Ok, so this is my first contest. I want emotion(as stated in the title). I want to feel the heat in your veins or the happieness that lifts you. Try and show me something new, amazing. It can be about an experience you have had, how it made you feel. EXCEPT ABSOLUTELY NO EMO STUFF! I've seen plenty, thank you. I do enjoy the 'dark' poems... the twisted kind, however try not to be to gross about it. As for the love poems, Please, try and make them something i have never seen... like "don't just tell me you're heart is in the other persons hands" show me. I want to feel your write. I haven't cried reading anyones poetry.. yet. so 'Heck' Make me cry like im Two. Or just make me go "Awwh" :] -Have Fun-
and what we all enjoy oh so much the...
RULES
-No erotica.
-Try not to swear alot, it ruins the poetry for me at least.
-No cutting.
*If you'd like, you can read some of my poetry to get an idea of the way i think...and any of that stuff.. *
~~~ and i just started allowing pre writes for more entries... but PLEASE make sure they are good... and new poems will deffinately give you a better chance. ~~~
and what we all enjoy oh so much the...
RULES
-No erotica.
-Try not to swear alot, it ruins the poetry for me at least.
-No cutting.
*If you'd like, you can read some of my poetry to get an idea of the way i think...and any of that stuff.. *
~~~ and i just started allowing pre writes for more entries... but PLEASE make sure they are good... and new poems will deffinately give you a better chance. ~~~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 8
- Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 500, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you so much to every one for entering! You all did such an amazing job! and I very much wish I could have more trophys to distribute! There where amazing entrys! and you all showed me the talent here on AP! The winners are posted, comment if you'd like! This was very difficult to judge! Congradulations to the winners
Contest Winners
-
• Commented on by judge. [remove]
-
Tears cut like drops of acid,
as they etch into my face• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
by Ken-Maverick 56 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 21 8:24 AM. In Incarceration, Vignette, Noguest, Bronze
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Once lost in emotion
of darkness and despair• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Sir knight,
Why do you fight?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sing to me,
River of Song.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
All I want is for the emotion to be gone from
My eyes.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Melt my tears
So they can flowby submarine93 21 lines, 5 comments, on May 1 3:07 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Love,
What would you do?by DeadlyTurnip 40 lines, 3 comments, on May 7 9:18 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I'll just stand here on the ground
waiting for you to get off your swing;by HereComesTheSun 16 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 7:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Black dusted shadows
Wedge into each blank cornerby Shattered---Sanity 24 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 23 5:03 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [62]
1 - 62 of 62
-
The grip of such a dark hour
Taking hold with all their mightby T.o.r.t.u.r.e. 13 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 20 11:27 AM• Commented on by judge. -
We used to play
In the park,by lilmisspinky135 39 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 12:35 PM• Commented on by judge. -
You and I, circling around promises and rose gardens
Holding hands and nothing more and nothing moreby Gormanda 15 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 20 1:45 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Hey look
We’ve wound up here againby Popping Balloons 32 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 3:07 PM• Commented on by judge. -
The world is a very cruel place
Ive been hurt, which is trueby Suteishiijein 58 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 21 6:29 AM. In love• Commented on by judge. -
Once, for some unknown caveman reason,
my young blond-haired gentle son,by CarolDesjarlais 22 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 21 12:15 PM. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
This could have been said more emotionally but than it would seem like myother poems -sighs- If you enjoyed this please check outmy page toby XxTaintedRainxX 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 21 11:06 AM• Commented on by judge.
-
Sitting there helpless watching you...
Knowing It would be matter of minutes that I'd have to let you go.• Commented on by judge. -
My gentle parchment and anxious quill,
Be patient with my hands.by The Silent-Artisan 23 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 23 6:53 AM• Commented on by judge. -
do you care
do you notby The Twisted Rose 23 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 10:42 PM• Commented on by judge. -
by iGrok 41 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 4:07 PM. In Dark, Night, Personal, Sad, My own Style, Death, Depression, Freewrite, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Now you’re gone
And I have nothing left to sayby emii.kiilled.Diin0 27 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 10 2:35 PM. In Pain, Sad, Suicide, Depression, Emo, Sadness, Lost love, Dedication, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I had my arms open,
And now I lay broken.by Ceremonial 17 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 11:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Cannot.Be.Forsaken 14 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 27 11:56 PM. In Emo, Death, Escape, Personal, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
To those who suffer from anorexia or bulimia...this one's for you
.by MysteriousStrangerX 30 lines, 30 comments, on May 3 5:53 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh how they go about
In all their splendour and beauty.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It is emotional
It is consequential• Commented on by judge. -
She walks through the halls,
With a frown on her face,by Let-Me-Go 57 lines, 8 comments, on May 4 7:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
whatever it is
that carries love,by kedoconnor 15 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 31 9:03 AM. In love lost• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I still love you
and i know i shouldn't• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know you wont understand,
right now,
why they are putting mommy,by HatedLoveDieingRose 41 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 24 10:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you weep so?
I have told you that I would be there,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Inside me, there is a dancer.by AuburnBlessing 47 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 21 1:31 PM. In Life, Thoughts, Personal, Other, Hope, My own style, My life, Longing, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
I watched a flower blooming in fast forward
I made popcorn, I kissed a girlby Aesthete 21 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 1:04 PM• Commented on by judge. -
To kill my voice
Is now mine to kill.by Hushed Energy 20 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 29 12:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Still love you?
Why should I?by AloneForever- 83 lines, 6 comments, on May 7 5:10 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I sat in bed, and thought of forever with him
Standing next to him for the rest of my life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She turns on the light to tell me
and it hits me hard like a slapby Calandra Jane 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 5:19 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The searing hot lies
Are branded into my tongue• Commented on by judge. -
The crinoline folded around her insecurities,
hiding them away, for a day less exciting.by Live with a passion 35 lines, 1 comment, on May 7 11:31 PM• Commented on by judge. -
There is one place to find one,
with happyness,by IHaveNoClue 14 lines, 2 comments, on May 8 12:57 AM• Commented on by judge.
Add a comment
Comments
-
hah, you figured it out ...
Adding your comment:
