Emotionally Destroyed

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on April 2
• Rewards: Gold: 400
• Final notes:
  you guys did so awesome and it was hard to pick you guys and it was hard to decide who got 1st place, to mr you all are 1st im so impressed these were amazing great job to you all and thamkyou so much for entering these poems in my contest
  xXalyXx
  his emo teddybear

Contest Winners

1. Wept Like Rain

   I felt the roughness of your hands,
   where I didn't want them to be.

   by Sharitti 33 lines, 18 comments, on May 15 11:28 PM 2008. In Sad
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5120325, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. - I Thought Wrong Dad -

   by lost.and.alone 53 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 7 5:52 AM. In My own style, Family, Personal., Thoughts, Sad
   Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [77]

• Can't Take This

  Bury me with my memories
  In this house with petrol and a lighter

  by Crimson23 40 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 5 1:24 PM. In Pain, Dark, Lyrics

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• My Suicide, 1 and 2

  There are so many
  People that i know

  by Crazy-Dan 171 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 19 7:31 AM 2008

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• Loneliness, Medication & Some Dark Poems

  It might be because of the medication
  But the darkest poems have filled my pages

  by Crimson23 41 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 19 5:46 PM. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Dark, Lyrics, Depression, Emo, Religion, Loneliness, Alcohol

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• Alive But Dying

  My voice is truthful but my words are lying
  My spirit is resisting but my mind is complying

  by PorcelainSoul 36 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 6 9:16 PM. In Dark, Pain, Crying, Faking, Personal, My life

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• Wearing Scars

  I smile and pretend I'm okay
  When really I'm falling apart

  by PorcelainSoul 23 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 5 7:15 PM. In Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Self injury

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• The Razor Blade

  Sometimes,
  I feel so numb inside I cut my arms with razor blades;

  by PorcelainSoul 37 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 6 6:53 AM. In Cutting, Self injury, self harm, self mutilation, razor blade, pain, blood

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• No Shame In It

  I loved you so deeply
  So why did you leave me?

  by Priya1989 107 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 15 7:43 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Sing me a lullaby

  Sing me a lullaby
  Rock me gently to sleep

  by DarkAngel4689 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 31 8:44 PM. In Love, Pain, Personal

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• I have a dream

  I have a dream
  A fantasy

  by DarkAngel4689 28 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 31 8:40 PM. In Angst, Love

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• Cuts

  I didn’t cry today
  The blade cut smoothly

  by Jepardy 147 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 19 9:44 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Dark

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• 5-15-02

  I did it again..
  I cut myself again tonight…

  by Jepardy 89 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 5 7:12 PM

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• Blade Silver

  It's there
  Taunting me

  by Isolatedsouls17 36 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 6 8:27 PM. In Dark, Personal, Sad, Pain, Life, Thoughts

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• Dear my [[not so]] loving father;;

  All these things that run through my head
  I wish I could just say the words

  by JulietteArielle 18 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 1 9:55 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Sad

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• Anything to Kill Your Face

  Can you break this silence
  Shatter this nothingness

  by JulietteArielle 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 16 12:39 PM 2008. In Dark, Personal, Sad, Love, Life, Pain

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• liars

  I let you into my life
  thinking everything would be just fine.

  by gypsywitch0187 29 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 9 7:12 PM. In pain, anger, hate, personal, liars!

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• sorry

  i've realized the hard way
  that this isn't hollywood

  by JulietteArielle 32 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 1:09 AM. In Love, Life, Personal, Pain, Freewrite, Romance, Goodbyes

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• Broken Hearts And Other Pointy Objects

  by Anu-Nataraj 58 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 31 8:52 AM. In Freewrite, Angst, Pain, Thoughts, Sad, Hope, Love

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• ~Untitled~

  Her smiles were true.
  Never fake.
  She loved him.

  by XXheartbroken3XX 36 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 28 6:51 PM 2008. In Sad, Love, Lies.

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• Holding On

  Why do I continue
  to feel this way?

  by Shadow Keeper 33 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 24 9:07 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Depression, Emo, Suicide

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• Bleeding In Snow

  Snow falls, so beautiful, gracefully landing on the ground
  But eventually the snow will melt away

  by BrokenHeartsInVain 17 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 9:16 PM. In Pain, Angst, Sad, Dark, Emotional, Depression

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• A Dozen Wilted Forget-Me-Nots

  I promised I'd never forget you
  That you would always be in my heart

  by benjamrom 6 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 8 1:42 PM

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• Nothingness Spirit

  No one knows I am here, trapped.
  Crying, weeping.

  by EmO lOvE 12 20 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 2 5:42 PM. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Death, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Depressed, Suicide

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• numb.

  by starlight--x 46 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 16 12:36 PM

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• Loneliness

  The life I used to know is now gone.
  I have to start over.

  by EmO lOvE 12 21 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 2 5:50 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Death, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Depressed, Suicide

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• Bitter Poison and Blood So Sweet

  But eventually, Our bodies will rot,
  Our blood will wash away

  by BrokenHeartsInVain 18 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 16 10:19 PM. In Angst, Pain, Sad, Society, Gore, Blood, Murder, Poison, Emo

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• Until I Die [My Heart Will Wither]

  Houses abandoned, dirty needles where children once played
  The deserted houses are my soul, empty and cold.
  

  by BrokenHeartsInVain 19 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 7:57 PM. In Sad, Depression, Cry, Life, Thoughts, Pain

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• - Broken Suicide Angel

  by Strawberry Wolf 49 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 14 3:46 PM

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• f.u.c.k y.o.u

  im so alone,
  i've always hated this feelin,

  by Mademokid 6 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 15 3:03 PM. In Life, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Lost in thought

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• I Silence You

  Erase you
  To faint blue

  by chael 15 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 30 2:28 AM

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• You All Smile

  Wish upon a star,
  Watch it fall

  by Angelix 27 lines, on Mar 20 9:28 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad

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• My Broken Heart

  I wanted you from the start I gave you all of me

  by Janjan 19 lines, 1 comment, on May 30 4:00 PM 2008. In love

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• Piercing The Rain

  Tiny nettles intertwining my fingers with my soul
  Numb appendages of what used to be truth

  by Amandainlove 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 11:17 PM

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• Heart's Crucifix

  Empty spaces where a heart once was
  Filled with tears of one thousand saints

  by Angelix 13 lines, on Mar 17 8:03 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Love, Life, Dark

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• dancing with death

  Alone in a ballroom filled with people dancing The music plays softly in the background

  by frado 30 lines, on Dec 22 7:34 PM 2007. In Life

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• My Rock

  You were the backbone and mentor in my happy childhood.
  You are my fortitude and shield in my adulthood.

  by Nermin Nazim 30 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 5 7:52 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Freewrite, Humanity, My own style

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• I get it, but I hate it

  I have been thinking on you
  you always stay true

  by theVIP 16 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 2 6:28 PM. In personal, pain, sad, thoughhts, hope, love, life, other, weird, dark

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• Suicide Part II

  How to say goodbye,
  Or even should I?

  by Janjan 18 lines, on Mar 20 2:04 PM. In Suicide

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• crushed by loss

  the sadness topples over me
  I cry

  by theVIP 24 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 15 10:40 AM. In thought, weird, other, sad, pain, loss, love, life, teenage thoughts, lyrics

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• Crying

  Crying Crying Crying blood
  my tears no longer the same

  by bladesofblood 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 9:16 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

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• why I wrote this poem

  I put my head down
  for the first time in my life

  by the wrong joke 27 lines, on Mar 20 6:32 PM. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• Fool For Love

  Spewing vitriol, disguised as love,
  that shatters my heart, like an

  by graybeard 11 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 12 9:56 AM

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• Taken in

  As the paint chips from her porcelain face, / She thinks back to all she'd like to erase; / Broken promises, empty threats / A mind plagued

  by -JuLz- 19 lines, 23 comments, on May 13 5:15 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Love

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• Paint My Wrist Red And Color My Eyes Black

  I'm tired of living this so called life
  I'm tired of all the pain on the inside

  by duckonahockeypuck 18 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 17 6:57 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Please let me die

  I run to my room and lock the door.
  I just can't take the pain anymore.

  by Shelby K 28 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 8 12:09 PM. In Thoughts, Emo, Depressed, Teenage thinking

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• God Save the Queen

  All too much mainstream
  God bless Fear, our Queen

  by St. Anarchy 22 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 17 12:21 PM. In Dark, irony, satire, other, personal, suicide, society, thoughts, weird, gothic, abstract

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• do you remember?

  do you remember me?
  you said you loved me

  by ilovE him 28 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 19 11:17 PM. In Lost love, Depressed, Angry, Personal, Love, Pain, Depression, Sadness

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• Breathe

  She sits down as the tears start falling
  Hard to breathe, her heart keeps stalling

  by jessifer1792 13 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 31 9:17 PM 2008. In Lost love, Freewrite, Longing

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• Fading

  its cold
  its dark

  by speakno3vil 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 6:28 PM

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• The Innocent

  Alone in dark betrayal,
  The images are crimson,

  by Mow 31 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 4 6:13 PM 2008

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• "Inside These Walls"

  inside these walls,
  there's many secrets.

  by TexasMomma 36 lines, 36 comments, on Dec 24 4:07 AM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Cheapened

  You can’t ever undo the devastation caused by words uttered without thought,
  Or worse still, reverse the damage done by your indifference

  by -JuLz- 51 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 26 8:04 PM 2008. In Sad, Life, Love, Personal

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• Shattered Dreams

  I’m stuck; trapped in this box of nostalgic moonlight
  Wallowing in the debris of my shattered dreams.

  by -JuLz- 23 lines, 29 comments, on Jul 14 10:09 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark

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• Etched in flesh.

  I lay in ruin; Pain claims my being;
  Eternity mocks me, cruel and demeaning.

  by heavenbird 25 lines, 24 comments, on Jan 9 4:19 AM

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• samson.

  by heavenbird 150 lines, 32 comments, on Mar 12 11:11 PM

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• decay.

  nothing lasts forever.
  

  by heavenbird 63 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 31 12:41 AM

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• I Didnt Mean.....

  I didnt mean
  to hurt you

  by shardsofmemories 11 lines, on Mar 1 1:31 PM

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• cant take it anymore

  Life
  I can’t take it anymore

  by Shelby K 17 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 14 6:14 PM. In thoughts, pain

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• my life is hell

  have you ever had to watch ur mom cry wishing she was dead have you ever had to hear ur dad yell at ur mom and watch her die inside

  by frado 25 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 10 2:16 PM 2007

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• The night that has no morning

  hopes crushed
  eyes burning

  by theVIP 26 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 19 9:23 PM. In contest, personal, other, weird, life, hope, thoughts, love

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• Try to Understand

  Go ahead - Keep telling me to stop.
  Let me know how deeply I'm hurting myself

  by IcySpearQueen 47 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 12 6:21 PM 2008

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• A Date With Death

  I may have a date with death.
  He said he wanted to take me out.

  by Trapped Destruction 34 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 7 2:39 PM

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• Note to the depressed

  if your depressed you need to read this....

  by Shelby K 34 lines, on Mar 12 7:54 PM. In sad, thoughts

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• another DAY :((

  I speak, but no one hears / I tremble with all my fears / I cry...the tears from my eyes...they flow / But no one cares, because they don't know / I keep my secrets, and pretend that I'm okay. / I pray...to never ag

  by frado 19 lines, on Jun 24 3:15 PM 2007. In Sad

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• Silence (Hybridanelle)

  Silence could be more deafening than the thunder
  The sword of silence has torn my world asunder

  by The Phoenix Returns 71 lines, 16 comments, on May 22 1:46 AM 2005. In Sad, Love

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• Lonely

  I feel so lonely. It's an empty
  feeling that supposedly closes

  by Ice Queen 128 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 9 4:31 PM. In Pain, Lyrics

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• Suicide Part I

  Sitting here
  Feeling no fear

  by Janjan 16 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 1:57 PM. In Suicide

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• Scars from You

  You tell me that you love me
  And I was almost dumb enough to believe

  by duckonahockeypuck 36 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 27 11:13 AM 2006. In Love, Dark

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• Indigo.

  Fornote-- i think this topic was ill advised. you sound like a kid who actually has no problems, and are on of those emos, and create your

  by Run Rhen Run 50 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 11:22 AM. In Sad, Pain, Personal, Love, Life

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• your wish

  im standing here
  on the edge of a rocky cliff

  by ilovE him 28 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 3 5:50 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Pain, Friendship, Depression, Suicide, Self, Teenage thinking

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• Pain

  I'm in so much pain,
  remembering the past,

  by joleahe 12 lines, on Jan 20 6:11 PM

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• somewhere there is love

  I never really knew what love was or could be without being hit or abused by others. Finding out young that life was never going to be hand

  by maryjanes 28 lines, on Mar 20 9:53 PM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal

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• Infliction

  Heeding the tone in your eyes brings me fear
  As my bones recollect pain inflicted

  by Viyanna Rosemarie 31 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 3:42 PM. In Contest, Personal, Angst, Abuse, Life, Sad, Dark, Thoughts

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• blood tears

  I cry crimson cries
  and try with all

  by xXx-lil-ms-sunshine 12 lines, on Mar 8 11:24 AM. In Abuse

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Comments

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• 
  xXemo-teddybearXx
  March 7
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  im so impressed with this contest and my last
  all your poems are amazing
  i love them all
  although some just dont go with my topic
  nobdy get upset if i remove you from my contest
  but anyway you guys are awesome
  xXalyXx
  his emo teddybear
• • 
    Run Rhen Run
    March 21
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    you shouldnt have made such a broad topic. look how many of entries you have and yet so many you havent read. how awful.
• 
  xXemo-teddybearXx
  March 7
  Edit | Reply
  STOP ASKING WHY I REMOVED YOUR POEMs
  xXalyXx
  his emo teddybear
• 
  Re-invention
  March 8
  Edit | Reply
  sorry to be a pest, but why was my poem removed from your contest?

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