okzz welcome to ny Quickee,
Now let's start:
Have you ever loved a guy/girl or even liked them though you have never talked to him/her??? of course, who hasn't!!
Have you ever dreamt of that person knowing pretty well that he's not dreaming of you!!
Have you ever thought of that person constantly, knowing pretty well that he might not even remember your face??
I want you to write about a one-sided love you experienced or not....
Or.... just write about love in general.
I want something deep, brilliant and touching....
just want you to know that I prefer free verse but u can write rhyme or whatever form u wish, make sure it's good.
Rules:
1. I want proper punctuation & GRAMMAR.
2. no novels plz.
3. write *one-sided love* in ur AN
4. No swearing...
5. STiCKy cAPS ALLOWED
Now let's start:
Have you ever loved a guy/girl or even liked them though you have never talked to him/her??? of course, who hasn't!!
Have you ever dreamt of that person knowing pretty well that he's not dreaming of you!!
Have you ever thought of that person constantly, knowing pretty well that he might not even remember your face??
I want you to write about a one-sided love you experienced or not....
Or.... just write about love in general.
I want something deep, brilliant and touching....
just want you to know that I prefer free verse but u can write rhyme or whatever form u wish, make sure it's good.
Rules:
1. I want proper punctuation & GRAMMAR.
2. no novels plz.
3. write *one-sided love* in ur AN
4. No swearing...
5. STiCKy cAPS ALLOWED
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 16
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I had many brilliant entries that deserve trophies but i don't have enough points.. anywayzz congratz to the winners & thanks to all those who entered my contest.
much of love,
Sweet innocence
Contest Winners
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Coincidence, twist of fate, or maybe just a fluke?
If I stopped to take the chance, would I reap rebuke?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Guttural internal explosions
wracking frail and flimsy frames• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Instead of my routinely forty five seconds, of
casual sloppy tooth brushing,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
It’s the haunting strains, of an old refrain, that find my lonely heart,
those days of bliss, that I sorely miss, now that we’ve drifted a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I can promise you that when I'm there with you, it will all be different
you'll forever hold my heart, and in my eyes you will forever gliby xxSerendipityxx 72 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 20 9:46 AM. In Contest, Life, Love, Longing, Happiness
Honorable mention
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The thunder’s booming, darkness falls,
I run outside, the music calls.by Sunkissed xo 40 lines, 37 comments, on Nov 21 1:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Why can’t I say the things I feel?
Always too late• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A day will come
That the winds whisper your nameby A-Solitary-Fantasy 19 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 15 7:35 PM. In Love, Personal, Sad, Dedication, Longing, Lesbian• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Wished you loved me,the way I loved you!!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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This dilatory demise doesn’t look like its going to stop this time
Please watch me fall, and smile while doing soby amielouisex 31 lines, 3 comments, on May 6 5:27 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
You're a genie of the lamp
your magic is too powerful• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
more than the drops of rain
that have ever fallenby Iridessa MoonFlower 24 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 29 7:43 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [49]
1 - 49 of 49
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All I see,
Is the light,by Alive Again 12 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 28 3:29 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Don't you just hate it when you find the one
And she smiles and laughs, then turns and runsby JesseBruce 43 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 16 1:16 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Treasure 5 41 lines, 5 comments, on May 1 9:40 PM. In Puppy love as my mother called it• Commented on by judge.
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Let's get this undeniable case in the open. I'm inevitably in love with you.by stepbystep 33 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 22 7:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Roses & Violets is about a breakup that happened to me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Golden and glorious shades dance on you
dance, Dance like my heart yearning for your soul.• Commented on by judge. -
I may say, you make me feel brand-new.
I may say, you bring out the best in me just you.by Frances 5 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 24 10:24 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Im lost at the cross of love
above the skyby HottieLaMottie-xoxo 5 lines, 1 comment, on May 6 7:51 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I'll just stand here on the ground
waiting for you to get off your swing;by HereComesTheSun 16 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 7:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i see this whole thing happening
but i understand it notby bwalker 36 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 14 4:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shining, twinkling star in the sky
Waiting patiently for a cow to fly by.by Little Shadow 21 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 30 3:48 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Stop stammering and act confident for once!
Now is not the time to look like a dunce.by Blue-Rose Beauty 33 lines, 27 comments, on Apr 7 10:27 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I just chatted with this young lady
Whom------I don't even know?by roland halloway 20 lines, 46 comments, on Apr 30 1:27 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is character to character, ♥• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Now that I have found you
I don’t want to let you go• Commented on by judge. -
I need to believe that it wasn't for not
That the powerful pleasures that I patientily fought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A journey to the Garden
Where each bud is nipped with rime.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How could you waste this place that we hadby prowess007 11 lines, 2 comments, on May 1 8:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I look at her closed eyes
She is so beautiful• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you don't know.
and i hate that,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Noela:
One day she thought she could tell him.by A m b r e a 49 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 30 5:25 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Look at me
Can you not seeby Princess Cuddle Bug 34 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 3 1:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
every time i think of him
a tear falls down my cheak• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
With just a glimpse of you
I had to pull myself awayby Isaac Bailey 18 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 9 2:42 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Am I cute enough for you, One with such an appearance.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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where do i enter
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I WANT HER LOVE.... rhys poulton
I WANT HER LOVE ....rhys poulton
ITS SO NEW... SHE'S LIKE A GENTLE COOL BREEZE ON MY SKIN BUT i WANT THE WARMTH WITHIN HER...
IF ONLY i COULD REACH IT
I GRAB HER AND THROW HER AGAINST ME..
SHE LOOKS AWAY
I GRAB HER FACE
I SCENT THE BLISS SHE OWNS
I TASTE IT THROUGH HER KISS
IT STEAMS OFF HER EYES AND LIPS AND SKIN LIKE IT'S BOILING WITHIN
IF NOT SO COMPRESSED.... IT WOULD OVERFLOW LIKE TEARS BURSTING FROM HER EYES..
i KNOW IT'S THERE
i FEEL IT COMING
SHE TREMBLES HER LIPS
SHE TREMBLES
i CAN FEEL IT...WRENCHING HER BODY
I WANT IT...TELL ME..
SHE PULLS BACK
... SHE NEVER FALLS
HER LOOK GONE
SHE LOOKS AWAY
NOT EVER CLOSE ARE THE WORDS i FOREVER WANT TO HEAR HER WHISPER FROM HER TREMBLING LIPS
NOT EVER HER CASCADING
SHE SAY'S "ONE DAY"
i FEEL POWERLESS... PURSUING HER BLISS
SO i WAIT FOR ONE DAY
IT KILLS ME... EVERY KISS
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ok guyzz!! the contest is closed for judging!! however I will extend it a bit!! so you can add your poems.
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