Poetry is but a way to release and/or express poem's.
I want to feel your pain, they can be about anything:
Suicide
Emo
Longing
Loss
Depression
Death
I'm not picky, but we do need some rules so here I go:
~~NO HAPPY CRAP
~~Must rhyme
~~No WrItInG LiKe ThIs PlEaSe
~~OR LIKE THIS
~~Use spell check
~~Proper form
OK Well I think that cover's the basics so lets get writing!!
Brownie Points:
Anything that can make me really feel, afraid, lost,
alone ect anything at all as long as it makes me feel.
I want to feel your pain, they can be about anything:
Suicide
Emo
Longing
Loss
Depression
Death
I'm not picky, but we do need some rules so here I go:
~~NO HAPPY CRAP
~~Must rhyme
~~No WrItInG LiKe ThIs PlEaSe
~~OR LIKE THIS
~~Use spell check
~~Proper form
OK Well I think that cover's the basics so lets get writing!!
Brownie Points:
Anything that can make me really feel, afraid, lost,
alone ect anything at all as long as it makes me feel.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 4
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: There were so many painful poems, I did find a few who didn't follow my simple rules and didn't even get a proper comment, and I'm sorry for that but I asked for very little, the biggest one was it HAD to rhyme, ,many poems did not, some were fine and made the list even though they didnt rhyme but please all my contests poetry must rhyme.
Know please learn about abuse it is such an awful thing and needs to be stopped, even if you were not abused you have a voice and feelings, USE THEM. Those of you who have I am sorry that this happened to you. But you have a voice to, USE IT. I am a voice for all muted lips, and you are too.
Thank you all for entering my contest and please enter more of mine, I plan on doing another real soon, see you all then!
Contest Winners
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I'm twisting, turning,
drowning, lungs burning.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
You've ripped apart my heart and soul,
You've drained my veins, the blood runs cold.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Oh how my frangible bones ache
I can tell you the pain is severeby spideracer 61 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 13 12:36 AM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Depression, Suicide
Honorable mention
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by ToXiC-AnGeL 49 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 26 12:09 AM. In Adult, Dark, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Weird, Explicit Language
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A conversation with the voice in your head.
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A repost . . .• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [42]
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Show me what you have in this life of woe
where is it that we shall all go• Commented on by judge. -
My heart aches like it always does
I can feel my eyes brim with tears• Viewed by judge. -
Drowning misfortune changed in his birth,
His veins were replaced with smouldering dirt,• Commented on by judge. -
Life can be a scary place
When there's distrust in every face• Commented on by judge. -
On the outside I am calm,
no care, no feeling, no pain.• Viewed by judge. -
Chasing after you, screaming for you to wait, but you don't.
I've been telling myself to forget about you but I just can't I won't.• Viewed by judge. -
Deep deep darkness all around
No noise just deadly silenceby kirstyanne1 12 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 9:11 PM• Viewed by judge. -
in the beggining things were fun
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The last time I saw my dad
Was fifteen years agoby black thought 42 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 25 3:21 PM• Commented on by judge. -
You need to start going to church is what you said
How the hell am i suppose to wake up out of my bedby Shannon62875 106 lines, 34 comments, on Nov 7 6:22 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart breaks.
Everytime you leave.by Menna 30 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 25 10:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You mean the world to me and so much more
You listen to me while everyone else puts me on igonoreby Shannon62875 60 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 6 10:34 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Staring out the window,
I gaze at the world beyond• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i'm afraid to sleep
cause everytime i close my eyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My sins plague me
Swallowing my entiretyby skye101 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 10:34 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Im getting over you though, and the other night helped alot
I guess all the fake feelings you had for me, you just forgotby Shannon62875 38 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 15 9:22 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Past times that will always haunt me.by Canberemembered 12 lines, on Mar 8 1:32 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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how do u want us 2 enter prewrites?
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Sorry no pre-writes LOL
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hiya. really want to enter a poem of mine, but it has ThIs IN iT! its very short though (4 lines) and has a very good reason to be there, would it still be ok to enter? thanks x
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Can we swear?
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OK
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Oh man! I wish you allowed pre-writes lol. I have a perfect poem I wrote. If I could, I'd rewrite the whole thing and enter it as a new poem
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