashae. 21 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 24 7:11 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Here I am again, on this bed where so many memories have been made.
In the stillness of the night, I long to be with you.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
His eyes are really hazel
(Thought back then they were green)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I like him he likes me
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Day and nights pass
Hiding in the shadows and sunlightby Poetrys4ToughGuys 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 1 12:57 PM. In This is about seeing someone for only a second and knowing that you both are perfect• Commented on by judge. -
I'm easily confused when I'm alone
I'm even easiler confused when I'm crowdedby x-evil cupid-x 10 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 9 11:15 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
he's my romeo
and i, his broken jullietby SkitzoSkittlez 30 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 16 5:17 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Faded away
Broken for one last day• Commented on by judge. -
Every time you look me in the eye
It sends a shiver down my spine• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
For this Valentines day
I want to hear you say• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sky would be lying
if it were to sayby Simone Brooklyn 18 lines, 14 comments, on May 19 10:01 PM. In Love, Personal, Other, Life, Hope, Thoughts, Freewrite, Self, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to Lynn Viehl to your darkyn series. To your forth book of Gabriel and Nick. Night lost is forever remaining inside my soul... inby Ashlyn Rose 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 31 7:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The way their tears make you want to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I want to put in my PW White sanded beaches, but it won't let me!
Yay, it let me
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thanks so much for the HM
& for hosting a wonderful contest
Congrats to all winners
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