Okay this is my first contest and i wanted it to be for everyone. so bring forth the poems....
rules
1. NoNe Of ThIs
thats my only rule. I am 19 so i am used to cursing. Anyway good luck to you all.
rules
1. NoNe Of ThIs
thats my only rule. I am 19 so i am used to cursing. Anyway good luck to you all.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 6
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: i will be hosting another contest soon and i hope i will get good poems like all the ones i read again. Thanks for entering.
Contest Winners
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I don't want to breathe air,
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My life was once an empty canvas
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [47]
1 - 47 of 47
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I don’t wanna see myself
30 years ago.by fanniesson 25 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 13 6:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am the bearer of water, the carrier of rainfall, the life force of growth, the rainforst in bloom.
i bring laughter and joy, the inner w• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Put on your pretty heels
your going out dancingby Minstrel-Morose 5 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 28 4:41 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crystal petals unfurl,
Their misty surface glistening• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The juggler is most curious,
Tosses pins into the air• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Ambling through the .....• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My mind wanders back and forth
I hear voices screaming to let them outby Gypsy-Girl 23 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 14 11:30 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Upwards floats the Fire Fairy
Skin as hot as flameby brokenknuckles 33 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 28 11:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I don't even really know you,
I've never met you,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
all the sky separates your lungs from mine,
and yet trickles of oxygen• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Am I the song you never sang?
The bell you never rang?by Tawnyy 17 lines, 2 comments, on May 4 12:46 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I bleed onto paper
When I cry, the story writes itselfby Simp 21 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 8 11:24 PM 2007. In Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Smoking my usual teatime cigarette
I watched as• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The voices echo
she is the mistake!by theflamepoetess 35 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 21 2:10 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my eyes burn with the tears i cannot vry
my lips tingle with the murmur of a lieby Guerrero 26 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 27 10:45 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
something horrible, and I don't mean your writing skill. I mean write about something horrible, like the 9/11, or abuse, or maybe someone kby XxTaintedRainxX 24 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 14 3:25 PM. In Contest, Sad, Pain, My own style, My life, Longing, Family, Self, Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The doctors say it's just a matter of time, how come I never knew.
That behind this solid exterior, ther's a weaker side of you.by Misunderstood 49 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 19 5:43 PM. In Love, Angst, Pain, Personal, Contest, Dark, Sad, Spiritual, Hope, Thoughts, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wonder how you sleep at night, knowing all you've done
Each time we thought maybe you'd stick around - you decide to run• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Each slope of granite etched aloft, ensured her time alone,
The echo's of her sobs unheard, were locked in by the stone.by BeachBum1 15 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 3 7:00 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
everything seems too quiet
as of lateby Raven De Winter 37 lines, 10 comments, on May 1 7:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You Went Through Pain To Bring Me To Life
You Helped Me Take My First Steps• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Deathless Kris 18 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 25 7:55 PM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Her trajectory was irregular and s he smelled like toasted vanilla and charred strawberries. Her foot steps cut shadows into liquefied ground and built oasis-es of glitter nuclei. Bacteria cut through her calves, infected witby Writing0Freedom 26 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 9:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Tranquillis-P.T.R. 61 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 26 8:35 PM. In Adult, Contemporary, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Spiritual, Weird, Thoughts...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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For me you are precious like a Queen
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Carnitine dripping follicles
Parables of ice cream disastersby hypnorocker 14 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 7 10:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i am trying to comment on all of the poems if you havent noticed but i wont be on for the rest of today.... if i didnt come to you today i will tommorow.
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thank you!
for the bronze
i am happy that you felt mine deserved that. hope you have a blessed day
xoxo
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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem
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i loved them both. They were amazing. Thank you for writting them.
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