Contest 2 of Suffering and Pain. Loss

Pain, Suffering from losses
I want to hear about your losses. This can be a love gone bad or lost, or anything that is or was important to you. Give me emotion! I want that more than anything. Make people cry or feel something strong when they read your poem.
You know the rules. Use spell check. Most of all have fun and good luck in the contest.

Michael

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on March 20
Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
Final notes:
This contest was very hard to judge. I had so many lovely poems. Thanks to all of you and I tried to give out as many points as I could for those who did not win a trophy for you all did a great job. Congrats! Thanks,
Michael

Contest Winners

Will I Marry Again

Will I marry again from lost loves past
My heart cries and withered in his death

by AngelBellerose 15 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 19 8:03 PM
Gold trophy winner

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Some Where

Some where I saw him
feeling his spirit

by AngelBellerose 16 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 19 9:04 PM
Silver trophy winner

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Widowers Song

Dripping from her tomb the sodden rain
derides the snow-white flowers on her wreath,

by patrick20traveler 15 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 26 5:00 AM
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Two Old Women

Two old women bickering as we walk
Growing old together never we would part

by smonte19124 19 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 28 1:35 AM 2006. In Sad

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [14]

1 - 14 of 14

Good bye

When the fiercely cruel girls tried to make me crumble
I plastered a smile to my face and pretended not to care.

by Writing0Freedom 40 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 2 9:14 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Goodbyes, Teenage thinking, Self, Loss, Longing, Friends

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
It's Your Fault

Its your fault
I want to die

by xxCodykinsxx 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 17 9:24 PM. In Sad, Lost love, Emo, Depressed, Suicide

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Because of Her

Its cause of her
my heart is broken

by xxCodykinsxx 12 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 11 6:30 PM. In Sadness, Depression, Lost love, Emo

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For Adrian

The Irish say if you die on Christmas Day, you go immediately to heaven.... I hope that's true.

by Sophie 1 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 19 8:13 PM. In Contest, Life, Love, Personal, Sad

• Commented on by judge.
Drowning

I am drowning
in silent screams.

by shardsofmemories 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 27 7:45 PM

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Decay

by Nienna Calmcacil 20 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 9 3:11 PM. In Pain, Betrayal, Wasted Love

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Transparency

You see right through me...but you don't know me anymore.

by Nienna Calmcacil 38 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 18 9:37 AM 2008. In Angst, Abandoned, Pain

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you'll live on

Candle

This woz life changing for me because me + dad were both suicidal.

by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 59 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 25 10:45 PM

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If you were alive again

If you were alive again
I would be there more for you

by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 34 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 16 4:26 AM

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2001 The Year I lost It

Sitting alone in the middle of the night trying to stop my mind
From going back eight years ago to the most painful of times

by smonte19124 34 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 12:16 AM. In Contest, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts

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Writing0Freedom
March 19
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can it be prose?
- MichaelSavage
  March 19
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  Yes it can be prose.
  Thanks
  Michael