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can you take my breathe away

i want to see who can sweep me off my feet with a poem. i have been in som bad relationships and i wanna know what it feels like to be swept off my feet through poetry. so give me your best poems to win over my broken yet full of life heart. you are allowed one prewrite. but i would strongly like something orignal and from the heart. since i live off of feeling emotions and seeing beyone the mask people put up. good luck and i cant wait to read all your wonderful poems.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 15
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for entering!

Contest Winners

  1. by Whyitt U 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 9:51 AM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. You're words are like medicine--
    they heal me inside out.
    by xxRainbowDawnxx 29 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 2 7:52 AM 2008. In Personal, Stuey
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Dance for me, my love.
    by Zenda-Lokki 29 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 9 4:44 AM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Other, My own style, Lost in thought, Freewrite, Self
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. My love for you
    is stronger then
    by AngelsKissesJenna 30 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 4 6:51 PM. In Love, Life, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. The sweetness of your lips
    shall not go to waste
    by bluecollarlove 24 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 9 8:05 AM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • FollowingFate
    March 15
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    If you're interested, I JUST got done writing a poem titled: I Love You - it seems to be what you were looking for but I'm a few days too late


  • Whyitt U
    March 16
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    wow...thanks alot for the honor and the great contest...

    congrats to all who entered!

    wyattxxx