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Rage Surges Through My Veins;



So I'm absolutely, unbearingly, undoubtably -- pissed off. No less, but maybe more. I am completely furious and if you want to know, just look at stuff my ex has done and how my ex is some messed up pedo/rapist who is going out with a girl he grouped and has only just turned 16 when he's 22 and known for looking at child porn. She says she 'loves' him and he slags me off, so she deletes me and refuses to speak to me. Soo... The last time she came crying to me obviously didn't matter. Just like all the other girls he's done something to and I had to pick up the pieces.

Not half as much as I had to pick up the pieces for myself though. I still can't trust properly, I still can't see sex in the same way -- so I hate him. I don't blame him for all my problems, as I control me, but he is a very strong factor in why I am the way I am sometimes.

So, I want you to write in between 5 and 50 words something about one of the following: sadness, anger, fury, making stupid mistakes, watching someone make the same mistakes you did, feeling the urge to just kill someone, not being able to forgive, being able to forgive but the person does the thing again and things such as this, you get the idea.

Can enter prewrites but if the poem is 52 words long (one word over and I wont go all mean on you) or it's nothing related - then I'll disqualify you.

Open for about 7/8 hours.
Give me your best --

Enjoy.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 27
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    Thanks so much for entering everyone, great write!!!
    Thanks so much for keeping me entertained and sharing your angst with me.
    xxx

Contest Winners

  1. by perfectsunset 20 lines, 9 comments, on May 1 3:14 AM. In Abstract, Prompt, Thoughts, noguest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by DramaQueen469 3 lines, 19 comments, on May 26 8:49 AM. In Abuse, Contest, Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5376925, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • aw hunn

  • Wow, thank you so much for
    honour of gold, wasn't expecting
    that so thank you=]
    and for hosting a wonderful contest.

    Congrats to the winners as well