Dark writes contest!!!! Check it out

Hey everyone,
this is a contest for anyone and everyone who loves to write dark poems. I love reaing them and love writing them. I like poems about cutting, suicide, gore, blood and all that good stuff

I do have a few rules that are easy to follow
1. No abusing the shift key
2. NO happy poems allowed atoutomatic DQ
3. Do not type in all caps
4. Nothing under 10 lines and over 100
5. Please nothing that may trigger me or other's to do anything
6. ALL entries to be labelled accordingly. (adult, dark, abuse etc)

Prewrites are allowed but fresh writes have a better chance of winning.
If you enter 2 times plz put number 1 in one poem and number 2 in your second poem. Along with your fave. Ice-cream.

If you would like a propmt let me know
I have many of them ready for anyone who
would like one. (Hint hint)

I will be judging on a scale (First time for me)

Imagery/10
Style/30
background/30
Prompt used/40
Prewrite/10
fresh write/50
(That is 170 points right there.)
If you have great imagery you'll get more then 10 points If I really like the style you'll get more then 30. It's like that for all of them

I will not take points away. If I like what I see and if I get more entries I will add more points if possible.

Have fun and get to work

I'd like to thank
The.poet.of.hearts for donating points

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 17
• Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
• Final notes:
  
  
  Wow this was a hard contest to judge. I've been locked in a mental hospital so sorry to everyone who didn't have their poem commeted on. Well anywho this was one of the biggest contest I had. Minus my pre-write one I had. 81 entries I never thought of having that many. But I am glad to have read all the poems. Even tho this contest is over plz don't remove your poems. I will love to re-read them and leave you all a comment. My sister will do the same. Hope you all had fun. Thank you all for entering my contest. Look forward to seeing you all in my next one. Well me and Mummytobe will be holding a contest soon. Again thank you all for entering.
  Congrats to our winners:
  1. Silence isn't golden: 380 (Gold)
  2. Death Ally (Part III): 330 (Silver)
  3. Star light: 170 (Bronze)
  4. Asylum: 140 (HM)
  5. [Caution.] Suicide in Progress: 65
  6. .:Seven Deadly Ways to Fall:. HM
  7. Crimson tears: HM
  8. Murderer's Lament (HM)
  

Contest Winners

1. Silence isn't golden

   I sit here and cry the lonely tears
   that contain my hidden problems.

   by cassie29349 27 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 4:32 PM
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Death Alley (Part III)

   Say Something!
   Don’t Cry…….. Please,
   Just for Once, Open your mouth!

   by The.poet.of.hearts 144 lines, 168 comments, on May 3 12:14 PM
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Star Light

   Star Light, Star Bright;
   First star I see tonight;

   by Perfect Death 999 23 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 1 12:33 PM. In Dark
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. Asylum

   by BluesMan 63 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 23 7:28 AM. In Contest, Adult, Dark, Twisted Weird Thoughts
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. [Caution.] Suicide in Progress

   by KelsiEvermore 37 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 26 5:28 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Other, Contest, Death, Depressed, Suicide, Escape
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. .:Seven Deadly Ways to Fall:.

   Angels fall before me
   In a dark world full of lust
   Heaven falls to hell

   by CrimsonRain1313 88 lines, 29 comments, on Jan 3 8:11 PM 2007. In Sins, Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. Crimson tears

   As the day pass,
   With this bizarre feeling I have,

   by emoempess 16 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 28 8:56 AM. In Emo, Life, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Dark, Depression, Weird, Other
   Honorable mention

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
8. Murderer's Lament

   Roses are red… like the blood on my wrist
   Violets are blue… like the clutch of my fist.

   by RealitysAStory 37 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 26 4:09 PM. In Story, Pain, Sad, Murder, Death, Love, Society, Thoughts, Life, Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [71]

• Darkness

  Darkness--Thrill me forever!!! It is darkness I endeavor to caress--Allowing its beauty to possess--As I feel it,s loveliness upon my doom-

  by roland halloway 45 lines, 45 comments, on Apr 19 1:14 AM. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bloody Mary

  It shouldn't be like this-
  What is there to say

  by roland halloway 30 lines, 27 comments, on May 3 7:06 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Blood Runs Black

  In the middle of the night
  so quiet but not so quite

  by Syko Path 27 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 17 12:55 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• BREAK ME!!! So I May Feel

  I was born with a love, that can not be given away
  And it makes my cry, like pain so deep inside

  by moaner 33 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 20 9:49 AM. In NaPoMo, Sad, Pain, Abuse, Death, Depression, Sadness, Anger, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• In Peace I Shall Reside (part 1)

  I dont feel good today
  I fell like Shit

  by Syko Path 28 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 15 9:14 AM. In Angst, Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Emo, Message, Goodbyes, Humanity

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Once on the front of my binder

  Once on the front of my binder
  I wrote a poem

  by Stolen memories 42 lines, 32 comments, on May 8 10:54 AM. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Emo, Depression, Self, Depressed, Teen issues, Goodbyes

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Abnormal Dream

  Key turns, hear the lock clack,
  Now there is no turning back,

  by SadmanJim 33 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 28 5:59 AM 2006. In Dark, Weird, Dream

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Rise

  
  I really want to come back

  by aldebaran 35 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 28 2:44 AM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Damaged goods...

  Little pinpricks of cold
  Seeping through the cracks in my mind.

  by Fritz O skennick 30 lines, 37 comments, on Mar 7 3:43 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Schizophrenia.

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Berlesque

  by CoundessaScarlotti 50 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 10:34 PM 2008. In Adult, Dark, Erotica

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Fragmented Reality...

  I bury my emotions,
  But they keep

  by Fritz O skennick 72 lines, 22 comments, on Nov 21 2:13 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Other, Thoughts, Personal, Sad, Weird

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Every Slice,bleeds with a Story behind it!!

  I sit alone in th dark room,
  looking out the widow into the moon,

  by Misunderstood 73 lines, 3 comments, on May 12 4:55 PM. In Angst, Dark, Weird, Other, Society, Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Viewed by judge.
• I Fear …

  My fear makes my lovers sad
  But how can I stop my scary whine

  by The.poet.of.hearts 27 lines, 64 comments, on Sep 26 10:24 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird, Life, Nature

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Pain's Past

  Every time I try to be uplifted by an occurring event,
  nothing seems to lift me up,

  by Blakthorn 28 lines, on May 12 1:46 PM

  • Viewed by judge.
• inside

  i want my ears to bleed
  eyes to cry

  by Guerrero 34 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 10:27 AM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Psycopatic Wife

  by the black cat 19 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 1:52 PM. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Personal, Angry, Goodbyes, Anger, Death

  • Commented on by judge.
• never see me cry

  You have the nerve to ask me
  What is wrong??

  by lesliemargaret 21 lines, on May 12 7:40 PM

  • Viewed by judge.
• The Ink

  And when I'm trying to end the war
  I'll leave this world forevermore

  by RealitysAStory 34 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 19 3:27 AM. In Ink, Death, Life, Hope, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Kill Me Swiftly

  This absence in my heart
  I’ve never felt this aching

  by Little Miss Mental 29 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 19 6:23 PM 2008. In Dark, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Witness My Fury

  by NooNiThEWitcH 86 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 12 3:48 PM 2008. In Anger, Fury, Rage, Pain, Personal, Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Death from the Inside

  by Cyanide Dreams 15 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 26 8:38 PM. In Abuse, Weird, Contest, Quickie, Other, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Killed Voice

  To kill my voice
  Is now mine to kill.

  by Hushed Energy 20 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 29 12:35 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Denial - Honesty at It's Best

  Don't make a promise you can't keep,
  Let me live in my world of lies.

  by DreamtSong-x 26 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 6:38 PM. In denial, lies, sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Humpty Dumpty

  by Hushed Energy 13 lines, 9 comments, on May 2 6:32 AM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Shattered Mirror of Lies

  The reflection in the puddle,
  It lies and shows only imperfections,

  by DreamtSong-x 13 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 25 6:33 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dear Mom and Dad

  by Shelby K 34 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 24 3:32 PM. In Abuse, Adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• [i'm trying to plan my twisted vengeance]

  i'm trying to plan my twisted vengeance
  while you're whispering thoughts of suicide

  by KelsiEvermore 20 lines, 10 comments, on May 3 4:37 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Other, Contest, Death, Emo, Suicide, Escape, Depression, Sadness

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Carving of New Sins Until She End

  her tears fall each night upon her blood stained pillow,with nothing but the emptiness he left her with yes he says he love her,but she kno

  by Misunderstood 4 lines, 2 comments, on May 15 6:55 AM. In Heartbroken, Pain, Sad, Dark, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• I can't forgive

  I can't forgive myself
  For letting you go

  by Isolatedsouls17 138 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 8 3:54 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Contest, Society, Nature

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Avenging Spirits

  by here for you always 11 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 1 5:02 PM 2008. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Confessions of a Dark Soul

  by here for you always 35 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 3 2:29 PM 2008. In Dark, Personal, Pain, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Look Around

  by DinkyDiver 67 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 30 4:50 PM 2008. In Personal, Adult, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Love, Minion

  I see you, I hear you, but I can not feel you.
  Why do you hide from me?

  by Panda-Kitten 16 lines, 4 comments, on May 12 4:22 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bleeding From the Knife

  My brain goes blank
  The blood flows deep

  by FreeFalling911 24 lines, 4 comments, on May 13 2:37 PM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Victim

  You take my breath away,
  You make my heart race,

  by Panda-Kitten 11 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 7:08 PM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• shirley temple train wreck

  by John Doe 56 lines, 9 comments, on May 10 10:43 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, cat

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Blood troubles

  Losing control / Need to see more blood / Did I ever bleed more? / I need help, can't manage it anymore / Coming up with this on the spot /

  by Harbinger of Death 20 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 1:21 AM 2007. In Depressed, Emo

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• loves embrace

  why are you like this
  why are you such a bitch

  by emolove1892 12 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 30 8:49 AM. In dark, death, love unloved, alone

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Haunted House

  I got a place inside myself that,
  no one knows about.

  by LonelyWolf Tasagka 68 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 26 4:58 PM. In Dark, Angst, Loss, Longing, Sadness

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• perfect post it

  when the days are so long and the nights are so cold
  with each passing day of doing what you're told

  by Zukasa 17 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 4:59 PM. In Dark

  • Viewed by judge.
• Dark Sin

  Fire gathers around my soul,
  and my heart becomes as dark as coal.

  by xXBloodyravenXx 25 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 4 8:33 PM. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Suicide, Depressed, Emo, Death, Spiritual

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• You make me not want me

  I had this for a while and thought I put it on already. Enjoy^^V.

  by redrumdog31 42 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 25 1:46 PM 2007. In Sad, Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• unceasing amazement

  once i watched the world in wonder
  now i wonder when the world will end

  by malkinpuss 62 lines, 1 comment, on May 12 5:53 PM

  • Commented on by judge.
• Last gasp!

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 35 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 17 8:25 PM. In Pain, Angst, Personal, Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The invisable fear {TW}

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 24 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 17 7:05 PM. In Dark, Angst, Adult, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• A Darker World

  Masking myself with these smiling eyes
  Rotting before you with no fight to survive

  by SpyderEyes 78 lines, on Mar 8 9:28 PM. In Dark, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Dirty

  She toils away the hours,
  quoting from all the books she’s read

  by Bosiarbooger 64 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 8 10:26 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Evil, Death, Carnage, The Devil

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• going crazy!

  she's gone crazy
  with every one around her

  by lesliemargaret 14 lines, on May 2 6:46 PM. In Abstract

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• drowning

  you stabbed my heart
  cupid shot an arrow

  by XxobsessedwithyouxX 25 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 18 7:54 AM 2008. In Pain

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• lung cancer

  There is no antidote to this poison, this... disease...

  by Nienna Calmcacil 10 lines, 10 comments, on May 14 9:17 PM. In Angst, Pain, Dark, Thoughts

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• ONE by ONE

  Mortally tired
  Forever awake

  by thstar09 19 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 9:41 PM. In Death

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Illumination

  by the evil angel 27 lines, 3 comments, on May 5 7:00 PM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Needing You!

  Not sure what came over me
  I needed another quick release

  by DinkyDiver 37 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 24 5:04 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The pain of self harm

  Surrounded by darkness
  drowning in pain

  by Suteishiijein 33 lines, 10 comments, on May 14 4:52 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Use Me

  Lie,
  make me cry.

  by VanGoghNights 19 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 7 6:20 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Awaiting Pinhead

  Break.
  My nail hanging on the splintered door frame

  by English.Muffin 67 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 6 2:02 PM. In horror, blood, pinhead, hell, torture, pain, gore

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Marred Innocence

  Pale, innocent wrists,
  they seem to be asking for it today.

  by XxXNoxiousRoseXxX 28 lines, 2 comments, on May 15 6:05 PM. In Angst, Dark, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Viewed by judge.
• Decay

  by Nienna Calmcacil 20 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 9 3:11 PM. In Pain, Betrayal, Wasted Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• I am Meth

  by Avarus L. Katier 86 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 29 3:17 PM. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, Pain, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Save Me

  What would you say
  If I told you I was going to die today

  by mybabysfallenangel 42 lines, 1 comment, on May 15 3:58 PM

  • Viewed by judge.
• Break the Artery

  In my veins
  My blood does stay

  by mybabysfallenangel 42 lines, on May 15 4:08 PM

  • Viewed by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  moaner
  May 12
  Edit | Reply
  im entering a poem about self harm, its not graffic and in ur face, but you may remove if by any chance you feel you don't like it, i will understand x
• • 
    SuicidexEmoxKitten
    May 12
    Edit | Reply
    Self harm poems are perfectly fine.
    I myself write loads of them as well.
• 
  The.poet.of.hearts
  May 12
  Edit | Reply
  I have Broken one rule
• • 
    SuicidexEmoxKitten
    May 12
    Edit | Reply
    What one rule did you break.........I may let it slide depending on what it was.
• 
  Cyanide Dreams
  May 12
  Edit | Reply
  Just to let you know, you can't take points away from a contest. The system won't allow it
  
  Josh
• • 
    SuicidexEmoxKitten
    May 12
    Edit | Reply
    I wasn't meaning those points.
    I was meaning the points on the
    scale.
  • • 
      Cyanide Dreams
      May 12
      Edit | Reply
      Whoops, sorry Good luck with judging
• 
  emoempess
  May 15
  Edit | Reply
  hello plz view the poems
• • SuicidexEmoxKitten
    May 15
    Edit | Reply
    I will get to it as soon as I can.
    I'm sorry but I am in the mental
    hospital and don't have as much time
    as I would like.
• 
  Bosiarbooger
  May 15
  Edit | Reply
  Send me something EVIL for I am in a mood
• 
  The.poet.of.hearts
  May 16
  Edit | Reply
  You Don't have to Say Thanks
  I gave you Points Just Like a Sister
• 
  KelsiEvermore
  May 17
  Edit | Reply
  Thanks for the HM!
• • 
    SuicidexEmoxKitten
    May 17
    Edit | Reply
    Your welcome Glad to have given you HM
  • • 
      KelsiEvermore
      May 17
      Edit | Reply
      Glad you liked it out of all of your entries!
    • • 
        SuicidexEmoxKitten
        May 17
        Edit | Reply
        I was some what able to relate to it. It honestly was well written and my twin says the same
      • • 
          KelsiEvermore
          May 17
          Edit | Reply
          Thanks!

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