Hurt...Inside an abused victim's heart...

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on March 31
• Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 4 people
• Final notes:
  Thank you, poets, for your heart-wrenching poems. They were all worthy of gold...the ones that won were fresh writes, but that isn't saying the pre-writes weren't good...I hope time will heal the wounds of those that still hurt from their past...Best of luck in your futures...
  ~Jeremy~

Contest Winners

1. A Mother's Pleas

   Blood stains this polyester
   the wounds deeper today

   by PassionsPromise 26 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 28 6:02 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Life
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Virus

   He hates me with virus eyes
   And a bitter tongue

   by Emmyb 26 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 29 10:47 AM. In abuse, contest, personal
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. Broken Dreams

   She was only 8. He
   hurt her to the point

   by Englandgirl2008 24 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 28 5:49 PM. In Contest, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Abuse
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. Tip Toe

   by Reiga 23 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 28 6:15 PM. In Adult
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. weighed and measured

   "Fatty four eyes"
   

   by vacygnet 32 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 28 7:18 PM
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
6. Missing

   Things will get better
   Don't dwell in the past

   by Dagger68 53 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 9:57 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
7. Out of Darkness and Despair

   Feeling alone in a great big world,
   you've never been there when I've need you.

   by gigglesalot 44 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 29 7:25 PM. In Angst, Personal, Sad, Pain, Other
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [28]

• Abused Progression

  -Age 3-
  The colours painted on my skin,

  by xxRainbowDawnxx 62 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 24 4:17 PM 2008. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Little Angel

  You were only five years old,
  and grew up in a world of hatred.

  by Jeremy0826 100 lines, 37 comments, on Feb 1 10:11 PM. In Hope, Life, Thoughts, Sad, Dark, Abuse, Society

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• "December"

  Body weak and fragile and
  I'm dying a slow agonizing death.

  by Girl-Interrupted 16 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 12 7:01 PM. In Contest, Angst, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Pain in the Lies

  by LoveToLaugh07 53 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 22 7:00 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Wyntyre

  by TheDemonEve 13 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 23 1:19 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Dark, Personal, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Chill In Her Thrill

  by spideracer 72 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 13 12:36 AM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Sad, Adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Daddy's Split Personality

  one minute he is playing with me
  then when I do something wrong

  by lovingpoet 51 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 1 11:52 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bastard's Leftovers

  because she remembered watching the ceiling
  Staring past his eyes, keeping her mouth pressed tight

  by Gl1tt3rn1nj4 35 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 8:01 PM 2008. In rape, sad, suicide, life, society

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Razzor Dreams and Suffocating Nightmares

  Morphine shattered with hidden lies / Vodka tells who is truly despised / / Empty graveyard filled with secrets / Crying on the gravestone

  by XXStOlEn-HaLoXx 23 lines, 3 comments, on May 2 1:44 PM 2007. In Dark, Depressed, suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I will remember

  Shattered tears carefully evaporate as smiles mold themselves after saints.
  A waterfall is golden with tears.

  by firefly smile 14 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 26 6:20 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Divorce

  A seperated love,
  one that can burn the young.

  by Hate-And-Pain 31 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 20 10:52 PM 2008. In Life, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Soul Pain

  How does one measure the pain of the soul?
  Is it on a scale of 1-10?

  by skye01 15 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 5 4:46 AM 2008. In Death, Sadness, Depression, Loss, Pain, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Help Me

  So I find myself lost again. / Needing a close friend. / To help me though the pain. / But I can't help but restrain. / The feelings I have inside. / The ones I try so hard to hide. / The sorrows and h

  by Poetic Rage 27 lines, 13 comments, on May 26 11:35 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Humor, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• In this mirror

  In this mirror I always seem to stand, could this really be me.
  I try to hide all these bruises on my face that was beat.

  by completely mad 15 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 26 3:06 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Mourning

  It isn’t a matter you gloat over,
  Don’t be so pleased at my

  by Nermin Nazim 20 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 13 3:30 PM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Wonderland

  This kingdom, me, an outcast dubs
  And tries to change my heart to clubs

  by St. Anarchy 22 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 19 6:58 AM. In Hopeless, loneliness, sad, life, society, pain, personal, weird, gothic, abstract

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Shaken

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 76 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 17 7:53 PM. In Abuse, Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Rose into re-flowering

  Vigorous rosebud
  untouched in lily-white dress

  by Lilian of Tilburg 42 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 22 11:02 AM. In Sad, Inspirational, Personal, Life, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Ignorance

  We are not the color of our skin, we are the souls that lie beneath the flesh.

  by eyesofanangel524 63 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 29 12:08 AM. In thoughts, feelings, personal, sad, society, life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• B e t r a y e l

  Betrayel
  Rapes like hate

  by kittykatface 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 19 5:29 PM 2006. In Weird, Sad, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• To Make You Happy

  Praying for help
  Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
  

  by The-Human-Stain 17 lines, 37 comments, on Oct 22 5:26 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Spiritual

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

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  PassionsPromise
  March 31
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  thank you for the gold in your contest, im quite surprised
  
  Congrats to all winners.
  
  Remember, "We are no longer silent...Be a voice, Be heard..."

by voodoo ink

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