Wanna Break Down Sometimes?

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on April 20
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  Well my contest is now finished. I was so happy with all the results I have recieved and I loved everyone's poems!!! I just wish I could have picked you all because it was so hard picking the best ones. Thanks so much again to all who entered. You made this the best contest yet!
  HeartOfFlames..

Contest Winners

1. I Just Can't

   Smashed glass around the room
   Thrown by the beast that came from within me

   by iAwesome 9 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 5 12:06 AM
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5211929, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. I Can't Take This

   Life's so hard I
   cry late into the

   by Englandgirl2008 21 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 10 11:26 PM. In Contest, Life, Pain, Other, Sad
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. ...♥ One Less Piece of Me for You to Kill ♥...

   I cast my eyes across a barren schoolyard
   Only to see you, in the midst of scattered groups and faces,

   by BrokenHeartsInVain 18 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 9 8:05 PM. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Depressed, Escape
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [43]

• I Give Up

  Kill me now as I lay here weak.
  I have been fighting for a lifetime now.

  by Horrific Hollis 9 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 11 2:33 PM 2008. In Pain, fighting, weakness, sad, powerful

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• If i could stand to dream...

  by lillypilly 45 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 22 4:41 AM. In personal, romance, hope, love, dreams, life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Sacrificing Trust

  The blood seeps down from my face
  Like hot cold tears
  Slowly bringing the makeup

  by Emmabug 38 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 4 12:34 AM. In Death, Suicide, Personal., Escape, Blood, Trust, Sacrifice

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Fear

  To me sleep has been denied
  In the mud I cannot hide

  by Mantha 21 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 5 1:58 AM

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Reason

  I know that I am just a voice you hear,

  by gypsyfan 42 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 3 5:08 PM 2006. In Personal, Angst

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• Peace Out

  by pretty-cupcake 20 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 30 11:36 PM. In sad, dark, suicide, drugs, pills, lyrics, pain

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• Curdle

  Damp cream stains curdle
  

  by Emmyb 36 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 31 3:50 AM. In pain, personal

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• Lost

  I want to be
  What you want me to be

  by Rhythm Child 11 lines, 25 comments, on Oct 8 9:31 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Love, noguest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I can't forgive

  I can't forgive myself
  For letting you go

  by Isolatedsouls17 138 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 8 3:54 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Contest, Society, Nature

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Precious Disaster

  Death so inviting
  Beneath the sun-drenched sky

  by Rogue-Poet 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 8 4:56 PM 2008. In Contest, Love, Other

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• Broken

  I wake up in the morning
  The sun shines in my window

  by chael 30 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 10 8:30 AM

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• The agonising; Save?

  Heartache.
  It hurts, as your

  by English.Muffin 53 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 5 10:06 AM. In diabetes, save, death, pain, emotional, hurt, fantasy

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• Why Try?

  Sometimes you feel like giving up... Float!!

  by Floatational 29 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 6 7:51 PM. In Sad, Thoughts, Life

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Final Letter

  This is my final letter,
  my letter of good-bye.

  by Shadow Keeper 116 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 11 11:08 PM. In Pain, Dark, Death, Emo, Depression, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Suicide, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Escape

  I am trying to escape this life
  What is the point in living anymore?

  by lovestheblood 16 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 19 6:34 AM. In Dark, Sad, Death, Escape

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Privileged

  You deserve better by going nowhere
  You won't find anyone better out there

  by Nermin Nazim 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 6 7:10 PM. In Hope, Life, Love, My own style, Lost love, Longing, Lost in thought

  • Commented on by judge.
• Lost in Shadows

  by Razzberry 31 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 6 4:15 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Giving Up...

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 18 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 20 1:41 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• breaking point

  Not many people noticed
  That she was falling apart,

  by xbeautifulxdisasterx 34 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 7 7:34 PM. In Pain, Sad, Life, Personal, Teen issues, Suicide, Self

  • Commented on by judge.
• Moving/Dying...its all the same...

  by ImNotOkay 13 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 18 6:46 PM. In Moving, sad, emo, suicide

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• Memories of their death...

  something horrible, and I don't mean your writing skill. I mean write about something horrible, like the 9/11, or abuse, or maybe someone k

  by XxTaintedRainxX 24 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 14 3:25 PM. In Contest, Sad, Pain, My own style, My life, Longing, Family, Self, Goodbyes

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Sakujo (Eliminate)

  by U.g.l.y. 76 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 2 12:09 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Dark, Pain, Depression, Hate, Angry, Anger, Sadness, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I Stare Into Oblivion...

  I wrote this poem to show someone how sad I am that they never talk to me.. I would have been the mother that she would want me to be... Is

  by Nymphetemine 36 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 7:07 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Would you miss me then?

  Drown me in your apathy, babe, because for the first
  time, I'm not going to try and keep breathing;

  by Madison Mary 20 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 5 7:56 AM

  • Commented on by judge.
• The crystal balls are cracked through the middle [I never saw this coming].

  by Candy Morphine 52 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 8 4:53 AM

  • Commented on by judge.
• Where

  Where’s my smile?
  It seems it’s gone.

  by Panda-Kitten 7 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 6:34 PM

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• Life is a Boxer

  I’ve gone eighteen rounds with Life
  A boxing match I cannot win

  by mackereth 51 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 26 7:05 PM

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• Playing My Old Role

  Deep breaths and warm water is all that keeps me from coming undone.
  From breaking down and crying, destryoing, screaming, it's only begun.

  by ToxicSuicide 38 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 19 6:57 AM. In Anger, Betrayl, My Writing, Thoughts

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• All into One

  Make your heart 'mad'!
  Cook 'whole' in grief!

  by Thoughts-of-Soloman 117 lines, 57 comments, on Apr 5 1:36 PM 2008. In Contest, Experiment, Contemporary, Hope, Mystical, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• Into Pieces

  I break into little pieces,
  I scream in the night, looking for reasons.

  by Lilandra 18 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 1:11 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad

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• No title

  Everyday the pain grows more intense,
  and with every breath it makes less sense.

  by Shadow-walker 31 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 1:01 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Angst

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• Mirror Mirror

  Mirror mirror on the wall,
  Am I the fattest of them all?

  by Suteishiijein 33 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 19 5:43 PM. In anorexia

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• As I Travel This Road

  In the walk of life it will be so many people trying to throw you off the track you know you should be on; but keep the faith.

  by Love Joy 16 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 29 12:32 AM. In Personal, Life, My life, Spiritual

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• Cry

  I want to cry
  Let it all out

  by allfall4u 28 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 20 11:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain

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• Heartless statue

  i am a statue in a park
  you pass by every day but you cant notice an important remark
  its standing there without his heart.

  by eizen-wolf 44 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 8 8:40 PM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain, Love, Dark

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• Will I ever meet her, the real me (a rant)

  Write
  Just write

  by Divina love 86 lines, on Sep 8 7:30 AM 2008

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• Broken Song

  To piece together the words to this broken song
  so that once more my voice I can hear.

  by LadyJane13 27 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 23 1:11 PM. In Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• It Hurt (despair)

  Choose a side
  Which to abide

  by Trill - Trickle 18 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 30 6:08 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Thoughts

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Comments

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  The Reapers Angel
  April 5
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  I have had many moments such as this, but I would prefer not to look back upon them.
  I have decided that I'm going to be happy with my life, because as long as I have one person that I love, I know things will be alright.
  
  Good luck with your contest.
  ~Angel

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