What does this Song Inspire?
Still The One by Orleans
Still The One by ABC Promo
(John Joseph Hall and Johanna D. Hall)
We've been together since way back when
Sometimes I never want to see you again
But I want you to know
After all these years
You're still the one
I want whisperin' in my ear
You're still the one
I want to talk to in bed
Still the one
That turns my head
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
I looked at your face every day
But I never saw it 'til I went away
When winter came
I just wanted to go (wanted to go)
Deep in the desert
I longed for the snow
You're still the one
That makes me laugh
Still the one
That's my better half
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
You're still the one
That makes me strong
Still the one
I want to take along
We're still having fun
And you're still the one (yes you are)
[Musical Interlude]
Changing, our love is going gold
Even though we grow old, it grows new
You're still the one
That I love to touch
Still the one
And I can't get enough
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
You're still the one
Who can scratch my itch
Still the one
And I wouldn't switch
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
You are still the one
That makes me shout
Still the one
That I dream about
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
You're still the one
Yeah, still the one
We're still having fun
And you're still the one
SHOW me what is within
not what You would throw out...
No Line Limit...
Yes-Yes...I realize...
Also realize
I will comment in full
on each entry...
[For the Love of everything Sacred,
if You reserve
Please return to complete- Thank You]
Would like to Judge on Thursday PM if all slots
have filled...
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 18
- Rewards: Gold: 777, Silver: 333, Bronze: 111, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank You ALL for taking the time to pen!
I came into this contest with NO expectations-
only I would be receiving Brilliant entries
to Savor in however shape or form-...
Mattered not Adult- Spiritual- Love whatever~
I did NOT look at background etc-
only ingested Your words...
You have brought forth stories from a Song which could be taken in any direction...Bravo!!
I could feel Your message from within...
You each had brought Power Also Imagery in some sense of the word...with Intensity...
Decision was difficult~
each of You put alot of energy and I do Appreciate so I like to recognize for efforts...
You take the time, it is Precious, I don't like to waste.
The least I can is award an HM to verses
which did not place in the first three slots...
*******HM's in NO particular order...
I take much time in reading-commenting
so I feel it right to award for enlightening me!
However- I also recognize that even though some did not place Gold-
Your words are Golden...
I thoroughly enjoyed reading...
periodically I Host a Go for the Gold contests- for prewrites only~ Please enter Your piece if You have the opportunity to do so...
Gold: For my King
This verse brought tears and it was beyond the humor - beyond the physical image...It was the first stanza- which brought a smile to my face- knowing that a person would Love You even with teeth missing etc~ and the last line had me balling like a baby...Energy consistent
throughout the entire piece- the Love for Life- for companion could be felt~
Powerful imagery through words weaved...Loved the the overall package which it was why it placed Gold...
Silver: until the end of time
The Metaphors Powerful and just because a person has Metaphors does not mean an automatic shiny~ this piece brought a message which pulled at my core- Style unique but did not lose train of thought~ very Creative use of words
with images understood!
Couldn't be overlooked which is why it placed Silver.
Bronze: Destiny's light
Hard decision this was- because there were three which tugged hard-
Still the one for me...
Your Still the One...
both of them pulled with emotions also imagery but Destiny's light had much more energy which could be felt when I compared all three~
howeverrrrr some of the images were intense I might add~ and almost pushed me back a bit- for the energy almost waned...The other two pieces mentioned- Beautiful-
just this one chiseled the mine a little more with conviction....which is why it won Bronze.
Each piece was Amazing once again I might add...
Again- Thank You ALL for Your Contributions!!!
Until Next Time...
Contest Winners
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Though your teeth are missing,
hearing and eye sight too,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
by amaranthine lover 41 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 15 10:56 PM. In Contest, Abstract, noguest
Silver trophy winner
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As destiny brings light with promise,
we have found many parallelsby Stardust-luvr 60 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 16 11:44 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Friendship
Bronze trophy winner
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Your still the one that I want to hold,
deep within my embrace,by Maili Knephthan 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 15 10:28 PM. In Contest, Love, Life
Honorable mention
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A wonderful moment shared in bliss
that lasted years on end• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
It's all important, with nothing missing
when it comes to love each & everydayby afireinthisheart 25 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 16 1:21 PM. In Love, Contest, Thoughts Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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isnt this a shania twain song?? i dont understand the contest?
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Welcome-
Actually not the song by Shania Twain-
this is the one by the Orleans and the same song used for a promo-
with a few words changed of course
Just allow the song to Inspire You-
then write
Hope this helps
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yes the song did it to me many blessings my dear friend on hosting the contest.
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Well Heck I hope You enter
Woot
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depends on the tears lol
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Great song, I have not heard that in years. I'm going to have to play it Friday night when I DJ, they will love it. Thanks for reminding me of it...
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Yay~~ I just Love that song
and You are more than Welcome Busy Bee
Go DJ~ Go DJ- Go DJ- Go
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Wow! I am so surprised!
Thanks so much for the Gold!! Congrats to the other winners...my husband and I are lucky...luckier than most...and we do know it...and consider ourselves very blessed...thanks for letting me share my heart and soul....(pun intended if like!)
and
blessings always!
aka
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Congratulations and why You be surprised~ for You put much energy into Your words and they could be felt~ even if three words were written with same Intensity- that could be felt so Bravo!!
Thank You for taking the time to enter 
Keep that quill dancing too~ Woot!
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I am honored by the bronze - in more ways than I can express thank you xx many blessings always xx
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Congratulations and Thank You for taking the time to enter~ Woot!
Keep that quill dancing~ Yay!!
You put much energy forward~ that could be felt~ Bravo!!
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