SEARCH OUT YOUR OLDIES BUT NOT GOLDIES.
THOSE THAT DIDN'T QUITE MAKE IT!
EITHER SILVER OR BRONZE.
Green if you must
DON'T CARE WHAT STYLE SHAPE OR FORM BUT OBVIOUSLY IT MUST BE GOOD TO HAVE GAINED SOME KIND OF TROPHY
THOSE OF YOU WHO HAVE A LOVE OF GOLD CAN NOW BATTLE IT OUT FOR THE ULTIMATE WITH YOUR OLDIES.
THREE EACH MAXIMUM.
PLAY NICE
THOSE THAT DIDN'T QUITE MAKE IT!
EITHER SILVER OR BRONZE.
Green if you must
DON'T CARE WHAT STYLE SHAPE OR FORM BUT OBVIOUSLY IT MUST BE GOOD TO HAVE GAINED SOME KIND OF TROPHY

THOSE OF YOU WHO HAVE A LOVE OF GOLD CAN NOW BATTLE IT OUT FOR THE ULTIMATE WITH YOUR OLDIES.
THREE EACH MAXIMUM.
PLAY NICE
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 8
- Rewards: Gold: 950
- Final notes: O.K. so I have asked and been rewarded with some amazing also rans.
Truth is they are all worthy of praise in some form or other.
My personal choice for gold is close to my heart, not because I am black but because I believe there is so much still to do before equality can even be dreamed of around the world (not just the U.S.A.)
silver is a personal choice as I have lived through it whilst bronze is just so funny to one with a wicked sense of humour.
I would please ask you to read and re-read your poems alongside the winners to see if you can or even want to improve your own work.
I have made comment on all that were posted here and have mixed reaction to my take on the individual works.
All I will say on the matter is the words expressed how I feel about what it is you have written, if you are offended in any way by anything I have written please delete it and put me on your hate list as I am too old to give a damn about what people think.
If you are going to enter any competition (mine or others) then you should be prepared to be downheartened as not every one is the same.
My advice to every young poet out there would be to learn from comments made by older poets who do not wish to demean you or dampen your enthusiasm but wish to help you over the hurdles of rejection.
Listening to your best ever mates cooing their adoration for your latest piece (which may ultimately be crap) is getting you no where.
As for those best ever mates?
making "awseome" comments does your mate no favour, a true friend will tell you if what you have written is crap, and not try to leave you living a lie.
Hope to see at least some of you in future contests that I hold.
In truth I am also expecting to appear on a few hit lists as well.
Thanks for entering anyway....
Contest Winners
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by Age of Rain 22 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 22 9:58 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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crocus in full bloom
ornament the warming ground• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The heavens roared with thunder
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by Nostalgic Moon 33 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 13 4:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Feelings on an up-coming graduation... My how time flies by.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Age of Rain 20 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 14 12:33 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Age of Rain 28 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 20 3:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by ToXiC-AnGeL 34 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 27 9:15 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, My Life, Own Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your voice rang into my head
as it started to cover me with your chainsby kishi-tenshi 18 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 18 9:45 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sky started to fall,
over me...by kishi-tenshi 41 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 16 12:49 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
it was just a simple smile,
and not that cute stare,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the white dress hangs
in plastic wrapby righteousme 66 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 21 1:37 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by righteousme 62 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 9 2:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i catch myself
times where i have ripped my bedroomby righteousme 24 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 16 5:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Je ne veux pas de présent cette année,
rien matérielle.by Nostalgic Moon 11 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 20 5:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Dancing happily,
she smiles at the manby tsukiyo 13 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 27 5:20 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hug me from behindby Nostalgic Moon 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 27 4:56 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Come little piglets.
Please let me in?by Sai Amartya 43 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 25 7:36 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Dark, Contest, fairytales, twisted• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Me and my uncle went on a fishing trip
we had beer and munchies we were perfectly equipedby JeremyWilliams 22 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 8:02 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by JeremyWilliams 19 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 11 12:48 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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well, no where in the rules of this gold digging contest did it state that you had to use proper punctuation and/or grammar ... i do not take well to criticism. especially someone complaining about i versus I ... and if that is a pet peeve of yours you should request it in the contest as a must have for an entry into the contest ...
sorry i do not conform.
HAVE A GREAT DAY!!!!
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i do not take well to criticism.
I must assume then that you are a masochist!
If not then why place any of your work out in the open for people to comment on?
As for none conformity, if i Verses I is the only thing you have then read the dictionary again to find out how to be a true none conformist (they don't complain by the way as that is a state of conforming
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i put my work out for others to take what they will and leave the rest ... it is simple really ... a masochist ... no ... hardly ... and though i put my work out there i am very careful about what contests i enter . i make sure to read it through and know that it does not require proper grammar/punctuation/ect. ... on my profile page it states i do not do criticism ... i guess i am just one of them people that feel you should take what you can and if you can not find anything to take away , leave it be ... no need in telling someone you dont like their work ... pointless to me ... so yeah thanks again ... oh and the non conformity i versus I is not the only thing i have ... and i really dont see the point in reading the dictionary to find a definition of a non-conformist ... i know what i am ... i know what i am not ...
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