Metal music n Pics n wordbanks :S!!!

Ok so I've decided to make a contest. yeah...

PICTURES just tell me what is in the pic you chose...

Tree - http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/119692658/
Cat - http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/119421910/
Party - http://sparklethepirate.deviantart.com/art/Pink-n-grey-119407622


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be nice/ no foul language because well it ruiens alot of good and great poems.../no funny type like ThIs/ don't dare say anything bad about anyone or their works...I will DQ you so fast!!!/ Please tell me your options in Author's notes, thanks!

MOST OF ALL RESPECT THESE ARTISTS AND THEIR LYRICS!!!


first off I want to share with you my options.
their catogrized very oddly so please pay attention to them so that I can know which ones you've chosen from!!!

Ight!
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Options:

Lyrics.#1

Word Bank.#2

Picture above.#3

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simple right?

now these are how those will be labled.

if you pick lyric's there's six different songs to chose
from and I want you to first label the number and then
the letters beside the lyric's below...such as lets say
your doing the last song. you would wright Option "#1F"
see easy

with each lyric there's also a small idea of what I want
and guidelines which I wish you to follow for the lyric
provided. they all have their own little sweet purpose!
and I will place that purpose in between two roses like
this

Ok for the fun part=
These songs all have different meanings and not are all metal,
I'd perfer them to be but I decided it's not really fair unless
I put something out there for almost everyone to enjoy!!!

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A. "Opeth - When"

Red sun rising somwhere through the dense fog.
The portrait of the jaded dawn who had seen it all before.
This day wept on my shoulders.
Still the same as yesterday.
This path seem endless, body is numb.
The soul has lost it's flame.
walking in familar traces to find my way back home.
So there I was.
Within the sobreity of the immortals.
A semblance of supernatural winds passing through,
the garden sighs, flowers die.
The gate was closed that day, but I was bound to carry on.
She could not see me through the windows.
In dismay, strangest twist upon her lips.
Graven face, she said my name.
Once inside I heard whispers in the parlour.
The gilded faces grin, aware of my final demise.
And I cried, I knew she had lied.
Her obsession had died, it had died.
When can I take you from this place?
When is the word but a sigh?
When is death our lone beholder?
When do we walk the final steps?
When can we scream instead of whisper?
When is the new beginning, and the end of this sad
Madrigal.


In this lyric I'm looking for a story in your poems
similar but not at all the same as this. I want something
so creative and outstanding that I can't breathe after I read
it!!! Make me so depressed and empty feeling and your sure to
make me smile. DO NOT RHYME!!! No repeating lines either

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B. Death - Flesh and the power it holds

I told you once but I will say it again
when you live the flesh it is the beginning
of the end
it will take you in
it will spit you out
behold the flesh and the power it holds
passion is a poison laced with pleasure bitter sweet
one of many faces that hide deep beneath
it will take you in
it will spit you out
behold the fleash and the power it holds
touch, taste, breathe, consumed
deja-vu, already knew from the first encounter
but know I know to let go of words to speak no more
like a wind upon your face you can't see it
but you know it's there, when beauty shows
it's ugly face, just be prepared
passion burns like fire carried by the wind
the end of a time, a time to begin
if builds you up one way and tears
you right back down, a time to begin
the end of a time
touch, taste, breathe, consumed.

make your words raw, brutal and yet make them about something
so beautiful like he did with skin, you may rhyme but I want it to
fit perfectly with the subject, unlike the lyric's I don't want ANY
repeating lines!

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C. Carcass - Heartwork

works of art, painted black
magniloquent, bleeding dark
monotonous palate, murky spectrum, grimly unlimited
food for thought, so prolific
in contrasting shades, forcely fed.
abstraction, so choking, so probocative

a canvas to paint, degenerate
dark reflections-degeneration
a canvas to paint, to denigrate
dark reflections, of dark foul light.

profound, aesthetic beauty
or shaded, sensary corruption
perceptions, shattered, splintered, mirroring
in deft taints, diluted, tinted
spelt out, in impaired colour
denigrating, going to paints to pain-not a pretty picture.

works of heart bleeding dark
black, magniloquent art.
monotonous palate. murky spectrum. grimly unlimited
prolific food for thought
contrasting, fed with force
abstraction, so choking, so provocative

bleeding works of art
seething work so dark
seering words from the heart.

What I want for this lyric is something evil, something so foul and twisted but
I want you to use big uncommon words and make them RHYME yes lol and I want them to roll
off the tongue smoothly even though the way you play them in your poems (hopefully very complex
sounding)wouldn't let you think that you can do that. I want real imagery here, I want to
feel as though I'm in this place and I want a twisted ending, make me angry NOTHING DEPRESSING
ALLOWED...just hate and anger...no raceism or anything like that though. Horror is ok, death,
killing and Erotica would work fine. 20 lines at minium 25 max!

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D. Alice in Chains - Nutshell

We chase misprinted lies
we face the path of time
and yet I fight
and yet I fight
this battle all alone
no one to cry to
no place to call home

ohhhohhhhh
ohhhohhhhh

my gift of self is raped
my privacy is raked
and yet I find
and yet I find
repeating in my head
if I can't be my own
I'd feel better dead

Ohhhohhhhh
Ohhhohhhhh

keep this rhythem and add all the Ooooo's and make sure the
lines that are the same in the lyrics are
exactly the same in your POEM!!!
in it in the same spot. I want rhyming where it rhymes, I
want it about something else about death though.
I want it JUST LIKE THIS small and effective, make it
work and make it astound me! When I read your poem it
should totally make me think of this song in my head,
SURPRIZE ME!!!

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E. Smashing Pumpkins - Here is no why

The useless drag of another day
The endless drags of a death rock boy
Mascara sure and lipstick lost
Glitter burned by restless thoughts of being forgotten
And in your sad machines
You'll forever stay
Desperate and displeased-with whoever you are
And your a star
Somwhere-he pulls his hair down-over a frowning smile
A hidden diamond you cannot find
A secret star that cannot shine over to you
May the king of gloom, be forever doomed
And in your sad machines
You'll forever stay
Burning up in speed
Lost inside the dreams, of teen machines
The useless drags, the empty days
The lonely towers of long mistakes
To forgotten faces and faded loves
Sitting still was never enough
And if you're giving in, then your giving up
Cause in your sad machines
You'll forever stay
Burning up in speed
Lost inside the dreams, of teen machines

Ok this is where Erotica comes in, I want Death,
Gore, Lust, Drug use whatever your mind can think of
in those kinda catogories, but like this song I want
the idea's very abstract and kinda random but somehow
they web together. I really want to see Creative writes
here that make me think of this song and how it is! Depress
me do what ever this is kinda where you decide what you want
to do with these lyrics. don't exactly let me get the whole
picture and truely understand what's goin on...RANDOM/ NO RHYMING
THOUGH!!! AND SEX MUST BE MENTIONED OR HINTED AT

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F. Amon Amarth - Cry of the Blackbirds.

Raise your swords up high
See the black birds fly
Let them hear your rage
Show no fear

Attack!

Charge your horses across the fields
Together we ride into destiny
Have no fear of death when it's your time
Oden will bring us home when we die

The ground trembles under us as we make our thunder charge
The pounding hooves strikes blinding fear into their hearts
Our helmets shine in the sun as we near their wall of shields
Some of them turn and run when they hear our frenzied screams

Draw your swords to strike
Hear the black birds cry
Let them feel your hate
Show no fear

Charge your horses across the fields
Together we ride into destiny
Have no fear of death when it's your time
Oden will bring us home when we die

The enemies are in disarray ride them down as they run
Send them to their violent graves, don't spare anyone
Dead and wounded lie all around see the pain in their eyes
Over the field an eerie sound, as we hear the raven's cry

I WANT ADVENTOUROUS STORY TELLING POEMS HERE! think about vikings, pirates, ninja's even, ANYTHING GOES erotic and what not
don't care, I want action, blood, something unquie and exciting,
HOWEVER there's a catch...see how these lines are?

"Raise your swords up high
See the black birds fly
Let them hear your rage
Show no fear"

and then it differs from this one?

"Draw your swords to strike
Hear the black birds cry
Let them feel your hate
Show no fear "

I DON'T WANT ANY RHYMING!!! but I want something that repeats like this does except they have to have the same amount of words per line and have to be almost the same but completely differnt!Make
sure these are your most POWERFUL-est lines!!!

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Option #2:

Word Bank

no rhyming allowed, must use three of these words at least in a TEN
word long poem!!! TELL ME WHICH ONES YOU USED IN THE AN!!! These words are taken from the lyric's above, just in case you wanted to know, who know's mayhaps the songs will give you inspiration. If you
want to hear them go to Projectplaylist.com and then search for the
song to get a feel



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WORD BANK
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sobreity

immortals

obsession

semblance

gilded

poison

encounter

consumed

deja-vu

passion

magniloquent

spectrum

prolific

aesthetic

sensary

misprinted

privacy

raked

repeating

own

machines

empty

king

faded

forever

trembles

shields

frenzied

destiny

disarray


PLEASE TELL ME WHICH YOU PICK IN AUTHOR NOTES AGAIN

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Have fun you's guys!!!

"wheres is yooo be bananna?" - I.R. Babboon!!!