So I just won a whole bunch of points, and I'm not one for keeping a big bank of points. So I'm hosting my third contest. *All clap*
Here's the thing. I'm in the mood for some serious emotional stuff. I don't care what kind of emotion, I just want to see raw emotion. Nothing cliche or sappy or any bull like that. I want real emotion.
Can you give me that?
I'm not going to state a whole bunch of rules because most of them should be mandatory and unspoken by now. I reserve the right to DQ if you break any of the "DUH" rules. Don't do anything dumb.
Some hints as to what I like,
1) Emotion :-)
2) Prose/Freeverse. I don't mind rhyme at all, but it better be amazing and not forced, because it takes away from the beauty of poetry if it rhymes dumb.
3) Love is a personal favorite.
4) Dirty pretty is fine, just don't do anything overboard.
5) I just want emotion, I don't care how you show it, just show it!
Put Oh noes! in AN to let me know you read this. I won't DQ you for not doing it, but Heaven's light will shine more brightly upon you if you follow the directions and pay attention to me.
This is an anonymous contest!
But if I really really really really enjoy your stuff. I will leave you a comment saying so, which means you should message me your AP name so I can find more of your juicy goods :]
There isn't much else to say, just make me feel something special whether it be sad, happy, cry, laugh, whatever. And if you really really need a prompt, message me and I'll find you something. If you must.. Prewrites are available, I don't care when you wrote it, just give me that DAMN EMOTION!!
Wow me..
p.s. If the writes are more amazing than expected. I'll add points :]
And new writes are looked upon with love. :]
p.s.s. I forgot to mention. Metaphors and Imagery make me quiver. :] Use them. :]
Here's the thing. I'm in the mood for some serious emotional stuff. I don't care what kind of emotion, I just want to see raw emotion. Nothing cliche or sappy or any bull like that. I want real emotion.
Can you give me that?
I'm not going to state a whole bunch of rules because most of them should be mandatory and unspoken by now. I reserve the right to DQ if you break any of the "DUH" rules. Don't do anything dumb.
Some hints as to what I like,
1) Emotion :-)
2) Prose/Freeverse. I don't mind rhyme at all, but it better be amazing and not forced, because it takes away from the beauty of poetry if it rhymes dumb.
3) Love is a personal favorite.
4) Dirty pretty is fine, just don't do anything overboard.
5) I just want emotion, I don't care how you show it, just show it!
Put Oh noes! in AN to let me know you read this. I won't DQ you for not doing it, but Heaven's light will shine more brightly upon you if you follow the directions and pay attention to me.
This is an anonymous contest!
But if I really really really really enjoy your stuff. I will leave you a comment saying so, which means you should message me your AP name so I can find more of your juicy goods :]
There isn't much else to say, just make me feel something special whether it be sad, happy, cry, laugh, whatever. And if you really really need a prompt, message me and I'll find you something. If you must.. Prewrites are available, I don't care when you wrote it, just give me that DAMN EMOTION!!
Wow me..
p.s. If the writes are more amazing than expected. I'll add points :]
And new writes are looked upon with love. :]
p.s.s. I forgot to mention. Metaphors and Imagery make me quiver. :] Use them. :]
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 19
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Good job all who entered. Wonderful job all who won trophies. The other finalist are in no specific order, just the trophies are in order. Thanks for entering all, hope to see you in my next contest sometime soon. Promise I won't take as long to judge it :]
Colin
Contest Winners
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Again, I lay down tired but empty
as though I have walked a great distance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item , it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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For I know you have found love
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In a dazed slumber your image resides,
a shattered dream, amongst the shattered glass.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Not very good, feedback would be great. Thanks,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I found the rose peddles you left on the floor,
Meant for me to follow to the surprise you had in store.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item , it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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He said,
"I've been working out my dysfunctions on this canvas"by FightOffYourDemons 23 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 11 3:47 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
god please
i know it's been a whileby Zombiefreak13 43 lines, 7 comments, on May 11 12:12 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Writer's block, a writer's worst nightmare.
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Funny when things never change
Even when you say they willby The-Scene-One 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 4 4:57 PM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark, My own style, Lost in thought, My life• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I would give my life
for an ounce of your timeby awannabepoet 50 lines, 48 comments, on May 23 6:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5243863, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [77]
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How can anyone describe what I wanes felt,--so seemingly long ago. I don,t know how to describe or interpret such things. For I have no phyby roland halloway 33 lines, 55 comments, on Apr 22 10:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I just chatted with this young lady
Whom------I don't even know?by roland halloway 20 lines, 46 comments, on Apr 30 1:27 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As Spring falls upon the deserving
I see a bird.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Where have they been?
Where have they been?by Alitare 111 lines, 3 comments, on May 19 11:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How is it that when I hold
this tinyby trekkergirl 23 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 24 3:38 AM 2008. In contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I told you that it was over
I saw your heart shatter all over the floor,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Bound-In-20-Chains 24 lines, 4 comments, on May 25 4:08 AM• Commented on by judge.
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Only love, Only hate.
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On our wedding day
when you wore that gorgeousby Sabir Abdus Samee 26 lines, 66 comments, on Jul 8 1:23 PM 2008. In Love, Happy, Romance, Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It began on a starry night
with the moonshine above my headby Rita Krocha 25 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 5:57 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Mesh and netting tangle
The fish's shoal, contortingby manwithshoesforhands 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 6:01 AM• Commented on by judge. -
by Celtic Legend 33 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 3 12:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Drifting silently though a dream,
Thoughts frozen in place,by Nyhte 43 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 6:54 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I Live Off Love
I Live Off Your Loveby Ellen Cloutier 1995 5 lines, 5 comments, on May 4 4:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see my reflection in the puddle at my feet.
The girl on the floor still quivers and weeps.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I watched the moons soft silhoettes,
trail upon your window nets.by BeachBum1 31 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 23 1:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
finally letting go
of all the pain thats been feltby phillyhottpockets 23 lines, 2 comments, on May 24 11:10 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You used me, dumped me, never looked back.by Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, 18 comments, on May 16 7:30 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Colors swirl,
Faces move,by love-taylor-love 48 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 31 5:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There was a time when
hands ghosted my waist,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
when does murder become assassination
and assassination become murder?by love-taylor-love 18 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 26 12:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
last night my dream spoke
substance and matter formed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Broken wings don't fly
Rest your head little girl, it's okay to cry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Believe what you might,
this is not my plight.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A mother sits cradling her tiny infant in her arms as she hugs and kisses him for the very last time! She so very gently rocks her preciousby TarasWay 11 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 3:46 PM. In Loss, Dedication, Sadness, Goodbyes, Pain, Tragedy, Hope, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I couldn’t exactly tell what I had to do,
But there were so many optionsby ChLeN11 56 lines, 4 comments, on May 21 2:05 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It was early in the morning.
When I got that phone call.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
every-time i hear that song i think of you,
that random moment• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Each morning I awake to feel that you are there.
For years I've come to know that you will always be with me.by skye01 18 lines, 5 comments, on May 4 10:24 PM
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Chill winds ride over seven sea's
Taking my heart and tearing it in twoby BlackRoseFalling 28 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 17 8:47 AM. In depression, dark, sad, pain, suicide, hanging, love, romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When our eyes meet, I feel electrifying sparks.
That mega watt smile chases away my frown.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 12 comments, on May 26 9:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Spent three weeks wishing for just one thing,
that you'd break (and I'd get to see).by x Emo Cheese 49 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 3 4:42 PM 2008. In Angst, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Anger, Angry, Break Ups, Breaking Up, Blank Verse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I don't want you to feel my pain
What I have to hide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I love the way you hold me
The way you hold me tight• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Killing the silence after a storm,
Denying the inevitable.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My love, I'm so sorry I could do nothing to save you.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darling, don't cry for me,
everythings gonna be ok,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Dedicated to Joel David Edwards.by xXLithiumKissesXx 33 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 5 1:02 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by x-evil cupid-x 15 lines, 13 comments, on May 23 9:34 PM. In Love, Adult, Pain, Personal, Sad, Hope, Dedication, Hate, Longing, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tears are blue,
Blood is red,by x-evil cupid-x 3 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 2:32 PM• Commented on by judge.
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I'll try & enter a prewrite & a new write as soon as inspiration strikes.
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danggg, i missed it >:[
lol good luckk judging bro
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