I have been depressed lately, well,
all of my life & I want to read poems
that make me feel your pain. I want to
hear about the lowest points in your life
where you gave up on everything and didn't
know where to turn to. And then how you
recovered, or ARE recovering. I want inspiration
to make me realize i'm not alone, and that I can
still make it through, and not give up, as I have
been lately.
Here are the options you can enter;
1] It can be about deep-throbbing heart break that
never died out, and you find it SO hard to move on.
2] You have endured abuse. I want to hear your story
and how you made it through the darkest nights.
3] I want to hear of drug addictions. How far you
went before you realized it was killing you, and
how you seeked help, are seeking help now,
and how you feel, if you changed, or are finding
it so hard to.
4] I want to hear about trauma. Any type of trauma
in your life you deal with; stress, depression, family/
friend battles, bi-polar disorder, any type of disorder,
or diseases, bad habits you find impossible to part from,
Alcohol abuse (either you or someone you know who has
that problem and what they went through)
5] People who are spiritual, I want to know how God has
helped you through the storm, or if you have drifted from
Him and are finding it so hard to stay close to Him in time
of need, as you feel the Devil is blocking your every move.
6] If your loved ones are ill, terminally ill. How did you, or
are you coping with the grief, stress, emotion, faith.
7] Thoughts of suicide. If you have tried, or thought about
it, I want to know why, what is so wrong in your lives for
you to make you induce self-harm or self-loathing.
8] Any type of pain you endured throughout your whole
life or recently, and how you have COPED, or are in the
process of COPING.... etc.
Please give me raw, painful emotion & imagery so that
I can feel what you are feeling, and empathize with
you. I don't appreciate what God has done for me lately
and I keep allowing myself to be pulled in by the Devil
and I am seeking help to stop, but I want to make sure
I continue seeking help, and not give up anymore.
Hearing your stories, will help me a great deal in
this, and encourage me to have hope, and
realize that others have suffered much worse
than me, to make me appreciate what I have.
I'm tired of knowing my own pain, I want to know
of others' and I want to empathize with you.
Rules
-No bashing
-No religious bashing
-Keep swearing to a minimum
-This will be an adult contest
as I don't want little children to
view the pain
-Make me feel.
That's all, enter as you wish....
photo credit: "Heartbroken" by ValentinaKallias @ deviantArt
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 17
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow, thank you all so much for entering. Each of you did a wonderful job and thanks for sharing your experiences with me, it truly made me feel.
Contest Winners
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Heres to getting better.by sinkfloridasink 31 lines, 5 comments, on May 6 5:55 AM. In angst, drugs, contest
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She always felt she was stopping him,
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by Glasyalabolas 94 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 22 9:28 AM 2007. In Freewrite, My own style, My life, Lost in thought, Depression, Self-Hatred, Suicide
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You'd better be ready, kid.
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by marc creamore 149 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 28 7:31 PM 2008. In Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Life, Personal, Thoughts
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My love is in the ground, and
this man, still walks free,
by Serenity-words 45 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 22 12:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Long sleeve shirts everyday at school
With no friends she meets• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
To the girl I know and knew before she dies:
by Mad As Rabbits 139 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 10:27 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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give me sublime transcendance of romance or give me death
rotting slowly with the wilted flowersby lunarlunacy 11 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 6 11:45 PM 2008• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm trapped in the circular motion
of the never ending reflectionsby thegirlsafaultline. 27 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 11 4:59 PM. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Eating Disorder, Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She screams for help
But no one hearsby PandorasBox 16 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 14 2:49 PM. In Pain, personal, children, bipolar, depression, sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She was only 8.
He took advantage• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hidden in a new disguise, running from these twisted lies.
Burning every bridge I built, trying to forget the guilt.by Niru Shadewalker 4 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 25 8:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can handle pain like broken ribs or a split skull.
Because physical pain is dullby Ghettobutalright 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 8:12 AM 2006. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i open my eyes..
i looking for a smile• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I dont know what is wrong with me
Its always something I cant seeby Shi no Kyofu 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 4 4:19 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dad - my real Dad was not there
so he left me in the care• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Again, surging thoughts of pain corrupts my mind.
I am loosing the one thing that kept me from self harm.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Spirits shelter us, giving us sanctuary
Placed on earth, so we can survive• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In my own cell, I cringe into the shadows of such pain
Laughter vibrates, coveting my head with both handsby Mistress Leala 16 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 9 10:01 PM. In Thoughts, Weird, Angst, Depression, Escape, Contest
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When I was so young
You took everything awayby TwiztidMaggot 14 lines, 10 comments, on May 5 9:39 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I fell for you
it all seemed right,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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Meaghan, just read everything I've ever written. Lol.. I do believe I have a poem that does say somewhere along the lines "I was born depressed". Which is probably true. I'm pretty low. Anyways good luck and have fun hosting this contest, sadly I don't feel like getting in to a funk right now, today is day one of happiness. Feel better Meg and if you need anything, don't hesitate to call me.
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Thanks hun

Yeah we gotta get together
once I get all this past me..
i'm sure you know the feeling
me and you are a lot alike lol -
I hope that things get better for you...
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Thank you hun

Things are getting a bit better,
just slowly that's all




