Give me something deep, and passionate. Tell me about something or someone that you have deep feelings for. i want it to be something thats really difficult to describe.
The more emotion you can make me feel the better, getting me to cry will probably get you a higher place.
Rules:
-No dirty pretty
-No erotica
-Nothing dark, (PLEASE!!!)
-Moderate length
-Just let your emotions pour out, be real.
I hope this goes well. Good Luck.
The more emotion you can make me feel the better, getting me to cry will probably get you a higher place.
Rules:
-No dirty pretty
-No erotica
-Nothing dark, (PLEASE!!!)
-Moderate length
-Just let your emotions pour out, be real.
I hope this goes well. Good Luck.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 27
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 45
- Final notes: Thank you, everyone, for entering in this contest. I didn't expect it to attract this much attention, but I'm glad it did.
Everyone who put their heart on the screen (prewrite or not, or even in this contest) thank you. I enjoyed reading everyones poems, and while i have been extremly busy, and wasn't able to comment on everyone's poems, I still want to thank you for entering them. Okay, my ramble is done. All of those who made it to the finalist list, congratulations, your poems had an extraordinary effect on me.
Contest Winners
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25/150
What it takes for you to heal me-• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
dear God
today was one of those days, where the world was twisting me around like a child on a merry go round, but as i sat there, finallyby Kalamina 32 lines, 27 comments, on Feb 9 8:04 PM. In Life, Love, Spiritual, Thoughts, Personal
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4918783, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I Remember The Day You Moved In
You Were Just A New Faceby justin milani 166 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 10:20 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
god please
i know it's been a whileby Zombiefreak13 43 lines, 7 comments, on May 11 12:12 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [28]
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I can't believe how hard it is
just to talk to you.by Rocky Leigh 69 lines, 1 comment, on May 10 6:59 PM. In pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Drowning blissfully, sweetly suffocating...by Nienna Calmcacil 23 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 17 9:09 AM 2008. In IDK• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A new face,
a new desire,by temporarybeauty 20 lines, 4 comments, on May 10 7:50 PM. In Angst, My life, Personal., Teenage thinking, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I pray the night comes swiftly,
Gazing down the halls once traveled,by MirrorIrorriM 23 lines, 3 comments, on May 4 8:42 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hugs and kisses
Dreams and wishesby hisfallenangel821 31 lines, 5 comments, on May 5 7:04 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In a magic garden
She wore a summer dressby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 9 10:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I prayed to God tonight, to take me out,
To stop the pain, so I wouldn't shout,by justafeller 58 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 17 6:36 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I stand on the Bow
As we sail through St. Clairby Raymond E. Belz Jr. 113 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 28 12:12 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The time passing by so quickly you didn't even notice it at all
A terrifying scream echoing through your mind that won't leave you aloneby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 60 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 22 11:37 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I stood waiting in line
For an amazing rideby Maddawg16 19 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 15 10:15 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Having Parkinson’s Disease is a
Little Like being Humptyby Pietro456 39 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 8:15 PM• Viewed by judge. -
I bind this love forever about the doors of fate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This was written as a letter to a family who lost their little one year old girl this morning. 7/22/08 at approximately 0730 this morning.by UnManned4Ever 39 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 22 11:03 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Death, Longing, Sadness, Message, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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every special encounter
leaves a trace in our soulby mdownunder 38 lines, on May 10 7:26 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How did we get here?
Fall so desperately apart?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Here For You
I don't want to know what tomorrow may bring,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have this secret
A secret so deep• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I tango in the blazing flames of your eyes
Consuming me with the fires of your craving heart,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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