thank you so very much to the wonderful Aeris Silverlight for my 100th gold trophy 
so, let's celebrate. i want one of 2 things from you:
-your winning prewrite with at least 2 gold trophies. no more than 5 golds, though.
-your best poem that has never won anything and you think deserves gold.
hint: i prefer dark/sad/abstract writes. emo is not sad. bonus points if you can make me cry.
rules:
-FREEVERSE/PROSE ONLY.
-plain backgrounds only. and please, nothing that'll make me go blind.
-sensual is ok. porn is not. know the difference.
-angst is also ok. whiny, emo shit is not. know the difference.
-imagery and poetic devices are your friends. use them.
i am allergic to poor spelling and grammar, slang, typing like an idiot, teenage-vampire-bullshit, and rhyme of any kind. if i see this in my contest, i will dq you without explanation.
thank you in advance for following my rules.
good luck ♥
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 5
- Rewards: Gold: 1500, Silver: 1000, Bronze: 500, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Sorry this took so long to judge. My moving-date is a lot closer than I thought, so I didn't really have time to comment on everyone's entries.
Anyway, most of you did well, and as you can see, I added a lot of points. Your HMs are in order... Congratulations to the winners.
Now, back to packing.
Laura
Contest Winners
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I dreamt I could slide down the lines of your face. That I could slip into the shallow creases and ride them all the way down, until I drop off your jaw line and land on your belly. Lines like soft grooves in mahogany.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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See me; smitten through the transom in the rain;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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After a tormenting period of crimson stains and depression, I've found love.
Is it regret that makes you feel the need to take this from mby CentrifugalCorpse 20 lines, 2 comments, on May 6 5:39 PM. In Pain, Depression, Freewrite, Dark, Contest, Personal, Love
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by sweet arrival 76 lines, 30 comments, on Apr 6 3:41 PM. In Thoughts, Life, true story
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by Cynthia Gaines 19 lines, 4 comments, on May 12 11:12 PM. In Life, Society, Thoughts
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Entries [29]
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They imbed a deep harpoon and take you from your womb!! No one sheds a tear--It,s as if you were never here. They never gave you a chance-by roland halloway 46 lines, 25 comments, on Apr 15 11:21 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Please say that you love me, / even if you don’t. / I will just leave gleefully by hearing that. / And in the distance battlefield, / when• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Emotions still flowing
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by SomethingLovely 43 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 24 12:41 PM 2005. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Candle filled temple's rise
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Twas’ a loving young man called John (so it seems)
Married Rosie the beautiful girl of his dreamsby judmc 57 lines, 103 comments, on Mar 8 10:15 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My only true fear
Is to lose a friend,by XMISERABLExHAVOCx 11 lines, on Sep 13 4:19 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Progress takes away
what forever took to find.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Twisting tumbling backward triangles,
joined with diamond hinges.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
test your mind
test your eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The electricity crackles
The light flickersby Chocolate Chip 49 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 29 5:26 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Gone is the golden age of humanity,
When society was proud,by DoThoughtcrime 16 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 17 1:58 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
No, no, Please don't go.
I need you in my life.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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Wow congratulations sweetheart, I just got my 100th gold recently too. Thought I'd never get there lol. Here's to 100 more
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why thank you
congrats to you as well
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Many congrats on the trophy
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thankies
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congrats, love!
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awww, thanks poppet. now can we molest the statues on parliament hill? pweeeease?
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next time i'm in ottawa we should molest the statues and go dancing or something! although i don't know when that will be. i may go up to montreal next spring, as i'll be out of the states for a while (fortunately
) and will only be returning to finish a few weeks of school, collect my things, and say goodbye to everyone before i run away to latvia, lol.
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congratulations
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thank you
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Congrats, Laura! You deserved it

I'll see if I can find a poem that won 2 golds
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thank you my love
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I am not in the least surprised. Your poetry is amazing. You
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Congratulations on Your 100th Golden Chalice!!
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Wow thanks so much for the great
honour of gold ! & for holding
a wonderful contest
Congrats to all winners as well
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Thank you for the HM!!
Congrats to all the winners!! 










