darkside

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 16
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  hey guyz i am so sorry for judging this contest for so long...
  coz i have been busy with my family...
  and now i am judging this contest cozz i am going to leave tomorrow at 5am with my father coz we will have vecation..and it will last for 21 days....
  bye everyone,..miss you all guyzzz

Contest Winners

1. Ghostly Prison

   An echo reverberates.
   A record skips.

   by Duce 63 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 1 11:00 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Relationships, Weird, Hope
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Alena

   Tonight…I sit in this chamber, dimly lit by a lone candle
   In its flickering light, my dead tormented eyes stare back

   by graybeard 33 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 29 10:40 AM
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5243863, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
4. You werent there

   All blood that was bled
   all the tears that were shed

   by XxAngelinTheNightxX 33 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 18 9:00 PM. In Dark, Love, Pain, Sad, emo
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Beautiful suicide

   I call upon the reaper, make me one of your wives.

   by Catacomb 18 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 4 12:16 PM. In Dark, suicide
   Honorable mention

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6. The Pastor (Extreme Adult Content)

   Home is indeed, where the heart is
   I would study her aura, her laughter, and her friends.

   by Timespell 94 lines, 137 comments, on Jan 4 7:28 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Acrostic, sick, DEVIL, evil, satanic, Weird

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7. Shouts of a Thousand Souls

   Screams of love,
   screams of hate,
   screams of anything you can think of.

   by foreverwoundedsoul 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 3:21 PM. In Thoughts, Weird, Personal., Other

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8. Dark Side of the Glass

   Night falls like a hammer, mirror casts a shadow form,
   reflections dim to black as new moon rises through the storm.
   

   by Darkwell 24 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 8 4:58 AM

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9. Apocalypse

   The Moon Rises Up Red.
   And all hell is released,

   by Demonic Beauty 40 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 21 1:38 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Spiritual, Weird

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
10. Error: Unable to find finalist item , it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
11. Rain all night

    Cold rain drops fall on her face
    as she silently weeps in sorrow

    by xXBloodyravenXx 14 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 18 10:30 PM. In Cutting, Pain, Dark, Sad, Death, Suicide

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
12. War Paint

    crazed as sin
    she stroked her face

    by Jake Summers 18 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 31 9:44 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Society, Thoughts

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
13. Sip Of Contaminated Love!

    by sweet innocence 7 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 8 5:36 AM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Lost love, Hate, Angry, Anger, Death, Angst, Pain

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
14. Darkness Comes

    by Susan E. Pennycuff 52 lines, 31 comments, on Mar 4 12:28 PM 2007. In Dark

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15. Strike match- conflicting friction.

    A conflict ever eternal, always internal.
    Even with nothing but placidity

    by eating vertigo 58 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 26 7:50 AM. In addiction, love, pain, sorrow, loss, spiritual, thoughts, angst, insanity

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16. another tragic love story

    I close my eyes and remember the last time I saw you
    I had finally gotten you to admit you loved me too

    by JessicaMarieLewis 18 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 3:53 PM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Death, Sadness, Lost love, Emo, Loss, Escape

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
17. Vampires

    A world beneath existence
    Feeding on all that's alive

    by YOtta 22 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 10:40 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Dark

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18. depressed soul

    Depression which is setting into my soul
    weakens me to the point that I cannot

    by LucifersAngel 19 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 11 9:07 PM 2008

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19. The Final Letter

    This is my final letter,
    my letter of good-bye.

    by Shadow Keeper 116 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 11 11:08 PM. In Pain, Dark, Death, Emo, Depression, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Suicide, Personal

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
20. Winter's Trees

    by explain.everything 78 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 10 3:31 AM. In fear, dark, pain, murder, angst, Abuse, Adult

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21. Are you sleeping?

    I see you laying there and it's cold in this room.
    You're laying on the floor it's dirty gosh it needs a broom.

    by Simp 187 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 14 2:29 PM 2006. In Dark

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
22. The Past I Hate

    The long dark past covered by the black raven night
    I try not to remember that time I try with all my might

    by Kyuutan-megumi 25 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 13 5:09 PM. In Dark, Fantasy, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Insane, Vampires, Blood

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23. Follow

    I'll follow you, if you'll follow me. We'll meet together in a grave, and when we get there, at the gates we'll hear the words 'the judged be damned and the wretched saved.'Then we'll lie together with these whispered sins, h

    by JaydinC 19 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 21 4:52 PM 2008. In Personal, Lyrics, Sad, Dark

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24. Knowledge or Negligence

    He walks this land; an immortal He does not eat nor does he sleep

    by Endlessperspectives 65 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 28 11:29 PM 2008

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25. The Closet

    Some people cope in very strange ways...

    by MysteriousStrangerX 41 lines, 52 comments, on Nov 14 12:15 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Abuse

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26. I Can Be Nineteen And I Want To Die

    I hate this part right here,
    there’s too much gloom and not much cheer.

    by charmander13 91 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 26 10:04 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Life, Abuse, Loss, Hate, Goodbyes

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27. Posh Bit Of Nosh (EXTREME ADULT CONTENT)

    by Timespell 164 lines, 43 comments, on Nov 4 3:31 PM 2007. In Contest, Dark, Serial killer, sick, murder, Erotica, ADULT, disturbed

    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
28. They Say that a Hero Can Save Us...

    What the fuck you liars?

    by XxFacemyfearsxX 19 lines, 1 comment, on May 3 7:55 PM. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Other, Life, Dark

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29. Words I need to hear

    Regardless of the distance, can't we still give this a go?
    Never meant to get so close but how could we both have known?

    by abmsem 33 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 27 10:50 AM. In Love, Dark, Personal, Pain, Sad

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30. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2658014, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [201]

• Shoot me...

  Shoot me,
  Stop the pain,

  by Broken Life 32 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 30 5:08 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Death

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• Eyes of the Beholder

  How should my heart beat When you took it

  by darkdreamer1 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 3:35 PM 2008. In Abuse

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• Help Unwanted

  I want to walk alone.
  I want to feel the pain.

  by Horrific Hollis 24 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 28 10:41 PM 2008. In Dark, Abuse, Sad, Life, Pain, Suffereing, Other, Emo

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Your Vitals

  hello my sweetheart
  ive come back to play

  by moaner 23 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 13 11:45 AM. In NaPoMo, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• This is the end

  On and on this hell goes
  unless I dare to stop it now

  by Hearts.That.Bleed 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 8:06 AM 2006. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Death, Depression, Emo, Suicide, Teen issues

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A phoenix arises

  It is I
  one who is so tired

  by trekkergirl 28 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 19 9:48 AM. In Contest

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• Broken

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 7 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 12 7:02 PM

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• Artistically Broken

  in-scope of riches
  she sold her flesh

  by Sweet Sorrow 24 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 18 8:05 PM 2008. In Dark, Thoughts

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• Traintrack

  Each cut makes me stronger,
  as the piercing razor draws blood.

  by abmsem 17 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 16 3:51 PM. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• Can't

  I can't {handle} anymore
  I'm breaking a-p-a-r-t

  by KelsiEvermore 30 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 19 12:57 AM. In Dirty Pretty, Sad, Pain, Dark, Emo, Sadness, Depression, Depressed, Self

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• kill me now

  Kill me now because I'm already dead
  kill me now because i've sinned

  by FreeFalling911 16 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 19 9:19 AM. In sad, dark, personal, pain

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• Bloodletting

  by ratkos 30 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 3 12:21 AM 2008

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• Whispers in the shadows/ enter the realm of shadows reserve

  Question your own feeble mind
  When you enquire as to the shadow, sitting

  by English.Muffin 34 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 14 11:10 AM. In shadow, darkness, evil, pain, fantasy

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I Am!

  by Stolen memories 18 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 30 8:56 AM. In Abuse, Adult, Pain, Sad, Suicide, Rape, Abyss, Dark, Death

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Night Ritural

  the night falls without a sounds,
  soulles are we.

  by midnight vampire 12 lines, on Apr 14 11:22 AM. In personal, Pain, Sad, Dark, Spiritual

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• .08 seconds.

  It was the taste,
  I remember it so clearly.

  by Bryan K Johnson 26 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 10 4:50 AM 2006. In Dark, Other, Weird

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• Rhythmic Suicide

  hear their words
  whispered secrets

  by xo-bailee-xo 9 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 11 6:28 PM. In Pain, Sad, Suicide, Depression, My own style

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• Blood Red Sunset

  Too early to go home just yet,
  she takes another path.

  by Angierie 59 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 19 5:23 PM 2007. In Abuse, Rape, Murder

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• Carmilla's Masque

  I awoke to a diction
  Of all that is fiction

  by St. Anarchy 38 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 19 3:25 PM. In Dark, vampire, gothic, abstract, death

  • Commented on by judge.
• Fiery Obsession

  jealousy turned obsessive
  he forced her with heated fury

  by MichaelSavage 8 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 9 2:27 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

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• Colors Of Sin

  iridescent I am visible
  I try to disintegrate

  by MysticBlue 25 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 3 6:28 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Society

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• The Smell of Death

  The smell of death encased the man's clothes
  An era of foreplay triggering memories from before

  by Dagger68 26 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 13 7:13 PM. In Pain, Personal, Dark, Death

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• Forever Lost

  by Ami 27 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 5 8:05 PM. In Contest, Lyrics, Life, Pain, Dark, Thoughts, Suicide, Escape, Lost

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• Thank You For The Silence

  I've poured my worries down the drain,
  But the clouds still grey my vision,

  by Condemd RyeZing 58 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 19 6:23 PM

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• Judgement Day

  The sun and moon share the same withered skies. Staring down upon a broken earth. As if they were gods eyes.
  

  by Dark passenger 15 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 10:37 PM. In War, Hate, Anger, Death, Sad, Pain, Dark, JUDGEMENT, Lies, Eclipse, God

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• reflections

  i sit by the
  side of the

  by XxXLonelyTearsXxX 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 15 6:48 PM

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• Final Goodbye

  This is my final good bye I don’t mean to make you cry
  This is the end I’m telling you first my friend

  by Jepardy 21 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 6 7:27 PM

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• ~ helpless ~

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 20 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 19 8:58 PM. In Thoughts

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• Ya really wanna know?

  by Fritz O skennick 87 lines, 30 comments, on Jan 20 7:01 PM. In Pain, Personal, Self, Schizophrenia, Cutting, Suicide, Contest, Abuse, Adult

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• Damaged goods...

  Little pinpricks of cold
  Seeping through the cracks in my mind.

  by Fritz O skennick 30 lines, 37 comments, on Mar 7 3:43 AM 2008. In Dark, Depression, Schizophrenia.

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• Through Dark Eyes

  she was emo,
  she cut herself,

  by jasmine marie 27 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 21 8:11 PM

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• Hollow Man...

  by Fritz O skennick 30 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 18 8:07 PM 2008. In Pain, Self harm., Dark, Schizophrenia., Depression

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• A Symphony of Dark Desires...

  A divine symphony
  of archaic pleasures

  by Fritz O skennick 78 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 19 6:05 PM 2008. In Dark, Contest, Weird, Other, Longing, Madness

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• My Nuclear Winter…

  Ashes swirl
  and dance

  by Fritz O skennick 41 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 11 12:28 PM 2008. In Weird, Thoughts, Dark, Sad, Life

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• Wishes Come True

  Blood dripping on the floor

  by VampireKitty- 10 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 10 9:37 AM 2008. In Dark, Emo, Cutting

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• Familiar Crimson

  The familiar blade slices slowly
  savoring the pain

  by silent.insanity 23 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 23 3:36 PM

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• Cry

  No one will listen,
  or even take the time to look.

  by foreverwoundedsoul 15 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 4:28 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life

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• Fallen

  The hill where i lay
  is coming to an end

  by freeversefreak 25 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 9:10 PM

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• piper of the damned

  always, now, forever i play i am why you pray

  by shadow of the void 8 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 10 3:07 AM 2008. In Weird, Dark, My own style

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• One Wing Broken

  I do not know how and or why
  I am back here on Earth

  by MemeMassacre 16 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 17 11:38 PM

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• Till Death Do Us Part

  I will never leave you
  Even after death do us part

  by MemeMassacre 37 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 20 4:46 PM

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• Bittersweet Cupid; [I Don't Want This Anymore]

  by MemeMassacre 25 lines, 24 comments, on Apr 18 11:56 PM

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• It's just Paranoia

  by ToXiC-AnGeL 23 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 25 11:07 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Dark, Own thoughts, My Life, Suicide

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• Numina Occulta

  in the place smaller than light
  where thoughts become life

  by dabpunx 40 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 17 7:48 PM. In Lyrics, Dark, Spiritual, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Sad, Pain, Other, Nature

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• Empyreal Humor

  hydrometeors fall from uranus as i board the 4 o'clock shuttle. drenched with my own gnostic wonder i take an empty window seat next to no

  by dabpunx 16 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 20 6:33 PM. In Contemporary, Myth, Society, Sad, Humor, Life, Thoughts, Weird, Nature, Pain

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• Organic Silhouettes

  And God said,
  "Let there be dark"

  by dabpunx 57 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 6 1:06 AM 2008. In God, Light, Dark, Life, Existentialism, War, Personal, Transcendental, Patrio

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• On Betrayal and Abortion

  she saw my selfless angel
  but met my greedy devil

  by dabpunx 27 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 12 11:34 AM. In Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain, abortion, betrayal, darkness

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• Tragic

  the wilted flowers line the unkempt patio.
  the unread book sleeps in its case.

  by dabpunx 5 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 2 2:33 AM. In sad, contemplative, sorrow, death

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• Eaten Alive

  Inspiration- http://create-illusions.deviantart.com/art/Eaten-alive-on-the-inside-119942124
  

  by MemeMassacre 23 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 21 12:40 AM. In Dark, pain, personal, sad, emo, suicidal, hurt

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• The Cadaver Song

  So Dance with me My honey Be

  by Antipodi 39 lines, on Apr 21 12:51 AM. In Contemporary, Dark, Humor, Love, Lyrics, Weird, NaPoMo

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• i hate him

  no preview for this one. sorry.

  by brightXdarkness 19 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 12 8:10 PM 2007. In Abuse

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• Reach Out

  by Susan E. Pennycuff 10 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 6:24 AM. In NaPoMo, Dark, Pain, Life, Society, Thoughts, Hope, Angst, Abuse

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• Society's Vampire

  I was sitting in the hotel lobby
  When the stranger walked in from the rain

  by chael 33 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 4 8:02 PM

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• not in any lighter vein

  How do you measure
  the depth of brightness

  by Purush 19 lines, on Apr 21 6:08 AM

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• The Big Black Rose

  And now I've won, because we're done.

  by Green Manalishi 8 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 29 5:51 AM 2007. In Dark, Love, Personal

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• Liquid Crimson

  I’m waiting for a man
  To help me taste your sorrow

  by SaraTalon 40 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 5:08 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Abuse

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• Falling on Petals

  Please stop crying
  Your poison tears

  by SaraTalon 8 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 4 5:30 PM 2008. In Dark, Angst

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• Vampir Naştere

  I can still feel the glorious pain of it
  The deep ache that seems to seep into my soul

  by SaraTalon 12 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 30 12:50 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Vampire

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• Hunger

  Now I wish for your eyes to cry as mine have
  But salt water tears will not satiate my hunger

  by SaraTalon 24 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 11 3:32 PM. In Dark, Death, Anger, Freewrite, Hate, Angry, Blood, Tears, Loathing

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• Why(Etheree)

  Why / Did I / Tell that lie / Think I was sly / Now my face is red / Our sweet romance is dead / That is why all day I cry / Bemoan my fat

  by Billbard 12 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 30 9:11 AM 2007. In Sad

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• Why Did You Go(Swap Quatrain)

  by Billbard 21 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 30 8:41 PM 2006. In Other

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• Why No Care.(Monotetra)

  by Billbard 23 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 10:14 AM 2008. In Humor

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• My Suicide, 1 and 2

  There are so many
  People that i know

  by Crazy-Dan 171 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 19 7:31 AM 2008

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• The Stranger

  Hidden in the folds of a long black cloak traveling on a country road I caught the eye of a stranger as I sat down in the dilapidated seats

  by smonte19124 0 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 29 2:12 AM 2008. In Contest, My own style

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Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
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  moaner
  April 19
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  oh, just entered a poem, but forgot the language i used! you dont mind swearing do you? email back, cheers x
• • 
    emoempess
    April 19
    Edit | Reply

    ok

    it's ok and thanks for entering
• 
  Demonic Beauty
  April 19
  Edit | Reply
  I entered quite an old poem... Kind of a safe option tbh.
  I wanted to enter one of my Erotica ones, but i was afraid it might offend some users. If im allowed. Let me know, and ill enter it. xx
• 
  MemeMassacre
  April 21
  Edit | Reply
  wow thank you
  youve inspired me to write something
  on a topic
  i havent discussed openly
  since 8th grade
  Most the time I dont let people see
  that im a pessmistic person
  most people would say im optimistic
  but ive just learned to cover it up
• • 
    emoempess
    April 21
    Edit | Reply

    yah

    thanks.....
• 
  Simp
  May 3
  Edit | Reply
  wow at some of the lines

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