Enter anything you would like I just want to comment on as many poems as possible. You will get a comment that is very indepth as well. The more the better enter everything you got for all I care BUT The only rule is it must be something I have never commented on before!! Thats not hard huh. Other than that absolutly anything welcome here!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 11
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: WOW I diffinatly made the 2000 mark and I got a Gold membership for judging this lol. I really loved all the poem that were entered. An amazing job everyone!
Contest Winners
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Fly free my little butterfly
With wings of blue and greenby Little Miss Mental 46 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 11:47 AM. In Personal, Nature, Hope
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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His cello is the only thing
he doesn't knowby ThisIsMyWonderland 18 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 23 6:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She had couture in her punctuation,
but without him there to rearrange her wordsby ThisIsMyWonderland 12 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 23 4:58 PM. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
These crashing waves
keeping pushing me down.by ThisIsMyWonderland 8 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 23 8:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Pecan pie
sliced into eightby Pocket Rocket 38 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 23 6:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If I ever went swimming
in a chocolate coated dream,by Pocket Rocket 18 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 30 10:32 PM. In Children, Dreams, Imagination, Rhyme, Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
concubines binding muffin stars
licking devilfish off the floor of Atlantisby lunarlunacy 13 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 31 8:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When i see a little girl being raped, i die a thousand tiny deaths. When i see a person in need give up, i die a thousand tiny deaths. Each death is a flame of fire, licking away, with each tentilizing flame, my soul until itby CharlieBrown93 0 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 2 11:13 PM. In Death, Freewrite, Escape, Teenage thinking, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My friends and i get bored during class, so we make each other word banks so we can write poems during class. This is one of mine that i wby CharlieBrown93 37 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 17 6:04 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I got bored one night so I took a walk in my backyard. It was dark and I looked up into the sky and this is what happened.by CharlieBrown93 96 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 6 8:39 PM. In Hope, Life, Nature, Personal, Thoughts, Lost in thought, Freewrite, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What i witnessed in that room. Her innocence was stripped away at age six. All things pure about her gone, forever taken by a 54 year old man. Her screams echo throughout the room like the piercing stab of fifty thousand kniv• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Another word bank poem, but i lost it...i wrote this during english while people were presenting their genocide powerpoints...by CharlieBrown93 32 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 6:14 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Change is coming soon,
but it all starts with me.by CharlieBrown93 1 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 19 9:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gold! Gold! Gold! Gold!
The yellow metal has intrinsic value,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The background of why Good riddance by Green Day has been my favorite song for the past few years...by CharlieBrown93 94 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 7:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hear me,
for here I am,by CharlieBrown93 9 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 8:43 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Her bloodshot eyes stare at me through unsuspecting windows somedays. At night her face pops up in my dreams, turning them into living hells. I see her come at me with our kitchen knife in her hand. She'll smile at me, like sby CharlieBrown93 0 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 10:41 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My room is black,
the moon radiates yellow,by CharlieBrown93 11 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 21 11:53 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see you.
Do you see me?by CharlieBrown93 16 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 21 11:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her blonde hair is soft,
tangled and wet.by CharlieBrown93 10 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 8:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
On a dark night of my wandering
I heard the trumpets roarby awannabepoet 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 11:48 AM. In Contemporary, Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Five years to the day,
to the minute actually,by CharlieBrown93 32 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 22 10:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We laugh together,
we smile together,by CharlieBrown93 8 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 10:41 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Someday I cry myself
to sleep at night.by CharlieBrown93 9 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 10:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The poison that is my myself
Deadly, yet so innocentby ley527 12 lines, 25 comments, on Sep 25 6:29 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I really dont like to get the mail in the afternoons.by CharlieBrown93 15 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 10:48 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If first impressions matter,
don't be my friend.by CharlieBrown93 12 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 23 7:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To take a chance
is to take a risk,by CharlieBrown93 9 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 21 11:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
White waves washing the shore,
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A sinking ship drowns all the rats.
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by amaranthine lover 43 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 12 10:33 PM. In Contest, Abstract, noguest, NaPoMo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Let this start
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by lowercase prelude 31 lines, 20 comments, on Oct 6 8:14 PM 2008. In Contest, Society, Life, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shame on you; fool me
twice, shame on me.by ourgirlFriday 27 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 23 1:43 AM. In Personal, to a friend, Thoughts, past, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Drabble poem - 100 words exactly.by ourgirlFriday 22 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 23 12:23 AM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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searching for something that i need
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With the first light of dawn appearing at the horizon, I see them run,
My strong, fearless brothers, armed and dangerous,by Luci Ferraris 49 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 12 1:11 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You say you want to know me..............fine,
You say you gonna like me..................good,by Luci Ferraris 36 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 12 6:42 AM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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as far as I know you have never commented on my poems but how do I know for sure?
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I was thinking the same thing trekkergirl... people change their names so often on this site and some have so many names that it is hard to know who has and has not commented on your stuff anymore. My guess is that if the name which is hosting is not listed on the poem then we are safe... but then I am only assuming that... lol
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Maybe I'll put my poem in here from your last contest, which you never commented on!
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HAHAHA IM ENTERING ALLLL MY POEMS
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OMG!
This contest just BLEW UP! I am sure you will reach that limit !!!!
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