Make it dark, or painful.
Or sad or depressing.
Make me feel something when I read it.
Emotions,
or feel for you, who is writing it.
Please follow basic rules
Any style, any length.
Please use spell checker. Thank you.
If you enter more than once, link me to the other writes please. Simply for me not giving the same person gold and silver.
Point value will increase, I promise.
Have fun and get writing.
~~KitKat
Or sad or depressing.
Make me feel something when I read it.
Emotions,
or feel for you, who is writing it.
Please follow basic rules
Any style, any length.
Please use spell checker. Thank you.
If you enter more than once, link me to the other writes please. Simply for me not giving the same person gold and silver.
Point value will increase, I promise.
Have fun and get writing.
~~KitKat
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 5
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Sorry for delaying this so long everyone. I had no idea I was going to have so much going on when I started the contest.
Finally, I decided on winners. I viewed every entry, and I commented on most of them, excluding people with some multiple entries, or if I really had nothing to say towards the entry.
Everyone did a great job, a great great job in this contest. I was pleased with every write I received.
It was very hard to choose winners, all of the writes are so great.
Congrats to the finalists, and thanks again to everyone for entering my contest.
Contest Winners
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Crystalline raindrops
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Falling Deeper in the trench, Love's my battlefield
Crawling out restless, with still no will to wield• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Pale skin,
thin Lips,
barely there stomach,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
morning starts in the dark
getting up a grab my drinkby Dark Prince Chaos 43 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 10:08 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [60]
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Giving into the pain
Deafening screams take overby ley527 28 lines, 58 comments, on Dec 3 9:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dragged back from the depths
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It’s a wee six-lettered word
Full of anger, full of painby adolescente 33 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 12 8:32 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Everyone ignores me when I’m trying to say
I just wanna wish all of this pain awayby adolescente 66 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 6 5:59 PM. In Angst, Contest, Life, Pain, Sad, Frustration• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
So bite my fair fingers
They pluck only the stringsby Emmyb 30 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 2 10:51 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by SilentTearsOnceMore 39 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 7 4:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The invisible scars you’ve caused, you’ve caused this pain.
Unable to see the pain, the pain deep inside of her.by SimplyNoodle 9 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 12 9:42 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A survivor you were Smelling of catacombsby Isabel Cult 38 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 18 9:04 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Nienna Calmcacil 15 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 12 4:48 PM. In Shame• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You see right through me...but you don't know me anymore.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She couldn't scream.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your eyes are like ice: Gold that lost its warmth.by Nienna Calmcacil 25 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 18 4:19 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I saw his face...and it reminded me
of how things used to beby Walls-within 10 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 11:42 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Here I sit alone in the dark
Never knowing what lurks in the shadowsby Jepardy 32 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 6 7:31 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am alone here in the dark
This is the knife that left the markby Jepardy 54 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 6 9:33 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I never saw it coming
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This disease is still lingering,
Illusive and lonely.
by PerfectTonight 30 lines, 37 comments, on Oct 19 7:08 PM 2007. In Depression, Illness, Eating disorders, Lonliness, Self-Defeat• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Depressing state of mind
Ah the weary state of apathyby EternalFyre 78 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 8 7:31 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Theres a life
theres a lineby Dust of my soul 15 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 3 9:47 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I reach into my mouth
And reach into my soulby Legato Valentine 53 lines, on Mar 25 12:56 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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My eyes shower down
The remains of my soulby Legato Valentine 47 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 25 12:52 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Day after day he
Sits in his room.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stand alone,
In this shroud,by AnarchistXxXLove 22 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 23 8:27 PM• Commented on by judge. -
It was happening again,
What it was was life.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I listen to the rattle of his lungs and wonder if today will be the day he leaves me here and travels far above.by skye01 16 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 1 1:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The whispered prayers are rushed, stumbling overby Madison Mary 35 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 12 6:37 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by LilEmoPrincess 31 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 11 2:15 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was hot,
so hot the potatoe bugsby Kathryn Bowden 37 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 2 9:55 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I agreed to meet you on the outskirts
of town, but i didn't think that iby Xxnightmare21xx 47 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 8 3:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by DeadlyPoetic88 43 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 10 11:49 AM. In Adult, Abuse, Pain, Dark, Disgusting, My personal coping• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There is nothing better than to dance with a conflagration
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The air rots and it tastes of our deception.by IcySpearQueen 37 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 12 3:31 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There was a strange apathy swarming in the vodka bottle tonight.
It was a clichéd thing, yet still she downed the perfectly frosted bottle of loss.by Candy Morphine 20 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 2 12:52 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Faith lies strangled in the frozen attics of my mind.
Murdered in style, investigation pending..• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This is a different style.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A poem about a mother's love.by Adelaine 39 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 25 6:13 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Love, Dedication, Inspirational, Longing, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I hope the links in my A/N are the right ones... with me they worked.
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oh fun! if i can think of anything dark i will try to write something for you.
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Good luck
Good luck (not to the writers) but to the reader, she seems very busy and I hope all goes well and she finds time to read / not necessarily vote. Just that she reads them, and feels what was felt.
Well, good luck (lol)
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Thank you so much, I really do promise I am getting to it. Just way too much going on at once! Great to know that someone actually understands that...haha
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Just take your time. Not like I'm trying to suck up or anything, since I don't care about my poem getting any type of trophy because it's... Just not that good, and I know that (lol). But saying that because you seem like a nice person, and me... I can't stand back watching nice people having troubled times. Though you're absolutely probably not troubled, but you know what I mean.
Okay... I can stand back, I've been doing it for years. But it's hard on me lol.
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Awe, that I think made my day.
I am sure your poem is fabulous. Just so you know...
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