I Love You And Goodbye

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on April 22
• Rewards: Gold: 400
• Final notes:
  Thankies to all of you who have entered this contest; i am sorry if i didnt comment your entrie but i have school and i just didnt have enough time [I promise you all, that your poems were great]
  (: RAWRSMILEBABYPLZ ^-^

Contest Winners

1. The Words Fly Like Butterflies

   by VelvetWings 17 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 18 7:55 PM
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Love, Your Dead Lover

   They wont find me strangled / They won't find me hung / But they will find me heartbroken / A song once sung / The blood on the floor / won

   by AshesFromFire 37 lines, 8 comments, on May 14 8:24 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Love, Life, Death, Depression, Romance, Suicide
   Silver trophy winner

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3. A shattered heart

   Yesterday,
   I felt my heart breaking

   by trekkergirl 47 lines, 62 comments, on Feb 20 11:16 AM. In Angst, broken hearted
   Bronze trophy winner

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4. You.

   I use to cut everyday
   my cuts seemed to be deep

   by vintage 23 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 18 9:20 PM

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5. Shattered

   You were my Prince Charming, my white knight
   Everything was falling apart, and you put me together again

   by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 2 5:05 PM

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6. Christmas Time

   by abmsem 49 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 25 1:13 PM

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7. Traintrack

   Each cut makes me stronger,
   as the piercing razor draws blood.

   by abmsem 17 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 16 3:51 PM. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

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Entries [143]

• I Am Depression

  I can make you cry. / I can make you hate. / By the time someone finds me / it will be to late. / I keep you locked up / inside your own he

  by AshesFromFire 29 lines, 11 comments, on May 14 8:18 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Depression, Suicide

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• Stardust barbies and side kick hasbeens

  by Writing0Freedom 45 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 15 7:54 PM

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• Abandoned ice creams tossed from high spinning Carosels

  August brush fires ignite
  sun-ripened raspberry smiles,

  by Writing0Freedom 94 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 18 12:26 AM

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• Satin footprints and broken picture frames

  Your fingertips burned as they traced magnolia flames into my eyelids.
  

  by Writing0Freedom 37 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 8 4:13 PM

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• Etched in the footprints you left on me

  Seconds of never pass as I wait for your number to vibrate the screen of my phone- impulses of reaching out, and opened eyes charging up my

  by Writing0Freedom 24 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 30 11:13 PM

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• brokensoul

  I simply just smile
  hoping someone would know its fake

  by vintage 34 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 18 8:39 PM. In Sad, Pain, Emo, Death, Sadness, Suicide

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• #16 suicide note

  To whom it may concern
  

  by trekkergirl 34 lines, 30 comments, on Mar 31 10:22 PM. In Contest

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• Broken

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 7 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 12 7:02 PM

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• Rejection

  You look at me
  And what do you see?

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 13 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 8 11:25 AM

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• think of me as i do for you

  stay on afternoon
  awake at nights

  by xXAlbertArcadeXx 23 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 8 9:20 AM. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Emo

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• Not sure why I can't think of a title...

  by coolkid69 35 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 3 12:24 AM

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• Always Unchartered Virgin Isle

  You're so free, so dynamic, you flow.
  

  by Mr Id 38 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 13 6:30 PM

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• Me She Sheltered

  I remember you, tonight
  More in feelings

  by Mr Id 32 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 19 7:18 PM 2008

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• A History of Love (Now in Colour!)

  yellow red green and blue
  i love you you love me too

  by Mr Id 12 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 18 10:02 AM

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• Hope in the Asbtract

  you love me?
  or you love me not?

  by xXAlbertArcadeXx 22 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 3:29 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Lost love, Emo

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• One Last Goodbye(Swap Quatrain)

  by Billbard 13 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 16 7:15 PM 2005. In Other

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• (Too) Young (For) Love

  Dad says I'm too young for love.
  he says it's dangerous

  by Mr Id 99 lines, 26 comments, on Apr 6 6:02 AM

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• "And never will I give up trying, coz you're everything to me."

  "I hope it's something worth the waiting,
  coz it's the only thing that I ever feel real."

  by abmsem 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 28 9:02 AM. In love, pain

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• Suicide

  Haunting memories, sinful lies
  Bloody pillow, tear stained eyes

  by abmsem 21 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 27 4:08 PM. In pain, life, sad, personal, dark

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• The Dark Side of Love

  I've had it with soppy love poems,
  they're just empty words on a page.

  by abmsem 38 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 27 2:44 PM. In love, life, personal, pain, dark

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• Ghostly girl

  You're eyes are bloodshot; scars are bold
  Pale as sin and still so cold

  by abmsem 34 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 25 1:48 PM. In alone, pain, suicidal, thoughts, death, depression, sad, personal, life, dark, anger

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• Cross Around My Neck

  'Losing my religion' or lost, as I should say
  I never used to have faith in much

  by abmsem 34 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 28 3:20 PM

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• Why Can't You Love Me.

  Your like a star
  you shine so bright

  by Stardust Memories 18 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 13 6:56 AM. In Lost love, Sad, Love, Personal, Longing, Friendship, Anger, Sadness

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• For her heart it bleeds.

  With a mother so mad and full of hate,
  she walks around not feeling so great.

  by Stardust Memories 36 lines, 29 comments, on Feb 10 12:07 PM. In Emo, Death, Dark, Pain, Sad, Life, Depressed, Hate

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• Addiction's Wrath

  It started off fun, messing about
  Thirteen and happy - without a doubt

  by abmsem 29 lines, 31 comments, on Mar 28 12:09 PM

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• Racing Trains- maybe in stardust dawns I'll win

  My feet raced down amber train tracks, burning eculyptus as my wings fluttered in the breeze. Grooved feathers broke away the gossamer mist

  by Writing0Freedom 40 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 16 11:59 PM

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• Hastings

  Who will come with me
  To the public gardens

  by Justin3 83 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 2:16 PM. In Other, Personal

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• The Merry-go-Round

  You came into my mind again to-day / While watching golden horses spinning round, / With open mouths but nothing left to say, / a fairgroun

  by passim 17 lines, 25 comments, on Jun 19 5:11 PM 2007. In Lost love, Memories, Sonnet

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• everyday...

  Blood mixed with tears
  No more fears

  by XxAngelinTheNightxX 8 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 10:21 PM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Emo

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• You werent there

  All blood that was bled
  all the tears that were shed

  by XxAngelinTheNightxX 33 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 18 9:00 PM. In Dark, Love, Pain, Sad, emo

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• It's Been Awhile {but you're still here}

  Feelings of how I miss someone...
  Please Read!!

  by Rock-Junkie 43 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 16 6:15 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Loss, Lyrics

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• Neverending Suicide

  another tribute to the dear life of Stacey

  by Rock-Junkie 30 lines, 28 comments, on May 28 8:39 PM 2007. In Loss, Pain, Personal

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• "Phantom pain"

  Around,
  All around,

  by emoempess 16 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 21 10:43 AM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Other, Emo

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• loneliness

  downcast and alone in this world no ones love me
  try to dwindle my love is not so easy

  by emoempess 28 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 18 7:31 AM. In Emo, Depression, Sad, Pain, Dark, Other, Teen issues

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• Cutter part 2

  I slither to the bathroom
  To breath

  by emoempess 11 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 17 8:35 AM. In Emo, Depressed, Suicide, Life, Sad, Other

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• Morphine blood

  the morphine blood,
  is now black with evil colour,

  by emoempess 8 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 21 2:34 AM. In Contest, Dark, Sad, Pain, Emo, Suicide

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• Sigh

  I sit here silently
  Watching you die

  by allfall4u 33 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 10 3:13 PM 2008. In Death

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• 9 fragments of littered thoughts- that I'm too mute to say

  25/150
  
  What it takes for you to heal me-

  by Writing0Freedom 29 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 12:12 AM

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• BloodTears

  My tears are as black as my heart
  confused

  by emoempess 14 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 20 9:08 AM. In Dark, Contest, Other, Sad, Pain, Life

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• cutter

  I cant breath
  i cant live

  by emoempess 22 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 17 8:28 AM. In Emo, Pain, Sad, Dark, Other, Teen issues, Sadness, Suicide

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• don't say goodbye

  by lowercase prelude 23 lines, 39 comments, on Apr 13 3:24 PM. In Contest, Life, Pain, Sad, Prose

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• "blackest gift"

  It is a night of darkness,
  a song of dark desire,

  by emoempess 11 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 21 11:04 AM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Life, Other, Teenage thinking, Hate

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• Dark angel

  Angel descend form the sky,
  Going through the darkness of me,

  by emoempess 20 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 18 8:30 AM. In Emo, Dark, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Depressed, Other

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• Razor

  twinkle twinkle little razor,
  cut my hand and let me die,

  by emoempess 14 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 21 4:10 AM. In Emo, Death, Suicide, Depressed, Pain, Dark, Other

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• Ghostly Prison

  An echo reverberates.
  A record skips.

  by Duce 63 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 1 11:00 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Relationships, Weird, Hope

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• Wheel of emotions

  Sometimes I sense like I desire to die,
  Sometimes I am ecstatic,

  by emoempess 12 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 11 1:26 AM. In Emo, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Other

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• A message to a friend

  I didn’t know you at all,
  You have been change,

  by emoempess 27 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 9 9:17 AM. In Life, Other, Sadness, Teen issues, Hate

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• Lonesome tonight

  Isolated here,
  Looking at the sky,

  by emoempess 12 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 31 8:50 AM. In Sad, Life, Thoughts, Emo, Pain, Dark, Other

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• Goodbye

  You were my mentor
  my life-long friend

  by emoempess 24 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 23 3:55 AM. In Sadness, Depression, Longing

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• I hate you my x bestfriend

  Deep sorrow inside of me,
  Escaping with this dark past,

  by emoempess 15 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 2 9:50 AM. In Anger, War, Sadness, Pain

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• No matter how many times i cut, ull never love me

  I lay in my bed
  Water coming out of my eyes

  by moonlite.lea 33 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 16 7:35 PM

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• Gifted two souls, alone under moonless nights.

  by Writing0Freedom 72 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 15 6:07 PM

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• Where did daddy go?

  My daddy upstairs
  my sister next to me

  by moonlite.lea 64 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 15 9:31 PM

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• [ This feeling is killing ]

  This feeling is killing
  It hurts so bad

  by XXVampire-GirlXX 31 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 8 11:22 AM. In Love, Life, Other, Pain, Sad, Personal

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• Trouble Child

  You look at me
  Like I did something wrong

  by XXVampire-GirlXX 32 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 7 10:55 AM. In Life, Love, Lyrics, Other, Sad, Personal, Pain

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• One Last Time

  Blood running down my arm
  Dripping off my fingertips

  by VampireKitty- 13 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 11 8:18 AM 2008. In Love, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed, Emo

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• Goodbye

  I don’t believe it.
  You’re actually gone…

  by Unknowing... 28 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 16 10:09 AM

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• Hi Blue Eyes

  ( CHORUS )
  Hi blue eyes

  by Trill - Trickle 39 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 12:26 AM 2008. In Song, Goodbyes, Marriage

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• Goodbye, We Will Miss You

  Goodbyes are truly hard
  The word always breaks your heart!

  by Trill - Trickle 21 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 18 10:04 AM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Thoughts, Life, We Will Miss You

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• Cry

  I cry day after day for you
  like a wolf howling at the full moon

  by VampireKitty- 8 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 13 10:41 AM

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• just to say goodbye

  bout my papa. he didnt make it. he didnt get better. so this is my final goodbhye to a well-loved man..

  by Unknowing... 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 14 7:33 PM

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• F*** Me

  by Shaded DevilFox 52 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 18 10:42 PM. In Pain, Sad

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• Another Guy

  Love so deep, ruined by a betrayal and her, in the arms of another guy...

  by CreativeEngima 14 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 9 6:44 PM. In heartbreak betrayal dying

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• the coldest summer

  feeling a little bit stronger
  with uplifting smiles

  by Vampirette1901 38 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 8 12:01 AM. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts

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• I kept trying but what i got was....nothing

  I left the place i was born
  I left the guy i thought i was in love with

  by moonlite.lea 47 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 15 11:04 AM. In love personal pain sad thoughts

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• You Always Had A Way With Words

  Time stops achingly,
  grinding against the rust

  by BreakingTheSurface 64 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 19 7:38 PM

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• Friends Who Make Promises [is just another word for cowards]

  Lilac-scented memories linger in my
  mind, a summer of innocence and promises,

  by BreakingTheSurface 43 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 11:29 PM

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• we were one step below invincible

  by lowercase prelude 15 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 11 1:21 PM. In Contest, Life, Love, Pain

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  VelvetWings
  April 22
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  Thanks so much for gold <33

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