Prewite Contest

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on April 2
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25
• Final notes:
  Ok sorry guys i couldnt comment everyones entry. I hardly got through reading them all. I of course have aa life other than commenting poems. if you did not get a comment but would still like one you can send me a message or soemthing with your poem title in it and i will comment it as soon as I get the chance. Everyone had really great entries. Thank you for entering.

Contest Winners

1. Queen of Darkness

   by Maxboy 22 lines, 59 comments, on Feb 3 11:14 PM. In Dark, Contest, Pain
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Class of 2008

   by August Starlight 23 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 1 1:46 AM
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Mr BIG

   Me and Me BIG Homies out ta get Ya skinny arse

   by Antipodi 30 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 21 8:28 PM. In Contemporary, Humor, Life, Society
   Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [94]

• A West Australian Daybreak

  by Shenton 13 lines, on Jan 6 8:13 PM. In Nature

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• revision of Peace at long last

  Alone in an abandoned and desolate hotel room
  sits an ancient and bone weary man.

  by trekkergirl 36 lines, 65 comments, on Mar 21 3:20 AM. In contest, pain, suffering, sad, thoughts, dark, angst

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• Locked in your lies

  All the joy that was you
  in my life

  by trekkergirl 31 lines, 39 comments, on Mar 17 9:12 AM. In Angst, poem

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• West Australian Morning

  by Shenton 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 6:22 AM 2007. In Haiku chain

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• Jack of All Trades, Master of None

  Well, I'm the rollin' stone,
  used to being alone,

  by The Angel in Black 58 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 14 3:09 PM

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• Days Of Old(Swap Quatrain)

  by Billbard 21 lines, 66 comments, on Aug 17 3:57 PM 2005. In Other

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• After The Rain(Rondelet)

  by Billbard 7 lines, 60 comments, on Jun 20 1:20 PM 2003. In Other

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• 4 a.m

  Lying in my bed,
  darkness surrounds me,

  by The-punk-princess 15 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 11 11:53 AM. In Dreaming, My own style, Lost in thought

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• Two Punk Lovers

  This is a story two punk lovers,
  lost is a whirl of drugs, fame, and alcohol.

  by The-punk-princess 45 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 21 11:26 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Dark, Suicide, My own style

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• Heartbeats and ethanol razors

  by Writing0Freedom 73 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 25 6:23 PM

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• The Future

  Future scares me
  So fragile it seems

  by Majija 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 12 4:55 PM 2008

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• Cleopatra

  Attractive smile plays on your lips and eyes.
  You make your choice and pick a handsome.

  by shiratikva 14 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 18 12:02 AM. In Love, Life, Death

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• Mina

  He takes revenge, Oh Mina…
  You tasted from his blood…

  by shiratikva 20 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 7 4:37 PM. In Dark, Spiritual, Inspirational

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• Kyoto is Tokyo...Just Scrambled

  Killing the silnce with
  Your cheap mufflers and cellphones

  by Heroesrox 10 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 27 11:17 PM. In Thoughts, Acrostics

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• my immortal

  There you are, yet again, you just walk on by, that glint in your eye as you start to look at me reminds me of the pain, of the love, and I

  by Justmenow 10 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 6 7:36 PM

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• [ there you are, your beautiful eyes twinkling in the light, you carry on past me with a beautiful s

  there you are, your beautiful eyes twinkling in the light, you carry on past me with a beautiful smile that takes my breath away, you keep

  by Justmenow 10 lines, 34 comments, on Jan 29 7:58 AM 2008. In Pain, Love

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• Liberation

  by spiritualangel 30 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 4 9:28 PM. In Redemption, Love, Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Contest

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• Fighting.

  Running
  falling

  by StillLovingYou 49 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 21 7:37 PM

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• That Terrible scary little lizard

  That scary little lizard over there
  You sure are little with a big scare

  by StillLovingYou 20 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 4 10:59 AM

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• What You Can't Say

  You may not say it
  But I know you do

  by L.Jay 27 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 11 7:47 PM 2006. In Love

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• The Land Called ‘Happiness’

  The colorful universe,
  Glibly dangling in the sky.

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 38 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 31 8:42 AM 2008

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• Tramps Like Us

  You and Me babe,
  Have got a lot to learn about love

  by L.Jay 10 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 9:57 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Dark

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• The Ghost of Christmas Past

  by zorman32 15 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 11 7:25 PM. In Personal

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• Nothing to be found

  She colored her world in black and white, a question with no answer
  She listened to the speechles birds and watched the nighttimes dancer

  by bookwrm1324 8 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 1 11:56 PM

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• Reality

  Existence stole my sanity, reality destroyed my dreams
  Love ripped me into pieces while pure hatred drowned my screams

  by bookwrm1324 11 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 16 11:59 PM

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• Fruitless Questioning

  Within a goblet gold, embarked upon a string,
  There stood a dim, daunted candle,

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 28 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 1 12:26 PM. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Military Wife

  Telephone rings
  your commander called

  by Honeydew 75 lines, 72 comments, on Jun 4 11:27 PM 2004. In Other, Love

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• Little precious one...

  So tiny but strong
  She holds on tightly.

  by Brigid-goddess 56 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 25 8:56 PM. In Thoughts, Other, My own style, Personal., Dedication, Children, Family

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• Internal Shadow

  She hangs her head,
  Midnight hair covering her pale face..

  by Brigid-goddess 28 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 14 1:27 AM. In Dark, Contest, Angst, Spiritual, Lost in thought, Sadness, Lost love, Self

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• Falling Spiders

  Dark mean shadows;
  Harsh white light;

  by XxWillow LeafxX 27 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 19 8:34 PM. In Life, Thoughts, Contest

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• Lady Water

  Bear the way of the water...
  For sweets are yonder....

  by XxWillow LeafxX 18 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 13 8:18 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Nature

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• My Only Love

  I don’t need a single carat of Gold
  Or a diamond to hold

  by Shuberth 15 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 6 9:18 AM 2008. In Love, Life, Personal, Hope, Thoughts, Romantic, Vow, Other, Self, Rhyme

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• Sounds

  Sounds are fighting down the winding hall
  Intermingling are their piercing cries

  by creative writer 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 27 10:16 PM. In Rondel of Mystery, Dark

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• Deafening silence

  I must try to explain this
  Without speaking

  by Simp 19 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 13 1:03 AM 2007. In Teenage thinking

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• Breathe

  I bleed onto paper
  When I cry, the story writes itself

  by Simp 21 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 8 11:24 PM 2007. In Teenage thinking

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• Depressed

  At night I lie in bed
  Staring into space

  by creative writer 39 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 9 8:49 PM 2008. In Sad, Angst, Dark, Life, Pain, Thoughts, Emo, Suicide, Teenage thinking, Teen issues

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• She Fantasizes About Pillows

  She fantasizes about pillows
  A big soft bed

  by xxxLizardKingxxx 29 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 1 11:54 AM 2008. In Personal, Love, Thoughts

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• 2 (The Arms of The Reaper)

  I would like 2 pleze!

  by Leech 39 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 1 11:00 AM

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• Last Night...

  Last night I had a dream,
  The sun shone down on me,

  by Leech 42 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 5 4:29 PM

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• samson.

  by heavenbird 150 lines, 32 comments, on Mar 12 11:11 PM

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• Ode to Keats

  Heart of melancholy hearts
  bidden on to death.

  by Aedara-Wren 47 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 19 5:18 PM

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• Tiny Souls As They Dissipate Upon The Walls Of The House Of Pain

  Manay children lves this nightmare and years pass and neihbors know they have children yet never question when they havent seen them past

  by storiesuntold 71 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 28 12:35 PM. In Lot children where were the neihbors and humanity

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• Before She Found Love She Loved Herself

  Love is not always a rose garden for it comes through hard work and understanding . To share your thoughts and embrace life as best frien

  by storiesuntold 31 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 27 7:44 PM. In Hope, Life, Love, Teenagers

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• 12pm and dressed to kill

  by lowercase prelude 27 lines, 26 comments, on Feb 25 12:51 AM. In Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Revenge, Other, Prose

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• iris

  by lowercase prelude 17 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 25 10:14 PM. In Life, Pain

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• The Burning Cards

  The fire of flames are
  Burning deep into the bridges

  by Time focus on Me 20 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 10 11:06 AM 2008. In Dark, Life, Anger, My life, Escape

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• The Box I Got

  This is the box I got
  Gray, clouded skies, rain threatening

  by Poesing 22 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 25 5:23 PM. In Contest, Life

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• Vacations of the Mind

  In the watered garden from the mind's mirage - an oasis forms where dreams are born and troubles float away like lemon drops out to sea.
  

  by Poesing 23 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 23 4:53 PM. In X x P O E S I N G X x

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• Once Upon A Time, I Killed You

  Once upon a time,
  I killed you,

  by lovingpoet 27 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 24 9:51 AM. In Dark, Fantasy, murder

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• I Love walikng In The Rain, Then No One knows That I am Crying

  I walk in the rain,
  it helps to ease up my pain,

  by lovingpoet 17 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 17 11:17 PM

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• Within the Midst of Angels

  For a moment you are happy
  Lost inside a peaceful dream

  by Rakerman1 34 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 13 5:57 PM 2005. In Fantasy, Sad

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• Poor Teardrop

  One single tear rolls down my face,
  It doesn't know just what to do.

  by Rakerman1 9 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 12 1:03 PM. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad

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• Love From Me To You

  Its those thoughts of you
  As I am writing today

  by Kristin103161 18 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 29 7:23 AM. In Life, Love, Personal, Thoughts, Message, Happiness, Sensual

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• Flutter

  by Kristin103161 9 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 23 8:40 PM. In Adult, Contest, Erotica, Life, Love, Nature

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• What is it that I seek again ?

  A rusted helmet drawn from the oubliette
  And a brown old overcoat that shelters,

  by The Phoenix Returns 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 5 9:26 PM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Contemporary

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• The Widow Bird (Glosa)

  Often in the legends have I heard,
  A heartrending tale of a lonely bird.

  by The Phoenix Returns 57 lines, 26 comments, on Jan 24 10:45 PM 2005. In Sad, Love, Dark

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• To Make You Happy

  Praying for help
  Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
  

  by The-Human-Stain 17 lines, 37 comments, on Oct 22 5:26 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Spiritual

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• Dark angels

  by Menna 20 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 26 10:25 PM. In Weird, Fantasy, Dark, Angst, Other, Personal

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• Simple Truth I suppose

  We sit in wait,
  wondering what the world will deliver.

  by Hate-And-Pain 27 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 15 3:11 AM 2008

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• Farewell

  Here you once sat staring at the stars,
  wondering what you would have changed,

  by Hate-And-Pain 22 lines, 22 comments, on May 5 11:25 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Thoughts

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• Trusting Disloyal Hands

  The wounds that never heal are the ones you take in the back. From those you thought you could trust. You’re belief in friendship has now b

  by Dark passenger 9 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 19 12:59 PM. In War, Hate, Anger, Death, Sad, Pain, Dark, Friend, Trust, Rage

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• What Once Was Past

  I’ll make the most of what comes. And the least of what goes away. I have spent too many years wondering what could have been.
  

  by Dark passenger 10 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 24 7:36 AM. In War, Sad, Pain, Dark, Death, Hate, Hope, Past, Hell, Chance

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• Soul Searching

  by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 23 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 14 11:13 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, noguest

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• Life in a Snow Globe

  My life is like a glass bottle adrift on the open seas
  

  by Poetic Rage 32 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 11:05 AM. In Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Other, Pain, Society

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• A Cardboard Box

  T h e - H u m a n - S t a i n

  by The-Human-Stain 18 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 28 1:00 AM. In Pain, Sad, Spiritual

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• The Moon is A Caring Friend

  by misshugglebugglez 24 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 5 4:20 PM

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• Walk in the Rain

  bla blal baflafdaslkfdfdsfoIA

  by misshugglebugglez 9 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 23 7:07 AM. In Nature, Love, Contest

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• You must...

  Dirt closely surveyed from where I am lying
  finding the courage, finding the trust

  by Lilian of Tilburg 40 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 28 9:27 PM

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• Into the daylight

  Into the daylight
  Tranquil, serene unshaded mountainsides

  by Lilian of Tilburg 25 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 15 6:53 PM. In Inspirational

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• one question

  by taywee13 35 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 22 7:55 PM. In Hope, Love, Life, Personal, Thoughts, Teenage thinking, Sad, Message

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• i never stopped loving you.

  Every time I see that photo album
  Just lying around in my room,

  by taywee13 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 31 9:29 PM. In Angst, Love, Sad, Personal, Pain

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• A Ballpoint Pen, Black

  Shivers down my spine,
  freezing my skin.

  by Mistress Masquerade 70 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 16 5:44 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Pain

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Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  Fade to Black-
  March 29
  Edit | Reply
  I noticed the only ones you commented on were ones that needed to put their names in the AN (apparently DIDNT read the rules) but then left another comment...but the rest you just looked at.
  
  Why?
• 
  T.o.r.t.u.r.e.
  March 29
  Edit | Reply
  because i asked one person to do it and thought it was only fair if everyone did.
• 
  DEAL xx WITH xx IT
  March 29
  Edit | Reply
  Iue done it but u only viewed
• 
  Justified Inc.
  March 30
  Edit | Reply

  Get over it!

  My goodness, the contest judge has 134 entries, and your complaining she hasn't commented on your poem? LOL
  Talk about narcissistic behavior! Plllllllllllllllllease! Let the poor judge have some time!
  
• 
  Fade to Black-
  April 2
  Edit | Reply
  I didnt care that she didnt comment mine, what i do care about is that this contest was rigged. Noticed a Friend won..we all know how that works...
  
  Ill make sure to stay away next time.
  
  
  -Karma
• • 
    T.o.r.t.u.r.e.
    April 2
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    For the record, I DID comment your poems. I'm sorry that I liked x-chaseitallaway-x's better than yours, not my fault her poem about MY graduating class appealed more to me than tragedy. Did you think that perhaps when I judged the poems that I wasn't in a sad mood? When I judge these contests, the poems that stick out in my mind the most are the winners. Yours didn't, and I don't like being accused of rigging a contest. x-chaseitallaway-x might be my friend, but don't take it out on me that she is a better writer than you.
  • • Fade to Black-
      April 2
      Edit | Reply
      wow...Issues maybe? Calm down its just the internet. Get over yourself.
    • • 
        T.o.r.t.u.r.e.
        April 2
        Edit | Reply
        Yes dear ... calm down. You didn't win. Don't accuse me cause you don't win something.
• Bob Fox
  April 4
  Edit | Reply

  Well

  If you are not going to comment on everyones poem that I think you should at least set a limit to the amount of pems you allow to be entered into your contest. But then again nothing surprises me here on AP with it is all about groupies & buddies.
• • 
    T.o.r.t.u.r.e.
    April 4
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    i did set a limit when i realized how many i was getting i set a limit of 150 and i really did intend to comment everyone. i just didnt geet everyone. i did say in my ending notes that if anyone wanted a comment they could ask for one. but i really did try to get everyone commented
• 
  August Starlight
  April 4
  Edit | Reply
  Leave her alone. You have a prewrite contest and see how many entries you comment.

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