So, this is kind of basically the preliminary round. I want you to enter a prewrite that I have NOT commented on/read, and I will simply give you a yes or no and a brief comment on your piece. I won't be too hard of a critic on this round. I'll save that for later.

This is also to see if anyone would like to help with future rounds. I have some ideas, and since it's summer vacation for me and probably for others if not now, pretty damn soon, I figured now would be the best time to hold another rounds contest.
**50 poets will be making it to round 2**
Rules;
-BE COMMITTED. If you're not going to enter the next round & so on & so forth, then simply don't enter.
-Prose/freeverse only.
-Emotionnnn.
-Imagery/Poetic Devices
Put your allpoetry name spaced out in your author's notes like this:
i n n o c e n c e j a d e d . x x
& that should be all! Any questions, feel free to ask. :] this will be closed as soon as I find 50 entries I REALLY like. So it could be judged tonight, or tomorrow, or next week. I guess we'll see.

♥ innocence jaded.xx aka amanda (;
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 20
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Okay, so instead of 50 entries going on to the next round, there will be 35 of you. The 35 that are in the finalists are going to be invited to round 2, and you MUST be committed from here on.
The honorable mentions are in no particular order. =]
I will send out a link to the next round via this contest, along with a column with information on the further contests in this grouping.
Welcome to the presentiment rounds. <3
Contest Winners
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For two years now I've withstood the torrential beating of your protons that you continuously toss at my heart. In the back of your mind you know that I'm utterly attracted to every atom of you; you've taken advantage of this• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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xxx - 11 please - xxxby xxRainbowDawnxx 39 lines, 3 comments, on May 31 12:31 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Those beautiful stars, splayed
throughout our very universe,by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 16 comments, on May 2 9:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
fluorescent lights illuminated your irises
and slowly dimmed out as the closing signby coloringmysenses 63 lines, 13 comments, on May 26 7:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You could watch my eyes break open, as the rain soaked us both in my disdain
But you wouldn't know how to cure my diseaseby AshleyAesthetic 37 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 9 4:47 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5411977, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Writing0Freedom 201 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 8 11:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The night sky never looked so beautiful.
And the stars,by MaliceInWonderland 31 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 2 11:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
[Porcelain Puppet Strings.]
Fragile Fingers That Keep Me From Falling.by SaviDropKick.Oi. 18 lines, 6 comments, on May 31 10:12 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Why is it there lie,s so much inside the mind of the human ? Shelled within the bottle of a destiny.-- From witch there is no choose but toby roland halloway 22 lines, 27 comments, on Apr 18 8:43 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Candy Morphine 26 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 8 2:17 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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maybe it's time to tell the truth.
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dear boy with the heart of gold,
by letters to no one 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 10 4:02 PM. In noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5446179, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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She wipes the colour off with the back of her palm,
Erasing all memory of him from her lips.by Mister Mattia 36 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 5 10:47 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Look out my window
it is getting dark.by AquariusAngel 73 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 6 6:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sitting alone On an old park benchby apoetforplsouth 26 lines, 4 comments, on May 3 10:04 PM 2008. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Too many times before
I've bid a farewellby MoonlitRoses 23 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 13 4:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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oohhh yay!! i wanna enter!
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pleaaaaseeee do !
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i did! (: yay!
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If you've already read my poem "mimic" please let me know. I know you haven't commented on it but that doesn't mean you haven't read it lol.
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hmm evangelion isn't my best, but no one has commented so please do (:
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Bethany Joy Lenz?
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I have no idea what poems of mine you've read
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you can just enter one i haven't commented (:
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bookmarked
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bookmarked, i'll find a write i likr best in the morning, i'm tired, very, very tired. =]
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Okay, I'm REALLY bad at freeverse (I'm entering anyway, just for kicks lmao), but if you want a cojudge later on just let me know

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Thank you that'd be great ! (:
I'll let you know when I need a cojudge !
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