Breaking up

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 18
• Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 5 people
• Final notes:
  wow sorry it took so long to judge i was actually just putting it off for awhile cause i was going through a badd bad time & so i'm sorry. but every single entry was wonderful and i have to say thank you to everyone for taking the time. i'm pretty sure i got what i wanted out of this contest, sharing the experience with other people made it easier, so thanks. congratulations to the winners & everyone else for being fantastic poets. hm's aren't in any specific order by the way. have a nice day! =]

Contest Winners

1. In The Shadows You've Thrown Me

   We use to share a smile, a wave,
   as we passed in the streets,

   by Werewolf Avarus 12 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 15 7:38 PM. In Dark, Contest, Love, Other, Pain, Thoughts, My Own Style
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Standing in the rain

   Take a breath & softly say goodbye, / as I have no place in your heart. / No longer do I fit in, don't belong. / So I'll head out alone to find a brand new start. / Take a bow and leave the stage. / Walk out of

   by Angierie 18 lines, 8 comments, on May 24 5:40 PM 2007. In Personal
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Disappearing Act

   Such a waste of perfect wings
   Now just tattered, broken things

   by TortureKitty 18 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 16 4:45 PM. In Lost love, Depression, Sadness, Longing, Love, Goodbyes, Teen issues, Sad, Pain, Life
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. So Im Getting Over You

   Im getting over you though, and the other night helped alot
   I guess all the fake feelings you had for me, you just forgot

   by Shannon62875 38 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 15 9:22 PM
   Honorable mention

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Beaten Love

   when we were together
   I thought we would last forever.

   by jasmine marie 34 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 16 7:59 PM
   Honorable mention

   • Viewed by judge. [remove]
6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5175259, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
7. On Betrayal and Abortion

   she saw my selfless angel
   but met my greedy devil

   by dabpunx 27 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 12 11:34 AM. In Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain, abortion, betrayal, darkness
   Honorable mention

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [33]

• Locked Inside of You (Haunting Me)

  Oh, will I ever be free?!

  by Best-to-the-Fall 52 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 15 7:34 PM. In Pain, Break Ups

  • Commented on by judge.
• Defeated Love

  tears ran down my cheek each one showing one
  of my fears lost in depth nothing is left.

  by Misunderstood 45 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 15 7:38 PM. In Heartbroken, Pain, Sad, Dark, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• Bastard Is Gone

  by MysticBlue 25 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 16 11:15 AM. In Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Why Didn't You Leave The Super Glue?

  you left your good bye memo, I fell like piecemeal
  nothing remained but my shattered heart to mend

  by MysticBlue 13 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 14 12:43 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

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• Seeing sky scraper realities and intimate in fading colors

  Shades of grey color your chafed eyelids
  as my finger tips race across them

  by Writing0Freedom 34 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 12 10:25 PM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• David (its over)

  For all the bullshit you ever said
  For all those notes I always read

  by BlackBloodyRose 21 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 18 8:29 PM 2008. In Angst

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• My Heartbroken Letter

  Dear Karl (the one who hurt me so):
  You hurt me before but you always were secretly my love;

  by xxRainbowDawnxx 69 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 7 2:01 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Don't you love me?

  by Little-Buster 19 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 16 5:06 PM. In Contest, Pain, Personal, Life

  • Commented on by judge.
• Pathway to a Tortured Mind

  Staring into open space
  With empty dreams of you

  by TortureKitty 18 lines, 8 comments, on May 17 2:41 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, My life, Longing, Depression, Sadness

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Delirium catches him every time he falls.

  by Candy Morphine 38 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 12 1:33 AM

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• I Can't Say Goodbye

  we went far
  things were fun

  by MysteriousWhisper 30 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 22 12:14 AM. In Lost love, Personal, Love, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Longing, Loss

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Just Like Old Days

  Do you remember what we went through,
  The tears we cried?

  by Condemd RyeZing 40 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 15 8:21 PM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Release

  Was I in a dream because I thought our love was so extreme?
  

  by Blue30 62 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 19 4:33 AM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Destinations

  by Simpatia 30 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 3 1:15 PM. In Personal, Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• third wheel

  by Grey Mouser 10 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 7 4:46 PM

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• Goodbye Casandra

  Be still the hatred in my heart The last embrace

  by dabpunx 26 lines, 7 comments, on May 20 2:04 PM 2008. In Love, loss, acceptance, emotions, relationship, breakups, hate

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• Home Was Sweeter When Home Was In Your Arms

  for so many years I hadn't lived
  mostly I simply existed

  by Grey Mouser 26 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 18 10:04 PM. In Thoughts, Sad, Loss, Pain, Personal

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• the day his heart stood still

  by lowercase prelude 21 lines, 24 comments, on Jul 7 12:19 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Teen issues

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• Take It From the Top

  It was everything I never dreamed about
  and all I hoped to forget.
  

  by Deathless Kris 23 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 16 7:00 PM. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Contest, Dark, Love, Thoughts

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• Misdirected

  I said goodbye to you like the moon wouldn't come out tonight,
  or the sun wouldn't rise tomorrow,

  by LoveNLyrics 31 lines, on Apr 15 10:49 PM. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Lost Love, It's Over

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• Final Farewell

  I cant do this, I cant take the hurt and lieing anymore
  Im packing up my shit and im walking out the door

  by Shannon62875 33 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 24 12:31 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Lies

  You told me you like me,
  It must have been a lie.

  by Panda-Kitten 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 7:10 PM

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• A Final Undesirable Casually Kind Yet Outlandishly Unmistakable Goodbye

  This cold heavy rain has made my stance weak. Soaking my thoughts, burrowing into my cells. You leave me hanging here to dry on my own. I try and try. Staring at this deflated wall I wait for your calls. This silence has

  by thebiz89 23 lines, on Dec 29 2:58 AM 2008

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• Just To Keep The Records Straight

  I feel your presence in the wind
  your perfume in the air,

  by serious clown 24 lines, 24 comments, on Aug 22 12:51 PM 2006. In Love

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Comments

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  Little-Buster
  April 15
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  AH!
  I was too late to enter.
  haha
• 
  Angierie
  April 16
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  Oh sure Allie..
  be like that
  don't let me enter... haha..
  Loveeeee you
• 
  ImMcLovinBabe
  April 22
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  Ugh! i didn't get to enter alex]:
  you should make one for depressing poems[:
• 
  Angierie
  May 18
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  Thanks for the silver shiny dearest!!
  Love you oodles and oodles of chicken flavored noodles
• 
  Puking Faerie Dust
  May 18
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  thank you so much

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