THE STORY: So i was looking through my work a few days ago and relized i had some work that no one had read nor commented on so i decided i would hold a contest in which to do so for others.
WHAT I WANT:
is work that has never been commented on before, you may enter as many as you want.
WARNING
I critique when i comments i give positives i liked negatives i didn't like and then suggestions. i also rarely give applause.
lets get this part started
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WHAT I WANT:
is work that has never been commented on before, you may enter as many as you want.
WARNING
I critique when i comments i give positives i liked negatives i didn't like and then suggestions. i also rarely give applause.
lets get this part started
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 25
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: thanks so much for all the entries it was a great contest and i enjoyed all the writes and how these unseen treasures were first exposed to my eyes
congrats to winners. hope you all have a great day and keep writing
thanks
herecomesthesun
Contest Winners
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A flock of steel-grey and white doves flapped up from the neighbouring roof in petrified excitement and fluttered up into the sky as though• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Hush,
Listen....by blood.stained.tears 22 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 11 11:29 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5170897, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by samantha jean 18 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 8 9:54 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Always moving
towards a final destination.by A m b r e a 38 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 11 1:14 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
How well the moonlight illuminates the ground
making errie shadows dance round and roundby wishintreeUK 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 22 1:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The world is crashing down around us
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I bask in infinity of what could have been and what now might be. The future can hold so much and yet so little as it seems. I am whole heaby Dark passenger 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 5 9:54 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Dark, Pain, Abuse, Death, Emo, Escape, Suicide, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [88]
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If I should fall, will you pick me up?
If I should cry, will you dry my tears?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
No stranger feeling have I had.
Left behind, left so sad.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am lost in this darkness
In and out of this pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A broken mirror reflects it all.....
by xmiasmatik 28 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 17 8:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wait for the bell,
cast your eyes on the sea.by xmiasmatik 39 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 27 8:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The past is the past
The present is the presentby clara wilson-nelson 24 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 11:11 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, and Philosophical• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You lead me away to
ally. We stand thereby AngelsKissesJenna 19 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 10:56 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A little girl.
Scars on the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I cried at night.
Held onto a teddy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I fell in love with
you. I wanted to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am low to the ground
I wanna fly high in theby AngelsKissesJenna 26 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 1:18 PM. In Love, Other, My own style, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have a close
friend. She's myby AngelsKissesJenna 19 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 23 8:14 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Even when the lights out
I feel like I am in thew darkby AngelsKissesJenna 17 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 10:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by BehindTheShadow 17 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 3 9:01 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Moments of inspiration come with the sunbeams
a touch on the skin and it wakes the bloodby Aedara-Wren 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 29 8:45 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by lowercase prelude 19 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 9 4:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by lowercase prelude 12 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 7 10:06 AM 2008. In Abstract• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by lowercase prelude 18 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 4 12:57 PM 2008. In Abstract• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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From the point of view of someone who doesn’t careby x7-rose-sorrows 56 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 22 8:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Consequence caught up with me.
I knew when I fell into an abyss of solitude.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hear that beat?
Hear its pounding?by blood.stained.tears 23 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 6 3:01 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I burned the forest with MY fire.by blood.stained.tears 40 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 6 2:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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peak-a-boo,
I see you!by blood.stained.tears 29 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 24 3:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Swittle swaddle sweet tooth,
thats what i gots for you.by blood.stained.tears 10 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 24 3:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by blood.stained.tears 10 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 30 3:50 PM 2008. In adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by blood.stained.tears 21 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 12:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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B are all pain
O pen eyes, close• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It used to be that I could say
that it's okay to be this way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A smokey haze of absence
travels farther then the eye could see• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by XxKatastrophexX 17 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 11 9:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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All nature seems hidden this cold misty day,
the colours subdued by a blanket of grey.by judmc 16 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 1 5:22 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Let me wonder
What's in your mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And all I see is what can kill me
This world is a dangerous place• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Too loud to talk
Too quiet to get alongby explain.everything 44 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 6 9:39 PM. In angst, life, free verse, teen, thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You see black and red
And wonder what they meanby explain.everything 15 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 5 2:24 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I do not know enough to write,
I have not held another dear,by TheProfessional 19 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 11:40 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Religions and governments treat the believes they sell as gold. Even if what they believe starts to unfold. And unfortunately theirs no recby Dark passenger 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 5 10:50 PM 2008. In Angry, Escape, Self, Life, Other, Society, Abuse, Emo, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They give their enemies the means for their own demise. As they walk proudly and confidently along their chosen line. Hiding behind an illusion where they think every thing will be fine. Not knowing that those who trby Dark passenger 5 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 4:42 PM 2008. In War, Family, Hate, Emo, Anger, Death, Abuse, Society, Hope, Pain, Dark, Sad, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Grey skies don’t clear because you throw on a happy face. When you look to the skies and see nothing but disgrace. Not only your own but thby Dark passenger 9 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 4:56 PM 2008. In War, Hate, Emo, Death, Abuse, Hope, Other, Pain, Dark, Life, Thoughts, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Moths hovering in the silent rain
Announce the bliss of the coming angels,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
they have discounted their self worth,
and sold their identity,by Deathless Kris 83 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 27 7:23 PM. In Contemporary, Other, Contest, Thoughts, Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The snow falls
The fire slowly burnsby Fabio Sardi 5 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 18 9:15 AM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm out in the rain
And I feel it on meby Fabio Sardi 14 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 15 7:01 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The fiery donut retreats
Into the mouth of an old man.by DJ T Duglass 12 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 14 4:26 PM. In Nature, Contemporary, Thoughts, Other, Descriptive• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You are there after every heart break.
You help me pick up the pieces.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Interesting contest indeed
I have a few poems that are still virgin so to speak.
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thanks for the bronze
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Thank you for the gold trophy
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWM, my AP was being a douche and it didn't notify me of messages, comments, contests etc, so I had no idea! THANK YOU SO MUCH, I wasn't trying to be a jerk and not say anything, I didn't know ahahaha imma loser im so happy now
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