This contest is inspired by redbarchettadrive's contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2441281
I came up with this poem for this contest before totally digesting the rules and it was from a different author that I came up with this.
I'd like for you to rework this poem and use it word for word, but worked differently.
This is the ultimate challange here. You can't use any words not already in this poem and you can use each word only once. I'm only offering a gold prize here because I think this is going to be an extreme challange to most (even though all here are magnificent poets). Truth be told I can't afford any more right now
but I don't want any donations either. I want just one magnificent poem that is a recreation from my poem that follows, and with no words added.
Slight variations in the already existing words are acceptable.
Best of luck! And I will extend this contest as I see fit.
Brightest blessings
Shantti
Spledid Saphire Seas
Breasts undulating devine poison
scents quivering memory of torrid beauty
hiss grandaur charms like
dipped ocean mists rarest ecstasy
sweet with passionate sins
veile cruelty caressing dreaming sphynx
like a sensuous sea secret.
Drunk moon alchemy seize bitter bliss
while hips caress the voluptuous swell
like azure satin thighs
a vampire's moan
on an immense evening.
Beggars night dreams
mirrors pleasures vast calm breath
to enfold candle veils
like ruby undulated adoration
depths drink souls stormy whimpers
splendid saphire seas.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 9
- Rewards: Gold: 500
- Final notes: You all did remarkable here! It was a hard contest and you all displayed unbelievably beautiful creativity with limited material to create with...
Best wishes everyone and thank you for entering....
Drowning,Dreaming stuck out as did all, but this one just had that umph I was looking for particularly.
Congradulations
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Splendid Sapphire Seas, sweet with passionate sins enfold candle veils.
Drunk moon alchemy seizes bitter bliss whose veiled cruelty caress• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5199411, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Am I allowed to correct the spelling errors in your poem?
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Also, it can be slightly tricky to make a poem using mostly nouns.
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Yes spelling errors may be corrected. I agree it can be tricky. Good luck
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I am working on this
do we have to use all the lines -
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You can rework anyway you like. If you use a form where there wouldn't be as many lines or might have more than that is all good. You may work it any way you need or chose
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There are several words used more than once in your poem. Can we use those more than once, especially if we slightly modify them?
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Yes you deffinately may use them more than once, modification of them is also acceptable.
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