how much hell have you been through

~hi everyone this will be my 11th contest~

What I want is poems or lyrics about..

Breaking up..

The worst thing a guy or girl ever did to you...

The worst thing that ever happened to you..

well, pretty much I don't want any thing happy..

Swearing is allowed

Now for the rules,

1. Only rhyme
2. No Crazy typing like this CrAzY tYpInG or cRaZy TyPiNg
3.No dirty pretty

Most importantly have FUN
Trophy's will be added as the contest goes on

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 12
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
• Final notes:
  Thank you to everyone that entered
  you all had great writes I'm sorry I didn't comment I have been really busy I promise you will all get a comment soon
  I hope you all enter my future contest
  I'll be having a title contest tonight
  Keep writing Everyone!

Contest Winners

1. Nightmare

   Fed up stress, hold my breath,
   ten seconds flat, swear I'm gonna snap.

   by D3vils blood 18 lines, 12 comments, on May 7 2:59 AM. In Dark, Personal, Life, Pain, Escape, Hate, Self, Thoughts
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Do You Feel Like a Man?

   by DramaQueen469 18 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 12 8:57 PM 2006. In Sad, Abuse, Angst, noguest
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Retrospection

   Hush little baby, don't you cry,
   daddy's gonna sing you a lullaby.

   by maktub 72 lines, 16 comments, on May 14 10:48 PM 2008. In pain, abuse, dark, life
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Splintered.

   by OurxBeginning 37 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 30 12:24 PM 2007. In Personal, Abuse, Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. I am a girl

   by DinkyDiver 38 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 19 9:04 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Contest, Angst, Personal, Life
   Honorable mention

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6. Infected

   by Vintage Chiffon 31 lines, 15 comments, on May 7 12:59 AM
   Honorable mention

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7. The obituaries lie. [Somethings are better left alone]

   I trace the scars that cover my arms,
   Each telling a story of my unworthy broken heart.

   by RawrSmileBabyPlz 28 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 9:39 PM
   Honorable mention

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8. Mirror Image

   Your mannequin on display
   I count the years i spent in disarray

   by MissMandiDoll 28 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 9:13 AM
   Honorable mention

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Entries [71]

• Valentines Day "Love" Note

  I awoke in the morning on lovers day,
  an empty space in my bed, had given me the shivers,

  by Cyanide Dreams 56 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 28 9:45 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Love, Other, Contest

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• Average Teenage Girl

  Was never fat, but I wanted thinner.
  Wasn’t ugly, but I wanted prettier.

  by maktub 64 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 2:56 AM

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• Lost...Parts of Me are Lost

  by maktub 104 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 11 4:17 AM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, My life, rape

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• War Paint

  crazed as sin
  she stroked her face

  by Jake Summers 18 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 31 9:44 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Society, Thoughts

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• It could be Worse

  Ever had one of THOSE days?

  by Lamia 46 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 26 9:34 AM 2004. In Humor

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• Don't Need Him

  by MysticBlue 16 lines, 10 comments, on May 6 1:14 AM. In Adult, Contemporary, Contest, Erotica, Life, Love, Other, Personal, Society, Thoughts

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• a burning realization.

  by heavenbird 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 1:23 AM

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• Transplant

  Lie upon the table dear,
  We'll find out what's the matter here.

  by SirChristophe 45 lines, on May 1 11:29 PM

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• Televisions In The Dark (Won't Turn Off By Themselves)

  So we're repeating and repeating and repeating
  As if the records were skipping inside our ears

  by HailTheHeartBreaker 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 28 2:42 AM

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• Why Didn't You Leave The Super Glue?

  you left your good bye memo, I fell like piecemeal
  nothing remained but my shattered heart to mend

  by MysticBlue 13 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 14 12:43 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

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• Words I need to hear

  Regardless of the distance, can't we still give this a go?
  Never meant to get so close but how could we both have known?

  by abmsem 33 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 27 10:50 AM. In Love, Dark, Personal, Pain, Sad

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• Bastard Is Gone

  by MysticBlue 25 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 16 11:15 AM. In Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

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• Nightmare Child [revised]

  The shattered hues of twisted dreams;
  Such horrors dwell within this child's mind.

  by Pocket Rocket 16 lines, 24 comments, on May 6 10:27 PM. In pain, fear, dark, insanity, hope, Sad, sickness, life, Sonnet, dreams

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• Picture Perfect

  To those who suffer from anorexia or bulimia...this one's for you .

  by MysteriousStrangerX 30 lines, 30 comments, on May 3 5:53 AM

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• Remember

  by D3vils blood 27 lines, 3 comments, on May 7 1:43 AM. In Angst, Lyrics, Dark, Life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Remember Back

  by D3vils blood 35 lines, on Apr 22 11:17 AM. In Abuse, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Family, Personal

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• [ How can this pain be a form of gain? ]

  How can this pain be a form of gain? SO much pain, without anything.

  by XXxXBassMeisterxXxX 16 lines, on Jun 16 11:29 PM 2008. In Suicide, sad, dark

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• Beautiful Bitch

  Our true love,
  Oh how sweet it was,

  by XxCandNxX 20 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 10:02 PM

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• Apricot Cologne

  My experiences working in an Alzheimers ward in a nursing home.

  by MysteriousStrangerX 53 lines, 64 comments, on Nov 25 2:11 AM 2008. In Life, Other, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts

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• I'll hide my make up smeared eyes, to show that I tried.

  by Candy Morphine 61 lines, 3 comments, on May 2 8:26 PM

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• Victim

  When i was young and in my prime_i had no money not a single dime_i met this man,he was filthy rich_he married me,abused me and called me

  by kasickle 0 lines, 19 comments, on Oct 27 2:57 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Sad

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• I fell in love....

  by moaner 22 lines, 7 comments, on May 3 3:02 PM. In Adult, Abuse, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• The Fig Trees

  by Blissfullhatred 22 lines, on May 5 7:21 PM. In Sad, Pain, Personal, Adult, Dark, Suicide, Depressed, Teenage thinking, Goodbyes

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• Disturbed

  Punishment bread's resentment and hatred.
  i had never been punished by my parents;

  by Blueskywonder 6 lines, 5 comments, on May 7 6:43 AM. In mental illness, Personal, Thoughts

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• Daddy

  daddy, you beat me
  but i still loved you so

  by brandywine 28 lines, 6 comments, on May 7 7:32 AM. In Abuse, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, My own style, Depression, Sadness, Hate, Self

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• Show Appeal

  Why don’t you show appeal
  When I show ya my deal?

  by Milkweed 14 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 17 9:49 PM. In Contemporary, Angst, Pain, Sad, Personal, Life, Thoughts

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• Myself

  One day---
  I saw myself

  by roland halloway 55 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 25 10:37 PM

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• I can't forgive

  I can't forgive myself
  For letting you go

  by Isolatedsouls17 138 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 8 3:54 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Contest, Society, Nature

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• If...

  If I could go back into the past,
  I would of never laid my eyes on you.

  by RawrSmileBabyPlz 31 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 19 7:17 PM. In Weird, Life, Love, Pain

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• Candlelight

  Candle Light
  A candle lit, a candle doused,

  by Raven De Winter 33 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 14 9:21 PM 2005. In Other, Dark, Angst

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• Murderer

  Why do you do this thing to me? / You blinded me and I couldn't see. / I thought I was in love. / I wish I could fly away like a dove. / Why do you fancy this thing you do? / Especially when I don't fancy you. / M

  by angel of the dead 14 lines, 3 comments, on May 14 2:06 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Abuse, Death, Anger, Sadness, Hate, Beat

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• Body Of Mine

  by roland halloway 65 lines, 49 comments, on May 6 10:45 AM. In Erotica, Weird

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• from- A Longing

  How I remember her well-- She clears the darkness with a path of light. And brightens the most hideous night. There is no compromise- for t

  by roland halloway 34 lines, 42 comments, on Apr 23 9:44 PM

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• A child's wish

  If I grow a little taller,
  Is daddy comin home,

  by carebear123 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 31 10:22 AM. In Loss, Children, Sad

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• Without You

  Running down the road chasing him,
  Trying to talk but he wont listen,

  by DeadandHeartless 14 lines, 1 comment, on May 7 10:10 AM

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• Me or Weed

  The night he came over,
  

  by DeadandHeartless 40 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 26 7:02 PM. In Pain, Other, Personal, Sad, Hope, Life, Longing, Happiness, Love

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• Bloody Black Rose

  You come home and kiss me,then you hand me a beautiful rose,

  by DeadandHeartless 14 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 24 7:14 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Sad, Hurtful

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• Memories of their death...

  something horrible, and I don't mean your writing skill. I mean write about something horrible, like the 9/11, or abuse, or maybe someone k

  by XxTaintedRainxX 24 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 14 3:25 PM. In Contest, Sad, Pain, My own style, My life, Longing, Family, Self, Goodbyes

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• I Can Be Nineteen And I Want To Die

  I hate this part right here,
  there’s too much gloom and not much cheer.

  by charmander13 91 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 26 10:04 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Life, Abuse, Loss, Hate, Goodbyes

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• Have You Ever?

  Have you ever lived my life?
  Spent one minute in my shoes?

  by Princess Cuddle Bug 43 lines, on Apr 1 8:57 AM

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• Exactly What You Wanted.

  Running..
  From the man in my nightmare.

  by SaviDropKick.Oi. 60 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 7:01 PM

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• Final Solution

  I tried to give you what was left of me, But it was not enough
  

  by Acidbath 31 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 25 2:43 PM

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• Agony Unheard

  I wrote about my pain
  I've written about my need

  by Acidbath 29 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 2:34 PM

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• Normal?

  by Acidbath 47 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 27 6:09 PM

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• The truth Of Me

  by Seraphim Flame 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 8 4:43 AM. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Erotica, Fantasy, Hope, Humor, Life

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• Deceit

  The compulsion to believe the lies grow,
  Darkness rules and light has nowhere to go.

  by Seraphim Flame 19 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 5:00 AM. In Nature, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird

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• My Daddy

  Abuse, abuse , abuse, its all life is

  by Stolen memories 87 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 30 9:02 AM. In Abuse, Pain, Sad, Suicide, Rape, Abyss, Dark, Death

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• Destroyed

  by Stolen memories 8 lines, on Apr 12 11:31 AM

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• Once on the front of my binder

  Once on the front of my binder
  I wrote a poem

  by Stolen memories 42 lines, 32 comments, on May 8 10:54 AM. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Emo, Depression, Self, Depressed, Teen issues, Goodbyes

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• Lets Evaluate My Pain... Not Even All Of It...

  How does it feel to know
  that one person can go through so much.

  by Ignis Corpus 34 lines, 1 comment, on May 9 6:11 AM. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Hurt, Dark, Life

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• The Fight to Forgive.

  I hate you for all the pain you've inflicted,
  For making me hateful and vindictive.

  by Ghettobutalright 39 lines, 7 comments, on May 6 11:27 PM. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Sad

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• the Worst Man of My Life

  by Treasure 5 30 lines, 2 comments, on May 11 12:33 PM. In Life

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• Far above her head

  You ooze the vomit,
  I'll drip the blood.

  by Nameless-Unknown 33 lines, on May 10 10:57 PM. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Psychiatric, Hospital, Psych

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• Stars and Moon

  Look at the sky so smoggy and bright. But behind the clouds is a beautiful light.
  Oh, it’s alright.

  by Addicus 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 12 12:05 PM. In Personal, Sad

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• Life of a Ninja

  You slip through the shadows in and out
  And pray noone knows that you are moving about

  by Zurkov 13 lines, 3 comments, on May 11 10:50 AM

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• Physical I Can Handle

  I can handle pain like broken ribs or a split skull.
  Because physical pain is dull

  by Ghettobutalright 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 8:12 AM 2006. In Angst

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• A Soldier's Way

  by Zurkov 13 lines, 10 comments, on May 8 10:22 AM. In Thoughts, War, Humanity, Society, Family

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• A Debt to Repay

  The sun was shining so brightly,
  that beautiful summers morn.

  by flyfly 48 lines, 10 comments, on May 11 7:42 AM. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Pain

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• Death's Wrath

  by Zurkov 19 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 6:36 PM. In Dark, Thoughts

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• RIP MARINE love your almost wife

  i looked into your eyes, my sniper, my patrolman,
  silently crying choaking back a sob

  by camo.egg.army.gurl 28 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 29 10:12 PM 2008

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• my shattered life

  i have always loved you and you loved me
  i saw the love in your eyes

  by camo.egg.army.gurl 68 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 26 12:34 PM 2007. In angst, hope, hate, life, love, pain, sad, thoughts, forgiveness

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• an old relationship

  but, if i go, to you, my promise, i betray........
  i dont know anymore, what is best for me.........

  by camo.egg.army.gurl 31 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 19 1:44 AM 2007

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Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  Griswold
  May 7
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  Oh good lord!!!!! Uncle Griz is going to have a seizure, turn off the flashing lights!!!
• 
  ToXiC-AnGeL
  May 7
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  LMAO
  
  I Loved the Background
  Poor OLD Uncle hehe
• 
  DarkHunter
  May 7
  Edit | Reply
  The fact we are alive is hell enough,
  where we go from here who knows.
• • 
    Manda Kathryn
    May 7
    Edit | Reply
    *nods in agreement*
    Here here!
• Vera Rich
  May 7
  Edit | Reply
  How, if you please, do you expect your competitors to "have fun" writing about the "worst things" that have ever happened in their lives!
  
  And please - do remember that flashing lights on-screen can cause migraine and even epileptic seizures.
• 
  stella187
  May 7
  Edit | Reply
  I cannot stay here long enough to read or write anything.
• 
  MissMandiDoll
  May 7
  Edit | Reply
  you will be seeing a write from me
  but im going to work on it throught the week
  i dont want to add a prewrite
  i hope everything goes well!
• • 
    Ami
    May 9
    Edit | Reply

    Hey..

    Let me know if you still plan on entering..
    Planning on closing early got alot of entries
    
• OurxBeginning
  May 12
  Edit | Reply
  Thanks for the Honorable Mention. Congrats to everyone else as well.
• 
  DramaQueen469
  May 12
  Edit | Reply
  Thankyou so much for the silver hun!!
  
  Maria

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