Hello All!
I have some random points to give away, and I would love to raise my comment score. SO! The rules are simple.
Rules
1. No StIcKy CaPs. Auto DQ
2. No MSN talk please. Auto DQ
3. If the content of your poem is "inappropriate" please make sure to categorize it so.
4. So I know you read the rules, in your AN please state in one sentence one of your funny embarassing moments. If you do not have an embarassing moment, or would not like to share it, simply write that in your AN so I know that you did in fact read the rules. Auto DQ.
Prewrites ARE allowed, as well as new poems. So, pick out your best and enter. I will comment on every poem to the best of my ability; however due to the fact that there is no limited entry restrictions, judging may take a few days. Please Be Patient!
Thank you, and I hope you have fun!
-Ali♥
I have some random points to give away, and I would love to raise my comment score. SO! The rules are simple.
Rules
1. No StIcKy CaPs. Auto DQ
2. No MSN talk please. Auto DQ
3. If the content of your poem is "inappropriate" please make sure to categorize it so.
4. So I know you read the rules, in your AN please state in one sentence one of your funny embarassing moments. If you do not have an embarassing moment, or would not like to share it, simply write that in your AN so I know that you did in fact read the rules. Auto DQ.
Prewrites ARE allowed, as well as new poems. So, pick out your best and enter. I will comment on every poem to the best of my ability; however due to the fact that there is no limited entry restrictions, judging may take a few days. Please Be Patient!
Thank you, and I hope you have fun!
-Ali♥
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 4
- Rewards: Gold: 700, Silver: 250, Bronze: 170, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Great job.
Contest Winners
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There is no point in breathing
syllables you can't bear• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Alicia my love
i love you more than humanly possible• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [65]
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I grow things
little colorful molds in jarsby sylzara 53 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 13 8:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Somewhere in my heart beyond all my pride,
Holds a secret desire so intense deep inside.by honeychinadoll 16 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 25 2:26 AM. In LOVE• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
for what should I have wings
with no where that I should flyby PurpleSky 28 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 3 9:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm Left standing here with barely a flame
a flame that struggles to light my path
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I used to never read the Sunday paper
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Let this start
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Maybe I twist prompts in directions they should never go- down the paths that are so invisible , they exist like fairy-tales, only for thosby Writing0Freedom 83 lines, 8 comments, on May 9 8:08 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dilapidated ecstasy crowned my electrocuted hair a tiara, as metal bracelets wrapped my wrists, and you stroked my cheek, because Mommy the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Writing0Freedom 41 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 11:59 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"I wanna be a rock star!"
With millions of fans you don't know?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Do not give your money to a wretched deceiver
Who exploits, tricks and cons the unwary believer• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Sing that song that reminds me of you
Were the shirt you left on the floorby lala land 48 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 12:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Kaii's golden locket perches on her heart containing.
Her dark hair frames her silent face a curtain to emotion.by Chris D 12 lines, on May 11 12:08 PM• Viewed by judge. -
At the end of one's own despicable life,
a cunning creature seeks to take your breath.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
everything is ending,
regrouping and restarting,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If you could hear what I see
What a brighter place this would be• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Taken for granted, my mouth was closed up
To the Dogs and Pigs, no wine flowed in my cupby JePeTto 30 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 14 2:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Walk along that straight path
Each with a different parallel structure...by JePeTto 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 10:38 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
thoughts are crossing the barren wasteland of my mind
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Grasp my hand we’ll fly away,
ore to distant shore• Commented on by judge. -
I'd like to think that from time to time,
You say my name before drinking your wine.
by hmmmmmmm 23 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 3:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A fragile adult shell, with
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Despair consumes me these days
As I watch the reminder on my arm• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by MaddCuppyCake 29 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 24 7:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It takes a moment for me to grasp it
And I’m able to respondby MaddCuppyCake 35 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 13 7:54 PM. In ....• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I just want the pain to leave
And to heal these open wounds
That never should have existedby MaddCuppyCake 31 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 14 2:37 PM 2008. In Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"happy birthday mom
I know this is
what you wanted"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Trying to stay unattached again.
Let the make-believe games begin.by temporarybeauty 22 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 9:29 PM. In Personal., Teenage thinking, My life, Life, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Is it more than just a feeling?
Could you take it to the end?by AndrianTimeswift 55 lines, 8 comments, on May 13 5:53 AM. In Love, Life, Personal, Pain, Romance, Longing, Inspirational, Self, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They want to see you fallby AndrianTimeswift 22 lines, 4 comments, on May 18 2:05 PM• Commented on by judge.
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For a very dear friend. No matter what it does to me, I want my sacrifice to make you happy.by AndrianTimeswift 24 lines, 8 comments, on May 18 1:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Two boys, two loves.
So differentby darkscorpia 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 18 8:38 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A spell woven around me
It must be so.by darkscorpia 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 18 8:20 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Without you in my life i'm nothing
each day its none stop cuttingby saed 15 lines, 3 comments, on May 19 11:29 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The kids all called him simple Sam, though no one knew his name,
Sam lived inside his own sweet world his life was one big game.by judmc 20 lines, 2 comments, on May 17 6:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The delicate pink Camellia blossoms, nodding gently on the boughs,
aquiessing to the gentle breeze, that nature, so playfully endows.by judmc 14 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 18 11:42 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If you've never tried absinthe,
you're missing out on one of the best things in the world.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You think I didn't notice the cynicism in your words
The bitter stench made your mouth reek• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As she begins to falter
The screams begin to last.by Silent Wayfarer 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 28 10:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Treasure 5 15 lines, 1 comment, on May 15 7:45 AM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In your heart something dwells
something that makes you feel not well• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There is no sun in winter
and my eyes have become coldby BreakingTheSurface 30 lines, 6 comments, on May 6 11:00 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Time stops achingly,
grinding against the rustby BreakingTheSurface 64 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 19 7:38 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Syllables slip from tired tongues
Like feet dragging through quick sandby FightOffYourDemons 10 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 16 7:00 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you sit in the shadow of falling leaves
that like your dreams seem to floatby FightOffYourDemons 23 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 5 12:34 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I did read the rules just didn't add anything to my AN sorry about that.
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How do I make an authors note?
I read the rules... however I don't have the slightest idea how to even get to my authors note... Could somebody tell me how to do that?? Please? Pretty, pretty, please, with macaroni and cheese on top, because I think cherries are gross? -
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Sure thing.
When you open your poem to edit it, when you scroll down there are a bunch of empty boxes that you can put type into.. One of them says something along the lines of "Want to add any notes?" That is your Authors Notes.
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