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CONTEST '' TEARS''

 

Choose a statement and write for me- can use as a title or theme

1


' Your tears don't fall
they crash around me...'
Its from a band called Bullet for my Valentine- excellent song!

2

 

Tears are words which the heart can't say

 

3

 

tears falling to lips unkissed

 

4

I love walking in the rain, cause then no-one knows im crying

 

5

The one who loves you is the one who will make you weep

 

6

 

The souls would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears

 

7

I wish I was your teardrop

 


Rules
If adult- please label- don't want any complaints!!
No more then 40 lines please- have exams coming up so time is limited
Please dont respond to my comments untill the end of the contest
Try to respond to other poems in the contest- what goes around comes around!!

Write your option in the Notes section if you dont use it as a title.

 



Ok- what Im after
your thoughts, feelings, Can write in any style- Love dark though
Give me rawness and gutt wrenching emotion -
paint me a vivid image with the words has the canvas

 


Ok enjoy yourself- and remember- CAN WRITE ABOUT ANYTHING
the floor is yours

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 25
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Well the contest TEARS has finally been judged. I would like to apologise the the lateness- Uni work! You all made this contest worth hosting, every poem conveyed to me the many facets of tears and how we , has humans, use tears- from the death of a pet to the death of a relationship. Also the courage hidden beneath each poem sparkled and glistened agaisnt the sadness of each word. Thankyou for letting me read such great writes.
    and congrats to all the winners and honourable mentions- if I could give out more I would..
    thankyou thankyou
    Im honoured
    RareFlower - blessings and tissues to all of you

Contest Winners

  1. Hear My Tears
    Cloaked in a blanket of disappointment...
    by LovingPhoenix 14 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 16 5:31 PM. In Contest, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. You hurt, I hurt
    Your smile isn't reaching your eyes
    this time, no matter how hard you try.
    by Hope Angel 35 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 16 6:37 PM. In Contest, Personal, Sad, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The one who loves you is the one who will make you weep
    Each day passes and I’m in regret
    I loved and gave up The one Ill never forget
    by NickelleteXninja 24 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 18 11:22 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Tears Roll Down
    Dripping off my face,
    these memories of how your love
    by lowercase prelude 17 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 21 7:56 PM 2008. In Contest, Love, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Second Chance
    It was the fight that ended it all
    a relationship worth living without
    by Blissfullhatred 28 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 28 3:42 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Are You Here?
    Are you here?
    As i sit with my weary heart that aches so much,
    by nikoshiana 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 16 5:54 PM. In Loss, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Her Darkest Fantasy
    Undisclosed feelings too painful to express
    For fear of retritution.
    by Nymphetemine 27 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 16 4:43 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Comparative Tears
    by musicalmousie 23 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 16 8:19 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5150071, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  10. The Silence of Tears
    Words convey what speakers say.
    Tears deliver sermons in a quieter way.
    by GotLilt 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 19 8:03 PM. In Contest, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. I Love walikng In The Rain, Then No One knows That I am Crying
    I walk in the rain,
    it helps to ease up my pain,
    by lovingpoet 17 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 17 11:17 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. Her Heart Weeps
    by Kristin103161 34 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 11 9:11 PM. In Love, Erotica, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Sadness, Lost love, Loss
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Partake in the Light
    I love walking in the rain,
    cause then no-one knows im crying
    by Spock 9 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 16 6:39 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  14. Dew Drops
    ~Free verse~

    by Nickelspring 18 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 16 9:54 PM. In Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. no more tears to shed
    lost in life on the road of despair
    can't breathe it in because you sucked up the good air
    by ichigosama 21 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 18 10:56 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Society, Sad, Personal, Sadness, Longing, Anger, Angry
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [19]

1 - 19 of 19
  • My Nights Alone
    i lay awake at night
    as the voice in my head screams
    by Violent Glass 12 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 16 5:43 PM. In Pain, Life, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • dry your eyes x
    dry your eyes.
    dry your eyes now dont shed a tear,for you win some you lose some so dont fear.
    by loulouloob 5 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 16 5:34 PM
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Change
    Changes in the wind,
    in destinies cause
    by alligirl707 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 3 2:40 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I wish I was your teardrop
    sorrow sinking deep
    with indelible marks
    by Venugopal 24 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 11:31 PM. In Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Tears, Idle Tears
    / / When you came to us twelve years ago / You were a ball of wool / A toddler barely one month old / A breast sucking babe / And always full of play. / You took some time to shed / Some of your naughtiness
    by karabi 71 lines, 10 comments, on May 10 6:06 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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Comments

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  • Cant force beloved
    March 16
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    how do you get an adult poem from tears?


  • Blakthorn
    March 17
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    I want to write one, but... I just cant write as of now, not really in that good of a mood to write something this deep.


    • RareFlower
      March 19
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      YOU HAVE TO!!!

      please please enter!!!
      love Elle


      • Blakthorn
        March 20
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        I am sorry elle I just havent been in the best moods to write lately.
        love, mark

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