ok, basically, I'll give you some guidelines that WON"T help you win.
excessive cussing, religion bashing, and your basic AP rules.
Give me your best and I'll grade them by next Wed. when i'm off work :-) lol.
I want to be oooo and ahhhhh'd.
I'll read each one and comment it, if you update your poem after I had commented on it, PM me and I'll try and get a chance to read it again and see what you have changed.
Don't try to be direct with your poetry and don't make it super long... don't make it over 40 short lines (3-6 words per line) or 20 long lines (7-10 words per line)
If it's really long, make it interesting.
Imagry is important to me!!!!
Make it funny or make it deep if anything, make it unique!
Have fun peeps!
excessive cussing, religion bashing, and your basic AP rules.
Give me your best and I'll grade them by next Wed. when i'm off work :-) lol.
I want to be oooo and ahhhhh'd.
I'll read each one and comment it, if you update your poem after I had commented on it, PM me and I'll try and get a chance to read it again and see what you have changed.
Don't try to be direct with your poetry and don't make it super long... don't make it over 40 short lines (3-6 words per line) or 20 long lines (7-10 words per line)
If it's really long, make it interesting.
Imagry is important to me!!!!
Make it funny or make it deep if anything, make it unique!
Have fun peeps!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 15, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: Well done everyone! Each poem was excellent, and sadly I only have enough points to award just a few of you. It was really hard to judge all of them. Thanks for entering!!!!
Contest Winners
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The sun doesn't kiss her face-
she paints a few shades too dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Mesmerized.
Light gleaming from orbs of liquid gems.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I am a ripple:
A ripple of time eschewed!by Jason-R-Britt 39 lines, 18 comments, on May 7 5:24 AM. In Thoughts, My own style, My life
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [8]
1 - 8 of 8
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beautiful words that bleed from brilliant lips
(that taste like sweeping seasonsby XscissorhandsX 20 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 12:13 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What does it matter if you're famous?
So what if the World knows you?by Beverlynohime 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 16 12:50 AM. In Life, Society, Inspirational, Message, Famous, Happiness, Fame, Hope, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. -
Last chick standing up against the wall,
As their counting my faults and I'm falling.by PiratexxLove 48 lines, 5 comments, on May 16 1:06 AM. In Confusing love, lust, hate, life, perfection in grief• Commented on by judge. -
Nature’s brightly coloured, new born leaves, seem greener in the springtime sun,
along with a boundless, clear blue sky, nature’s artistryby judmc 7 lines, 8 comments, on May 2 5:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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