This is just a prewrite contest. Enter the prewrite that you think is your best.
Rules:
1) Do not molest your Shift key
2) no bashing other poets
3) There can be erotica...but make sure it is labeled adult.
4) no chat speak it is annoying
5) I reserve the right to DQ
6)Have fun
Abariel Raven has donated 600 Points for this contest
Rules:
1) Do not molest your Shift key
2) no bashing other poets
3) There can be erotica...but make sure it is labeled adult.
4) no chat speak it is annoying
5) I reserve the right to DQ
6)Have fun
Abariel Raven has donated 600 Points for this contest
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 2
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 250, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thanks for all the entries and it was hard to pick what to put in the finalists
Contest Winners
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Under the starlit night
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Dear Family &And Friends,
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I'm hiding a secret
Deep inside• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The door creaked and you slipped in
Tip-toeing your way through the darkness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Don't think.
Don't breathe.by BreakingTheSurface 40 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 25 12:26 AM. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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An old church stands with a spiraled steeple
Amidst the townspeople at fox and main• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
There he sits on a rotting wooden marker
Watching me his eyes filled with mocking laughterby Aiyasha Avarus 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 1:01 AM 2008. In sexual blood• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I don’t know how to come up to you
Wish I knew how to look you in the eyeby Unbreakable3 36 lines, 1 comment, on May 14 6:02 PM. In Life, Longing, Understanding, Divorce, Child, Questions• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I promise you, it's not your fault
He's the one to change how he feltby kissjess 43 lines, 140 comments, on Jul 24 12:08 PM 2008. In Pain, Lost in thought, Escape, Hope, Family, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The sun comes up, the sun goes down;
The moon smiles, and then it frowns;by Jason-R-Britt 23 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 7 12:22 AM. In Lost in thought, Society, Humanity, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You hurt me till I cried
You hurt me till I bleedby tracey-leigh 57 lines, 4 comments, on May 16 11:03 AM. In Love and Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Long ago in a far away land A mistake was made it wasn’t planned• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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In your eyes I see your pain
though your tears are dry;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
We met in the late fall,
You made me think I had it all--• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sit alone in this dark ass room
You're the brideby Minstrel-Morose 41 lines, 4 comments, on May 20 11:19 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Not very good, feedback would be great. Thanks,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You said you loved me but you lied
i saw the truth in your eyesby Reckless-Insanity 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 27 6:27 PM. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Bronze trophy winner
Entries [155]
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Once upon a time,
In a land not to far away,• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
to be free
of the storm filled seasby pollywolly 14 lines, 70 comments, on Sep 17 3:01 PM 2005. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your stomaches light with butterflies
Your chest is knotted painful tightby RazetheWorld 46 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 16 2:29 PM. In Thoughts, Life, Angst, Depression, My life, Emo, Self, Humanity• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lulling him into an ecstatic sleep
Called deathby pollywolly 7 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 13 5:15 AM 2006. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And I’ll masquerade as someone else
I’ll put on different skin
Tonight you will be Cinderella• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Like a phantom in the night,
He always disappeared.by Nyx Ashmore 37 lines, 1 comment, on May 27 8:55 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I may be fat and ugly
and yes my life did fall apart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I’ve thought about a lot of things
But I never considered thisby blondevamp 25 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 9 10:51 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Trapped inside
This crevice of self hateby Acidbath 30 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 29 6:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Brilliant blue eyes that brighten up my day
Never before have i felt this wayby ley527 13 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 5 4:21 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It spills through my ears
and illuminates my head.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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There is no sun in winter
and my eyes have become coldby BreakingTheSurface 30 lines, 6 comments, on May 6 11:00 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My eyes are crying
my heart aches• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He is the monster biting down on you like an animal in starvation.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The eye in the window, is so hard to see. But I can see it, when it glares and stares, all day long it keeps watching me. So I guess my sunglasses are not needed today, well now right now anyway. I shall keep my eyes open and• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You see this is not a game to me
Writing poetry is more than just a fantasyby Tempa Lee 79 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 13 7:19 PM. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, My life, Lost in thought, My own style, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I decided to be silent
And quietly gather the lies you had spoken.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My lips kiss yours softly
with a passion that exceeds no other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by albinoblacksheep720 55 lines, 6 comments, on May 11 10:53 PM. In adult thoughts personal life love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Let this start
With the warmth of the sun• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All the mistakes that we make
and the bridges that we've burnedby Anyajoellienne 18 lines, 54 comments, on Apr 2 6:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sun rises in the west
Shedding light on a seen that I detest,by pain is love. 19 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 28 7:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A baby born one summers night
Not aware that something wasn't rightby Anyajoellienne 13 lines, 52 comments, on Sep 8 6:43 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sun sets over the ocean.
Birds sing you to sleep.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Here we go. Two
weeks to prove I am• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by tentativetrinity 24 lines, 2 comments, on May 14 7:15 PM. In Depressed, Personal, Sad, Weird, Angst, Longing, My life, Lost love, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A new face,
a new desire,by temporarybeauty 20 lines, 4 comments, on May 10 7:50 PM. In Angst, My life, Personal., Teenage thinking, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thermal energy sillhouette spun, spinning-
twirling acid dances into flames that wouldby Writing0Freedom 29 lines, 4 comments, on May 13 9:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Transparent maybes
transfer thermal energyby Writing0Freedom 32 lines, 6 comments, on May 10 8:17 PM. In eating disorder, Pain, Society, Loss, Escape, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, D• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am a ripple:
A ripple of time eschewed!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I join the dots
with smoking fingers• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Million dollar athelete's playing on field$ of greenby bluecollarlove 37 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 18 10:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The air is sultry in the night
and dewed with sounds sublimeby Aedara-Wren 21 lines, 5 comments, on May 5 3:37 PM
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Faint powder blue, eccentric
curve of a sphereby Aedara-Wren 7 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 27 3:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A silver-chromed, winged machine
swims through Raleigh-scattered clouds.by jamesbliss 27 lines, 6 comments, on May 11 3:39 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sorrow, anger, rage, joy, relief,…
Guilt.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh Heavenly foe, what intrusion have I made? Kissed the hands of Satan, my innocence slowly fades. Was it not you whom led me here to insanby VanGoghNights 27 lines, 26 comments, on Sep 19 7:40 PM 2007. In Dirty pretty, pain, dark, spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thank you for the HM trophy
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